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Blind (Chap 14)
Bette
I sat in the car… 6.30pm… great…. That was just how eager I was… I couldn’t sit still the whole afternoon, I’d wished that the time would go faster to 7pm… then at last 6pm, I tried to prepare myself as slowly as I could, but still, there I was, sitting in the parking lot outside Tina’s apartment at 6.30pm, how the hell did I get there so soon? That just proved that how time had been so slow. I turned on the radio and sang to a few songs loudly to release my tension…
Finally, 15 minutes before 7pm, I got out from the car, locked it, and checked every door was locked… well, just to spend some time off… then walked slowly and calmly on my wobbly legs to the elevator… tried to wait patiently for the elevator to arrive without attempting to push on the button more than once. I watched the number and seemed like the elevator was stopping at each and every floor… that was when my nerve was kicking in… I pushed on the button 3 more times roughly… like it would help?
The lift took forever to reach Tina’s, when it finally arrived; I started to rehearse my line to greet Tina when she opened the door… ‘Hi Tee…’ then lean in for a friendly hug… yea that would be nice… hmm…
I rang the bell, straightening my shirt and counted to ten… when the door did not open, I rang again, then there she was, the door opened slowly to reveal more of Tina’s, I didn’t know why I just stopped breathing automatically every time she came into my sight. After gaining my sight back, I would not take anything I see for granted anymore… I appreciate everything I see, and I discovered everyone has a beauty within him or her if you watch closely… but most of all, my Tee… I just have to stop all other body function just to take in her beauty… which would then ignite my heart pumping…
Automatically my eyes roaming the whole of hers… I caught her doing the same too, but I decided to just let her know I really do appreciate her beauty. When I looked up to her eyes, I straight away lost in her hazel eyes, forgotten my lines to greet her… I thought I saw her mouth moving, I snapped back to reality…
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(66 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*