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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
“Thanks …” said Jo, feeling sparks jolt between them as Lottie’s fingers grazed the back of her neck, causing her to shiver, “shall we go?” she added, grabbing her jacket off the back of the door in a hurry,
Lottie followed her back to the car mutely, suddenly wishing that Jo would take her hand again, wondering if she did would it feel the same as it did earlier, would it make her nerves lessen … or intensify, would it make her feel more … or less … overwhelmed?
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“Mmn …” said Bette, surprised by how great the food tasted, she’d never been quite as fond of Thai food as Tina was, who’d been the one to recommend her the restaurant,
Erin nodded in agreement, “Delicious …”
Erin had to admit it, Bette was playing her a powerful argument for a temporary move to the West Coast, but give up New York, it’s art and it’s culture, Erin wasn’t so sure,
“It would be for a year minimum,” said Bette, “well it’s only nine months really … if you think about it, and you’d have plenty of space to work, the studio space at the University is fantastic,”
Erin nodded, the studio was the first thing Ben had shown her on her tour of campus and she was suitably impressed. The California University’s reputation as a leading competitor in the Arts had been increasing steadily ever since Bette Porter took over as its Dean,
“And you’d have reasonable free reign on your syllabus …” Bette continued, chasing a prawn around in her noodles, her ears pricked up to the sound of a familiar laugh as a couple of younger girls walked past on their way to their table,
“Oh … shit …” muttered Bette, ducking her head low so that Erin’s head obscured their view of her,
“What?” asked Erin, turning around to look, she saw two young women sitting down to order, several tables back in the restaurant, “Who’s that?” Erin asked,
Bette rolled her eyes apologetically, “My sister …” she explained, thinking how very complicated the read story was, “with my daughter’s third grade teacher …”
Erin gave her a slightly confused smile, wondering why that would be something the very esteemed Bette Porter should want to hide from,
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(38 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!