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Would She? Part 11
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Tina got up from the table and stood right beside Bette.
“Dinner will have to wait. I hunger for what‘s ripe and right in front of me.”
Bette turns to stare at Tina, who has the hungry look of a hunter about to devour her prey. Bette’s heart skipped a beat. Was she ready for this? Damn she better be, Bette thought, knowing she couldn’t control herself any longer.
Their clothes lay in little piles from the kitchen to the bedroom. Bette was trying to remain patient, understanding and supportive. She knew this was Tina’s first time taking the lead. Bette really had wanted to snatch off everything and taste Tina the minute she walked through the door.
“Do you want to taste me Tina?” Bette asked as they reached the room.
“Yes.” Tina whispered while licking her way up Bette’s neck.
“Then eat me, baby.”
Bette lay down on the bed completely naked. She looked up into Tina’s eyes.
“Do I have your permission to slowly slide you down the bed?” Tina asked nervously.
At first Bette thought Tina was playing. When Tina moved to the end of the bed and gently grabbed Bette’s ankles, she got the hint and moved. Bette acted reluctant but from her breathing, Tina knew Bette’s anticipation was as strong as hers.
Tina started by licking around Bette’s navel, which made her giggle.
“Please open your legs wider,” Tina instructed Bette.
Bette’s breathing became heavier as Tina got on her knees, her finger softly creating a path from inside Bette’s ankle, up to her knee to the top of her thigh. Bette started to moan softly and Tina smelled her scent that always drove her crazy and pushed out thoughts of everything but Bette.
Tina’s tongue traced where her finger had gone and ended at the top of Bette’s thigh. Bette started to move toward Tina but this was on Tina’s time. She ran her tongue up the other leg on the inside and blew on Bette’s clit. Bette was growing quickly and becoming impatient. She had waited long enough for Tina.
Tina touched the tip of Bette’s clit with her tongue, causing her to jump.
“I’ll pay you back for this, Tee” Bette moaned as she arched her back.
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Definitely worth the wait! Ooh, what’s next? An updated version of that scene? Please don’t make us wait so long between posts, baby, and I’ll do the same!
Lets see how you make them see each other. How can Tina still be angry with what happen ove such a long time. Let there be peace. thanks
Wow…it’s a shame that she still has those questions 25 years later…somebody should have bought the subject up then lives wouldn’t have been ruined. Tina needs to find a way to face those demons because if they do reconcile…the questions will still be there. I love that they have a powerful connection that they know when each other is present. Keep posting.
hottttttttttttttt longer tina stop
I’m almost scared for them to see each other after so long. Will their forever love come thru or all the hurt and anger of so many years win out….
whoa
=O~~~~ That’s pretty much my comment. lol
sigh…I love it when the connection between two people reaches beyond the norm, so deep and special that it can only be sensed between them and them only. I hope Bette can recognize the back of Tina’s head bobbing up and down as she stomps off
You’re killin’ me Michellia, absolutely killin’ me.
Tina turn around.,
I can’t tell whose slicker? Me or Bette ;-)))) Wonderful chapter as usual. I like how you capture my attention, mind and soul, into your story. I feel as if I am a part of it and enjoy every minute of this wonderful adventure. To the special someone in your life, “She is one lucky woman”. Next chapter please. Like now ;-))))
Well that was HOT and HOTTER and very very very nice. But I must agree with others what is wrong with Tina’s mind that she hasn’t ever moved beyond her resentment in 25 years ??? You gotta worry about a woman with that level of stuckness.
Damn thats hot and awesome. Now let see if they see each other, hope they did!!!!!
oh wow, coincidentally I pm’ed you yesterday…I so want to see them reunited on this holiday…today’s post? That was beautiful…of course T has those questions???but 25 years later?? please let their love be BIG enuff to get them thru this…asap please??!!!
wow just wow you did it again sweetie, it was very well worth the wait. But like evryone else says how is it Tina still has these questions after such a long time? Please post soon and let us find out thanks
your killing me here… loving this… i hope tina also turns around…
As I’ve always said, their sex life was always the bomb; but past the bedroom what’s left. 25 years later, Tina has said it herself, there is still so many questions surround by hate; I don’t call that a love connection. Ok, I’d love for Tina to turn around RIGHT now and see Bette; Baby, are you going to have them miss each other like 2 ships that pass in the night? OR are you going to make their “connection” a reality? Either way, PPS!!!!! Too my special someone – ILU 2
Come on!!! U are killing me. Please let Bette call out to Tina. I don’t care if they fight or cruse each other out just please let them SEE each other. WHY IS TINA STILL HOLDING ON TO THE DRAMA AND HURT FEELINGS AFTER 25 YEARS. FUCK she has been with a DUDE for the last 25. I would think Bette should be the one ANGER! Please post soon. After reposting I thought we would be farther along the reunion. Beautiful fic. Please hurry w/post!!!
What a beautiful expression of love. May their deep connection overcome fear and pain.
Wow! little speechless!
No matter what IC does to them in my mind they will always be soulmates. Thank your friend for giving you some inspiration. Come on, Mich…post soon.
SO, what happens? Hey Mich come back and put me out of my misery!
This is crazy, the tension is unbelievable.
You just continue to amaze. That was awesome. I love the fact that they are still so connected after so many years. Please post for us again..very soon.