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Would She? Part 11
Tina knew what she was doing. She knew this slow torture would only make the outcome more intense. She licked up and down Bette’s inner lips, back and forth…back and forth until Bette started shaking. Tina placed both of Bette’s legs over her shoulders, loving the sight before her.
Tina touched the tip of her tongue to Bette’s center, enjoying every drop of her slippery essence. She entered slowly, came out, then back in. Bette started following her rhythm. Tina went in as far as she could, then came all the way out.
Bette slammed Tina’s head between her legs, meaning no more fooling around. Tina got the message. Her tongue made big deep circles on the insides. She could feel Bette’s muscles taking her in, massaging her tongue. Tina pulled out and ran her nipple up and down Bette’s clit. Around her slick lips. She entered her hard with one finger.
This caused Bette to grab the headboard as Tina continued to go in and out. When she pulled out she traced her finger around Bette’s slick lips. She reentered her with that wet finger while taking her clit into her mouth. Tina sucked her clit at the moment her finger entered Bette.
“Damn!” Bette screamed.
Tina inserted another finger while picking up the pace. Bette noticed the sheets getting slick beneath them. Tina added a third finger, feeling Bette tighten around her.
This caused both of them to moan and be more deeply connected on so many levels. Tina was connected to Bette’s heart and heard and felt its beat on her hand, in her mouth; the whole room seemed filled with Bette’s heartbeat.
Tina went as fast as she could, hypnotized by Bette’s scent. That scent was always with her and could never be forgotten. She inhaled Bette whenever she said her name or felt her or dreamt of her.
Bette was almost there.
“Come for me, let me love you with everything I have, Bette. With everything that I am.”
Tina curved her fingers, finding Bette’s spot. She began to touch it with every stroke. Each stroke was firm, strong, and deep. Just the way Bette liked it. Just the way she wanted it.
“Can you feel me, baby?” Tina asked.
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Definitely worth the wait! Ooh, what’s next? An updated version of that scene? Please don’t make us wait so long between posts, baby, and I’ll do the same!
Lets see how you make them see each other. How can Tina still be angry with what happen ove such a long time. Let there be peace. thanks
Wow…it’s a shame that she still has those questions 25 years later…somebody should have bought the subject up then lives wouldn’t have been ruined. Tina needs to find a way to face those demons because if they do reconcile…the questions will still be there. I love that they have a powerful connection that they know when each other is present. Keep posting.
hottttttttttttttt longer tina stop
I’m almost scared for them to see each other after so long. Will their forever love come thru or all the hurt and anger of so many years win out….
whoa
=O~~~~ That’s pretty much my comment. lol
sigh…I love it when the connection between two people reaches beyond the norm, so deep and special that it can only be sensed between them and them only. I hope Bette can recognize the back of Tina’s head bobbing up and down as she stomps off
You’re killin’ me Michellia, absolutely killin’ me.
Tina turn around.,
I can’t tell whose slicker? Me or Bette ;-)))) Wonderful chapter as usual. I like how you capture my attention, mind and soul, into your story. I feel as if I am a part of it and enjoy every minute of this wonderful adventure. To the special someone in your life, “She is one lucky woman”. Next chapter please. Like now ;-))))
Well that was HOT and HOTTER and very very very nice. But I must agree with others what is wrong with Tina’s mind that she hasn’t ever moved beyond her resentment in 25 years ??? You gotta worry about a woman with that level of stuckness.
Damn thats hot and awesome. Now let see if they see each other, hope they did!!!!!
oh wow, coincidentally I pm’ed you yesterday…I so want to see them reunited on this holiday…today’s post? That was beautiful…of course T has those questions???but 25 years later?? please let their love be BIG enuff to get them thru this…asap please??!!!
wow just wow you did it again sweetie, it was very well worth the wait. But like evryone else says how is it Tina still has these questions after such a long time? Please post soon and let us find out thanks
your killing me here… loving this… i hope tina also turns around…
As I’ve always said, their sex life was always the bomb; but past the bedroom what’s left. 25 years later, Tina has said it herself, there is still so many questions surround by hate; I don’t call that a love connection. Ok, I’d love for Tina to turn around RIGHT now and see Bette; Baby, are you going to have them miss each other like 2 ships that pass in the night? OR are you going to make their “connection” a reality? Either way, PPS!!!!! Too my special someone – ILU 2
Come on!!! U are killing me. Please let Bette call out to Tina. I don’t care if they fight or cruse each other out just please let them SEE each other. WHY IS TINA STILL HOLDING ON TO THE DRAMA AND HURT FEELINGS AFTER 25 YEARS. FUCK she has been with a DUDE for the last 25. I would think Bette should be the one ANGER! Please post soon. After reposting I thought we would be farther along the reunion. Beautiful fic. Please hurry w/post!!!
What a beautiful expression of love. May their deep connection overcome fear and pain.
Wow! little speechless!
No matter what IC does to them in my mind they will always be soulmates. Thank your friend for giving you some inspiration. Come on, Mich…post soon.
SO, what happens? Hey Mich come back and put me out of my misery!
This is crazy, the tension is unbelievable.
You just continue to amaze. That was awesome. I love the fact that they are still so connected after so many years. Please post for us again..very soon.