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Would She? Part 11
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Previously
Angelica told Tina this while on the way to the airport. They were just waiting for her to board the plane.
“I will baby. It’s just going to be hard being here alone, you know. This was supposed to be me and Henry’s time together. This will be the first time away from you all.”
“Mom, you need this time to yourself. Once again mom, we aren’t babies anymore.”
“You all will always be my babies,” Tina said.
Tina kissed her daughter bye and turned to head back to the hotel. Tina didn’t want to be alone.
Alone meant thoughts of her. Alone meant no distractions from her. Alone meant longing for her. Alone meant questions.
As she exited the airport, Tina stopped dead in her tracks. She couldn’t move. Was her mind playing tricks on her? Was she really feeling this? Her hands began to shake. She began to sweat. Could this be? Bette?
Chapter 11
This is what Tina was afraid of. Being alone meant all her thoughts would only belong to one person in the world, a person she loved but also hated. She continued to look around, but no Bette. How could that be? Her scent is so strong! Is she here on the island, or is it just my imagination? These are the questions Tina asked herself.
That scent took her back to her first time really pleasing Bette. It was some time after they met at the gallery. Bette didn’t want to rush her or force anything upon her and was very patient. It was Tina who wanted so much to please Bette.
Tina was never a selfish lover and was unsure how she would measure up against all the other women Bette had been with. Bette had invited her over for dinner, and that’s when Tina made up her mind this was the night.
Tina arrived a little early, so dinner wasn’t ready. She sat in the kitchen watching Bette cook. She wanted to tear off Bette’s clothes and take her right on the kitchen table. Instead she took a deep breath, struggling to control herself. She’d wanted Bette all afternoon, barely able to wait until she finished cooking dinner.
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Definitely worth the wait! Ooh, what’s next? An updated version of that scene? Please don’t make us wait so long between posts, baby, and I’ll do the same!
Lets see how you make them see each other. How can Tina still be angry with what happen ove such a long time. Let there be peace. thanks
Wow…it’s a shame that she still has those questions 25 years later…somebody should have bought the subject up then lives wouldn’t have been ruined. Tina needs to find a way to face those demons because if they do reconcile…the questions will still be there. I love that they have a powerful connection that they know when each other is present. Keep posting.
hottttttttttttttt longer tina stop
I’m almost scared for them to see each other after so long. Will their forever love come thru or all the hurt and anger of so many years win out….
whoa
=O~~~~ That’s pretty much my comment. lol
sigh…I love it when the connection between two people reaches beyond the norm, so deep and special that it can only be sensed between them and them only. I hope Bette can recognize the back of Tina’s head bobbing up and down as she stomps off
You’re killin’ me Michellia, absolutely killin’ me.
Tina turn around.,
I can’t tell whose slicker? Me or Bette ;-)))) Wonderful chapter as usual. I like how you capture my attention, mind and soul, into your story. I feel as if I am a part of it and enjoy every minute of this wonderful adventure. To the special someone in your life, “She is one lucky woman”. Next chapter please. Like now ;-))))
Well that was HOT and HOTTER and very very very nice. But I must agree with others what is wrong with Tina’s mind that she hasn’t ever moved beyond her resentment in 25 years ??? You gotta worry about a woman with that level of stuckness.
Damn thats hot and awesome. Now let see if they see each other, hope they did!!!!!
oh wow, coincidentally I pm’ed you yesterday…I so want to see them reunited on this holiday…today’s post? That was beautiful…of course T has those questions???but 25 years later?? please let their love be BIG enuff to get them thru this…asap please??!!!
wow just wow you did it again sweetie, it was very well worth the wait. But like evryone else says how is it Tina still has these questions after such a long time? Please post soon and let us find out thanks
your killing me here… loving this… i hope tina also turns around…
As I’ve always said, their sex life was always the bomb; but past the bedroom what’s left. 25 years later, Tina has said it herself, there is still so many questions surround by hate; I don’t call that a love connection. Ok, I’d love for Tina to turn around RIGHT now and see Bette; Baby, are you going to have them miss each other like 2 ships that pass in the night? OR are you going to make their “connection” a reality? Either way, PPS!!!!! Too my special someone – ILU 2
Come on!!! U are killing me. Please let Bette call out to Tina. I don’t care if they fight or cruse each other out just please let them SEE each other. WHY IS TINA STILL HOLDING ON TO THE DRAMA AND HURT FEELINGS AFTER 25 YEARS. FUCK she has been with a DUDE for the last 25. I would think Bette should be the one ANGER! Please post soon. After reposting I thought we would be farther along the reunion. Beautiful fic. Please hurry w/post!!!
What a beautiful expression of love. May their deep connection overcome fear and pain.
Wow! little speechless!
No matter what IC does to them in my mind they will always be soulmates. Thank your friend for giving you some inspiration. Come on, Mich…post soon.
SO, what happens? Hey Mich come back and put me out of my misery!
This is crazy, the tension is unbelievable.
You just continue to amaze. That was awesome. I love the fact that they are still so connected after so many years. Please post for us again..very soon.