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Blind (Chap 14)
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“You’re so beautiful…” that line came out of nowhere. Well not really, it was from the bottom of my heart.
“You don’t look bad yourself too Bette.” She smiled happily and blushing intensely.
I leaned in to hug her… oh my gosh, I missed hugging her so much, she is just so soft and huggable… when was the last time I really hugged her? In the hospital when I first got my sight back? Oh wow, time sure flies at the same time. And she smelled so nice too… I couldn’t let her go…
Tina
She was leaning in with her arms wide open, yey, I’d been waiting for her to hug me for a long time, hmm… maybe that was why I craved for her touch so much, and did I just molest her last night with her shirt ridden up and all? Oh my, but I’m not sorry. I wanted to drown in this hug… melt into her and becoming into one with her. I leaned in too and hug her tightly like I never wanting to let go… she feels so good… the world had gone at that moment.
After a little while… she moved to let go of the hug… but I hold onto her tighter…
“Tee, erm… as hard as this can be… we’re going to be late for the restaurant reservation…” she said but she didn’t try to push away anymore.
“But it feels so good now…” I tried to pout but she couldn’t see it.
She chuckled and I could feel her body vibrated into mine as well… oh gosh… this is so turning me on… then I felt her poking on my ribs softly…
“C’mon Tee, lets go… we can do that again anytime later…”
“Really? Ok…” I turned into my apartment to grab my stuff then we were on our way to the restaurant.
I kept on stealing a glance or two at her when she was driving, she looked so calm and… lovely…how corny could I be.
“Seeing anything you liking?” Oppsy, caught in the act, I just smiled and leaned back and relaxed.
The dinner was pleasant and the food was really great, I took a spring roll in my fingers ready to feed her.
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No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*