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“Was it Cherie?”
“What?” I thought I had heard her, but I wasn’t sure.
“Was it Cherie Jaffe? The familiar woman at the bar?”
“No Carmen, it wasn’t her, I haven’t thought about her like 3 years, I swear to you it wasn’t her. It was just some woman I had slept with once before.”
“Ok.”
“Carmen, please say something.”
“Its fine Shane. I mean that was the day I told you it was over, even though in my heart it would never be over.”
“So you’re not mad?”
“No, just no more lying.”
“I swear Carmen, no more lying. Scout’s honor!”
“Come here, you big goof.” She laughed.
“Yes ma’am.”
We just laid there for a while after Shane’s confession. To be honest, I really wasn’t mad, in fact impressed that Shane told me about it.
“Hm…baby?”
“Yea”
“Wanna try that surprise I bought you?”
“Are you sure?”
“Yes! Shane, I asked the doctor, I looked it up online, its going to be fine.”
“Ok then, lay it on me.”
“Did you really just say that?”
“Yup!”
“Alright, grab it off the dresser, and I’ll “lay it on you.”
“Ok.”
Shane walked over to the dresser and grabbed her surprise. When she got back to the bed, she stood on the side of the bed that I was laying on.
“Help me?”
“Ok baby.”
I fastened the buckles around her hips and then the one that goes between her legs.
“You liking this?”
“Yup.”
“Why? Feel like something is missing?”
“No. I only like it, because its you. Now fuck me.”
“I don’t need to be told twice.”
I laid on my back ready for her to lie on top of me.
“Um babe, this isn’t going to work. I can’t lay on the baby.”
“Ok well let’s try it standing up.”
Well that last for about a minute before I couldn’t take it anymore.
“I’ve got an idea.”
“Me too, get on all fours.”
“Ew! Shane no. We are not doing that! Ever.”
“It was worth a shot.” I slapped her lightly on the arm.
“Ok you lay on your back.”
“Ok.”
Shane laid down on her back, and I situated my self on top of her. I straddled her waist.
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This was very good,thanks. I always love a Sharmen story. And welcome back.
love this scene.. classic alice phone call… glad shane came clean to carmen…
Sorry, Babe . . . I got kinda’ caught up wit real life, which is a bitch by the way ~wink~ . . . Anyways, I’m hur now and I have to honestly say, this was by far the best . . . No, no, no . . . the most fan-fuckin-tastic post eva!!! And I know it only gets betta!!!!! Loved how Shane went ahead and got everythin’ out in the open . . . Glad Carmen doesn’t hold grudges . . . so . . . yeah, this was grade fuckin’ ‘A’ work, Baby!! A masterpiece!!!! Whelp, before I start to ramble, real life is callin’ dis’ tomboy back, so, I love ya’ and I love this fic . . . umm . . . post more and soon which means NOW!! LMFAO!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!ps. I alwaz got’cha back, Boo :D
***** five stars!
Carmen won’t try it “doggie style”? (God, do I HATE that phrase.) She could get the *perfect* angle that way if they do it right. All I’m gonna say is: don’t knock it ’til you try it, Carmen, don’t knock it ’til you try it. Anywho, it sucked that Shane lied, but she told the truth and owned up to her mistake. Besides, over 15 months of not having sex is still a LOT, especially for Shane, I’m sure. Oh, and I loved the intense flashbaaaaaaaack, and I agreed with Carmen when she said “You have to face up to the fact, that you did this, no one else.” Shane’s a grown woman and should take responsibilities for her own actions, no matter how misguided they were. Now I’d really like to see a flashback to when they started becoming friends again. Did they gradually start being civil to each other or was it a decisive moment when they thought it better to stay close? I wonder. A very thought-provoking update. . . and hot to boot! :P