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    Look Like You Chapter

    Story written on November 9, 2006 by NicoleScafs.
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    Chapter 12.

    “Carmen?” a voice called from the door.

    “I’ll be right there Cole.”

    “Ok” and the blonde haired woman walked back outside without another word.

    “Carmen, who was that?”

    “Look Shane, I’m sorry but-“

    “Carmen, who was that?”

    “That was my girlfriend.”

    “Your girlfriend?”

    “Yes Shane. My girlfriend.”

    “How long?”

    “Look Shane, I don’t owe you anything ok, and certainly not an explanation. I have to go.” 

    “Carmen, I…”

    “No Shane, this is over.” And with that she walked out the door.

    I turned around and everyone was staring at me. Not just my friends, but everyone in The Planet.

    “You ok?” Alice was the first one to get to me. I looked up and into her eyes, I shook my head no, and just started to cry on her shoulder. Kit came over and guided us to her office so everyone in The Planet would stop staring me. I felt like a joke, Shane the player, crying over some girl in public. After a few minutes I calmed down and I needed to know.

    “Did you guys know?”

    “Shane, listen…”

    “Did you guys know?”

    No response.

    “Well did you?”

    “Yes. Carmen brought her by one morning for breakfast a couple of weeks ago. We just didn’t know how to tell you.”

    “Well thank you. This way of finding out was much better.”

    End flashback.

    “…after you told me about the two of you, I just needed to go. I needed to do something, anything that would take my mind off of you; I just wanted to feel again. I went to the bar and I got wasted, and I mean really wasted. I saw someone familiar eyeing me from across the bar, and I went for it. We went back to her house. We didn’t kiss, we didn’t talk, I fucked her. It was hard, fast, and rough. After that, I walked to Alice’s house and when she answered the door, I burst into tears all over again.”

    Silence.

    “Carmen…”

    “Oh well…um.” She was pulling away I could feel it.

    “Carmen, please say something. I know I lied to you, but I just wanted to tell you the truth, I just want everything out in the open. I never want to lie to you again; I want to tell you what I think and how I feel. I just want to be honest.”

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    3. Sorry, Babe . . . I got kinda’ caught up wit real life, which is a bitch by the way ~wink~ . . . Anyways, I’m hur now and I have to honestly say, this was by far the best . . . No, no, no . . . the most fan-fuckin-tastic post eva!!! And I know it only gets betta!!!!! Loved how Shane went ahead and got everythin’ out in the open . . . Glad Carmen doesn’t hold grudges . . . so . . . yeah, this was grade fuckin’ ‘A’ work, Baby!! A masterpiece!!!! Whelp, before I start to ramble, real life is callin’ dis’ tomboy back, so, I love ya’ and I love this fic . . . umm . . . post more and soon which means NOW!! LMFAO!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!ps. I alwaz got’cha back, Boo :D

    5. Carmen won’t try it “doggie style”? (God, do I HATE that phrase.) She could get the *perfect* angle that way if they do it right. All I’m gonna say is: don’t knock it ’til you try it, Carmen, don’t knock it ’til you try it. Anywho, it sucked that Shane lied, but she told the truth and owned up to her mistake. Besides, over 15 months of not having sex is still a LOT, especially for Shane, I’m sure. Oh, and I loved the intense flashbaaaaaaaack, and I agreed with Carmen when she said “You have to face up to the fact, that you did this, no one else.” Shane’s a grown woman and should take responsibilities for her own actions, no matter how misguided they were. Now I’d really like to see a flashback to when they started becoming friends again. Did they gradually start being civil to each other or was it a decisive moment when they thought it better to stay close? I wonder. A very thought-provoking update. . . and hot to boot! :P

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