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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
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Previously:
“Hey Jo …”
“Hi …” said Jo, relieved to have caught her, “you’re not in work are you?”
“No … just on my way back from lunch …”
“Right …” Jo paused and Lottie smiled, they’d pre-arranged having this conversation to pre-arrange a ‘dinner date’ but there was something reassuring to Lottie about knowing that Jo was as nervous as she was, “was your flight okay?” Jo asked,
Lottie smiled, stifling a yawn, she lowered herself to sit on the wall outside The Planet, “Fine, but we were delayed so we didn’t get back ‘till really late …” she said, finishing the sentence in a yawn,
“So I see …” Jo teased, “think you’ll have recovered by tomorrow night?” she asked,
Lottie grinned, “Depends, what’s happening tomorrow night?” she asked, faking ignorance,
“Dinner with me at this new Thai place I’ve found …” said Jo assertively,
Lottie felt herself blush, “Sounds good,”
“Okay then …” said Jo, pleased, as the bell rang out for her class to come in from recess, “I’d better go” she said, “that’s the end of recess …”
“Okay …” said Lottie, realising suddenly that Tina and Lisa were long gone, “me too … but I’ll see you tomorrow night?”
“Definitely, pick you up around 7pm?”
Chapter Nineteen – part b
Lottie wandered about the hotel room in her underwear, flicking through her closet in the early evening sun, she was showered and her makeup was done, her hair lay in loose curls around her shoulders … all she had left to do was pick something to wear,
She’d tried on pants and a shirt, but it looked too formal, she’d put on jeans and a t-shirt but she looked like she was going to the park or a club, not on a date, she’d put on a dress and immediately hated it and took it off, she sighed, throwing her latest outfit down onto the bed,
She reached for her cell … “Hey Al … I need help”
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Bette scanned the restaurant lobby for Erin and Ben, aware that she was still wearing the same grey jeans and shirt combo she’d put on that day for work, only now there were traces of plaster and dust dotted here and there, she sighed, feeling rushed as she tried to collect herself,
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Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!