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Would She? Part 11
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“Oh God yes, Tee. Oh God, yes!”
“Then come for me baby.”
Tina bit down on her clit and tickled Bette’s spot. Bette’s thighs started shaking as Tina pressed on her stomach to go a little deeper. Deeper to make it last a little longer. Tina wanted to stay inside Bette as long as she could, never wanting to leave.
“Is this my pussy, Bette?”
Bette could hardly speak. She was caught up in the feeling overtaking her mind, body and spirit.
“Is this my pussy, Bette?” Tina asked again louder.
“Yes baby, this is yours.”
“Mine, forever?”
“Yes…..goddamn…….yes.”
Tina placed her mouth back around Bette’s clit. She sucked on it hard, pulling the skin back and forth over the hard nub.
Bette could no longer fight what was going on. She had been very careful up to this point not to fall in love with a straight woman. Yet this woman between her legs made it impossible.
Little explosions turned into bombs from her toes to the crown of her head.
“oh………my……god tee……just like that baby……don’t stop…please don’t stop.”
Tina quickened the pace and went deeper.
“Uhh…….fuck………I’m cumming………I’m fucking cum….Tee…..”
Tina felt her fingers getting wetter and pulled in deeper. When she noticed Bette’s body jerking she knew she had done it. She knew she had pleased the one person that mattered, the one to be forever a part of her.
When Bette’s breathing calmed, Tina slowly removed her fingers. Tina licked them dry and licked around Bette’s very swollen lips. She slid up beside Bette to hold her in her arms. Bette just lay there, still shaking, and tears claimed their eyes because they felt safe in their love. And they knew it would forever be this way between them.
“I love you Tina,” Bette whispered in Tina’s ear.
Back to the present
Tina stood there in the middle of the airport. She became angry. If she loved me as she said, why did she cheat on me? Why did she hurt me so? Why in the fuck did you mess things up between us, Bette?
Tina always returned to those questions. She walked out of the airport right past Bette, whose back was turned. Although in the middle of a conversation with the porter, something distracted Bette and made her heart jump.
Something powerful made her turn.
TBC
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Definitely worth the wait! Ooh, what’s next? An updated version of that scene? Please don’t make us wait so long between posts, baby, and I’ll do the same!
Lets see how you make them see each other. How can Tina still be angry with what happen ove such a long time. Let there be peace. thanks
Wow…it’s a shame that she still has those questions 25 years later…somebody should have bought the subject up then lives wouldn’t have been ruined. Tina needs to find a way to face those demons because if they do reconcile…the questions will still be there. I love that they have a powerful connection that they know when each other is present. Keep posting.
hottttttttttttttt longer tina stop
I’m almost scared for them to see each other after so long. Will their forever love come thru or all the hurt and anger of so many years win out….
whoa
=O~~~~ That’s pretty much my comment. lol
sigh…I love it when the connection between two people reaches beyond the norm, so deep and special that it can only be sensed between them and them only. I hope Bette can recognize the back of Tina’s head bobbing up and down as she stomps off
You’re killin’ me Michellia, absolutely killin’ me.
Tina turn around.,
I can’t tell whose slicker? Me or Bette ;-)))) Wonderful chapter as usual. I like how you capture my attention, mind and soul, into your story. I feel as if I am a part of it and enjoy every minute of this wonderful adventure. To the special someone in your life, “She is one lucky woman”. Next chapter please. Like now ;-))))
Well that was HOT and HOTTER and very very very nice. But I must agree with others what is wrong with Tina’s mind that she hasn’t ever moved beyond her resentment in 25 years ??? You gotta worry about a woman with that level of stuckness.
Damn thats hot and awesome. Now let see if they see each other, hope they did!!!!!
oh wow, coincidentally I pm’ed you yesterday…I so want to see them reunited on this holiday…today’s post? That was beautiful…of course T has those questions???but 25 years later?? please let their love be BIG enuff to get them thru this…asap please??!!!
wow just wow you did it again sweetie, it was very well worth the wait. But like evryone else says how is it Tina still has these questions after such a long time? Please post soon and let us find out thanks
your killing me here… loving this… i hope tina also turns around…
As I’ve always said, their sex life was always the bomb; but past the bedroom what’s left. 25 years later, Tina has said it herself, there is still so many questions surround by hate; I don’t call that a love connection. Ok, I’d love for Tina to turn around RIGHT now and see Bette; Baby, are you going to have them miss each other like 2 ships that pass in the night? OR are you going to make their “connection” a reality? Either way, PPS!!!!! Too my special someone – ILU 2
Come on!!! U are killing me. Please let Bette call out to Tina. I don’t care if they fight or cruse each other out just please let them SEE each other. WHY IS TINA STILL HOLDING ON TO THE DRAMA AND HURT FEELINGS AFTER 25 YEARS. FUCK she has been with a DUDE for the last 25. I would think Bette should be the one ANGER! Please post soon. After reposting I thought we would be farther along the reunion. Beautiful fic. Please hurry w/post!!!
What a beautiful expression of love. May their deep connection overcome fear and pain.
Wow! little speechless!
No matter what IC does to them in my mind they will always be soulmates. Thank your friend for giving you some inspiration. Come on, Mich…post soon.
SO, what happens? Hey Mich come back and put me out of my misery!
This is crazy, the tension is unbelievable.
You just continue to amaze. That was awesome. I love the fact that they are still so connected after so many years. Please post for us again..very soon.