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Look Like You Chapter
“Ah…ah….Shaaane.” I finally let myself go. This was probably the best sex we’ve ever had, at least it’s the best sex I’ve ever had.
“You ok?”
“Oh yes, I am more than ok.” I said as I kissed her.
“Good.” She smiled.
“Oh my god, who would have thought that it would still be this good?”
“I don’t know but I’ve dreamed about it, and my dreams did not live up to this.”
“Aw, thanks baby.”
“You’re welcome.” Shane said as she kissed me with a goofy grin on her face.
“Over two years…that’s a long time Shane.”
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“…that’s a long time Shane.”
It was now or never I guess. I had to tell her the truth. I didn’t want to but I thought she deserved to know and I just want everything out in the open.
“Um Carmen, there is something I have to tell you.”
“What?” She inched away and sat up straight.
“Well, I may have lied a little bit.”
“What are you talking about?” I could see her putting her walls up.
“I know I told you I hadn’t slept with anyone since you, but that’s not entirely true.”
“What do you mean? You lied to me? I can’t believe this!”
“No no! Carmen just listen ok?”
“I’m listening.” She said but her eyes were already turning red.
“It was right after the time you told me about you and Cole….”
Flashbaaaaaaaack.- Nine months after the non-wedding.
I had just walked into The Planet. I hadn’t been here in about 9 months. It felt like home at first, considering I used to all of my free time here with the gang. A lot had changed since I left Carmen in Canada. I saw the gang but not much and when I did it was usually for a short time because Carmen was either coming to the event before I got there or after I had left. I used to plan my time with the gang around not seeing her. But today Alice had assured me she wasn’t going to be at The Planet, so I decided to meet the gang for breakfast.
“Hey Shane. Over here.”
“Hey guys. You didn’t have to stand on the chair and wave me over Al, I remember where our usual table is.”
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This was very good,thanks. I always love a Sharmen story. And welcome back.
love this scene.. classic alice phone call… glad shane came clean to carmen…
Sorry, Babe . . . I got kinda’ caught up wit real life, which is a bitch by the way ~wink~ . . . Anyways, I’m hur now and I have to honestly say, this was by far the best . . . No, no, no . . . the most fan-fuckin-tastic post eva!!! And I know it only gets betta!!!!! Loved how Shane went ahead and got everythin’ out in the open . . . Glad Carmen doesn’t hold grudges . . . so . . . yeah, this was grade fuckin’ ‘A’ work, Baby!! A masterpiece!!!! Whelp, before I start to ramble, real life is callin’ dis’ tomboy back, so, I love ya’ and I love this fic . . . umm . . . post more and soon which means NOW!! LMFAO!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!ps. I alwaz got’cha back, Boo :D
***** five stars!
Carmen won’t try it “doggie style”? (God, do I HATE that phrase.) She could get the *perfect* angle that way if they do it right. All I’m gonna say is: don’t knock it ’til you try it, Carmen, don’t knock it ’til you try it. Anywho, it sucked that Shane lied, but she told the truth and owned up to her mistake. Besides, over 15 months of not having sex is still a LOT, especially for Shane, I’m sure. Oh, and I loved the intense flashbaaaaaaaack, and I agreed with Carmen when she said “You have to face up to the fact, that you did this, no one else.” Shane’s a grown woman and should take responsibilities for her own actions, no matter how misguided they were. Now I’d really like to see a flashback to when they started becoming friends again. Did they gradually start being civil to each other or was it a decisive moment when they thought it better to stay close? I wonder. A very thought-provoking update. . . and hot to boot! :P