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    Look Like You Chapter

    Story written on November 9, 2006 by NicoleScafs.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63165
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    Chapter 12.

    “Well just in case, you haven’t been here in a while.”

    “Yea well…”

    “So anyway, how’s it going Shane?” Nice topic change Bette I thought.

    “Its going. Chase and I opened another WAX and its booked already. His clothes are just flying off the rack, so we’re doing just great.”

    “That’s great Shane.” Tina said.

    We were there for about half an hour, just catching up and chatting when I hear the door open and everyone at the table got quiet. I turned around to see who it was…

    “Carmen…” I whispered. It was the first time I had seen her. She looked beautiful. She walked over to the counter to order a drink, I guess she hadn’t seen the gang, or me, for that matter and just placed her order. Before I knew what was happening I was talking towards her.

    “Shane no.” I heard one of the gang say, but I ignored them.

    I walked up behind and called her name.

    “Carmen…”

    She turned around so fast; she looked like she was going to fall over. I reached out to grab her before she hit the floor…

    “Don’t touch me.” She said.

    “Carmen, I…

    “You’re what?”

    “I…I’m sor-“

    “Oh now you have something to say! You left me without a word and then didn’t try to talk to me for months! I waited for you, I did! I thought for sure you would call and say that you’d made a huge mistake and that you wanted to try again. And you know what? I would have taken you back but not now. I have nothing to say to you.”

    “Carmen, I’m sorry.”

    “Yea well me too Shane. I’m sorry I ever wasted any time with you, and I’m sorry I believed you loved me.”

    “I DO love you! I’ve always loved you. I just needed to think. I just, I just…wasn’t ready. My dad came, and I just-”

    “Stop making excuses! You made excuses when you cheated on me and you’re making excuses for leaving me. You have to face up to the fact, that you did this, no one else.” With this she poked me in the chest hard.

    “Carmen just stop! I love you and I want to be with you. I want to try again.”

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    3. Sorry, Babe . . . I got kinda’ caught up wit real life, which is a bitch by the way ~wink~ . . . Anyways, I’m hur now and I have to honestly say, this was by far the best . . . No, no, no . . . the most fan-fuckin-tastic post eva!!! And I know it only gets betta!!!!! Loved how Shane went ahead and got everythin’ out in the open . . . Glad Carmen doesn’t hold grudges . . . so . . . yeah, this was grade fuckin’ ‘A’ work, Baby!! A masterpiece!!!! Whelp, before I start to ramble, real life is callin’ dis’ tomboy back, so, I love ya’ and I love this fic . . . umm . . . post more and soon which means NOW!! LMFAO!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!ps. I alwaz got’cha back, Boo :D

    5. Carmen won’t try it “doggie style”? (God, do I HATE that phrase.) She could get the *perfect* angle that way if they do it right. All I’m gonna say is: don’t knock it ’til you try it, Carmen, don’t knock it ’til you try it. Anywho, it sucked that Shane lied, but she told the truth and owned up to her mistake. Besides, over 15 months of not having sex is still a LOT, especially for Shane, I’m sure. Oh, and I loved the intense flashbaaaaaaaack, and I agreed with Carmen when she said “You have to face up to the fact, that you did this, no one else.” Shane’s a grown woman and should take responsibilities for her own actions, no matter how misguided they were. Now I’d really like to see a flashback to when they started becoming friends again. Did they gradually start being civil to each other or was it a decisive moment when they thought it better to stay close? I wonder. A very thought-provoking update. . . and hot to boot! :P

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