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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
Jo paused, hearing Lottie faintly sigh,
“Even in winter … we’d drag up blankets and hot thermos’ of coffee and wrap ourselves up in hats and scarves,”
Lottie chuckled, picturing it,
“There’s something so romantic about the rooftops of Paris when the whole of the city is covered in a blanket of crisp … white … snow …” finished Jo breathlessly,
Lottie felt every hot breath on her neck as Jo pronounced each word clearly,
crisp …
white …
snow …
She’d felt Jo’s arm slip casually around her waist, at some point, she couldn’t remember when exactly, just that one arm now lay across her stomach and the other, she presumed, still held the glass of wine …
Lottie turned in Jo’s arms, opening her eyes slowly as she came face to face with her,
“Hi …” Lottie whispered,
Jo grinned at her, the blanket of fear seemed to have gone from her eyes, revealing the brightest clear blue circles as deep as any ocean,
Lottie’s gaze travelled from Jo’s eyes to her nose, cute like a button and dotted with freckles, she was surprised to find Jo’s cheeks looked as flushed as her own felt, she stopped when her eyes fell on plump red lips, kissable lips, tinged with ruby red from the wine, she wanted to know what it tasted like to kiss her, to lick the residue of wine from her lips,
Whoa … thought Lottie, one giant step ahead,
Jo’s arm stayed steady on Lottie’s back, keeping her close,
Lottie gulped, feeling her body shudder, Jo’s touch seemed to make her tingle all over, she wondered again what the touch of her lips would do …
“I’ve never …” gasped Lottie, as Jo just nodded, she set down the glass and brought her hand up to gently cup Lottie’s chin, guiding her closer,
There was that fleeting moment where Lottie thought she would bolt, where her mind was still holding on to control as her heart fought it, but then she saw Jo’s smile, and in the longest second she knew that when her eyelids fluttered closed she’d be silently agreeing to their first … real … kiss …
So soft …
Not like anything ever before …
But something she knew she’d do again …
tbc?
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(38 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!