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Summer Vacation. Chapter 19b
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“Erin …” said Bette, “lovely to see you again … I’m so sorry about earlier”
Erin smiled warmly, “It’s nice to see you Bette, and don’t worry, your young colleague here had been taking remarkably good care of me”
Bette grinned at Ben, reminding herself to make sure his summer bonus was a good one,
Ben upped and left them too it, exhausted from trying so hard to make a good impression all afternoon,
“You should hang on to him …” Erin winked,
“Shall we?” asked Bette, motioning after the waitress who was eagerly trying to show them to their table, “I’ve heard this place is great …”
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Thanks to Alice, Lottie was just a few minutes late as she pulled up alongside Jo’s apartment building, remembering the times she’d done so before, with ‘other-things-on-her-mind’ being the reason that brought her there, now there was just one thing on her mind, just one person, just Jo,
Alice had flown in like a tornado, dropping whatever she’d been doing to dash across town and decide in a matter of minutes what Lottie should wear for her date. Alice teased her mercilessly, stating that she’d known all along that Lottie was ‘that-way-inclined’, Lottie smiled at her enthusiasm but couldn’t help but suspect that Alice was a little jealous of something,
But it was thanks to her that Lottie found herself standing outside Jo’s front door in tight black jeans and a thin crumpled satin top, mildly confident with herself. Alice had made her try on three different bra’s before she found the right one that ‘went-just-right’, Lottie found it hard to see a difference but apparently there was one. Her jacket hung loosely over her arm, it was still too warm out to wear it, she rapped on Jo’s front door nervously,
“Hey …” said Jo, smiling as she opened the door, one hand held onto her earring pushed part way into her ear, she looked as though she was struggling with it,
“Need help?” asked Lottie, after watching Jo frown in annoyance when she couldn’t get the hoop fastened,
Jo smiled as she stepped to the side, using her hand she pushed back the hair from her neck, revealing to Lottie the most intense fragrance, a mixture of sweet perfume and what Lottie could only imagine to be the smell that the softest skin had, she felt her breath catch slightly in her throat as she leant forwards to fix the back of Jo’s earring,
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Yes! continue for sure. Although I’m intrigued with lottie/jo, more Bette/Tina please :D
OMG, we need more. Gotta love Angie. Tina bet with her daughter too funny.
You have to ask??? Of course, you *must* continue, I love this story… Lottie and Jo, Bette and Tina Mk II? I wonder if Al is jealous? I hope she can find someone, cos it looks like Lisa was a bad fit for her. Anyway, I look forward to every post from you, and getting two tonight was a treat. Please post more as soon as! Thanks, sofa
CONTINUE WOMAN!!! Tina with Angie, and Bette was way funny and adorable…..up next the continuation of Bette and Tina on the sofa and …..me thinks it’s too soon for Jo and Lottie to sleep together.
Lottie and Jo are so adorable. Almost like a mini Bette and Tina only this time Lottie is more like Tina instead of like her sister Bette. Bette and Tina are still very much in love and you can see when they are alone or with their friends. Can’t wait for the birthday party and when Bette must tell her father about her baby sister.
Oh you tease! Damn!Post soon!
YES! YOU CAN TLEAVE US HANGIN WOMEN… LOVE THIS,AND THE FIRST KISS HOW SWEET.P.P.S.
OH, HELL YES! (please excuse my exclamation)
Sigh… that was beautiful. And I swear, you’re fishing with that ‘tbc?’ BS. ;)
First kiss with a woman, so different yet so beautiful,soft and gentle thanks.
Yes! Please continue. I love how you write Angie and how you are able to subtly show both B & T’s personalities within her. Very intrigued with Lottie and where life will lead her now that she has all these new people in her life. I love your writing. Yes, definitely more! Please!
Yehaaa!!! Awwwwwww loved it :o)) But how can you ask if you should continue???? Of course, the sooner the better – this story is amazing.
Loving this story! More please ;-)
“Fuck …!” said Tina again, “now I owe Angie five bucks …” I loved this line!
Love about Tina and Angie’s bet. Lottie and Jo is hot!
wtf do u mean by to be continued? are u a sadist or something…tease…i’m waiting for the ‘moment’ u know the one!!!!! now hurry up and deliver….
Hey sofa! I’m back and finally I get to read this two-parter! Great!!! I really like Lottie’s story, especially as it seems that it’s a first for her and she’s falling for “hottie” Jo Sparkes! You describe all these emotions very well. And it’s quite realistic that you have her wonder if her interest in Alice and more especially Jo is linked to her new environment. I think that’s a question that I’d have asked myself. But it seems obvious that this “thing” she has for Jo is real. Okay, I kinda want to ask more of Tibette, so I will, but I don’t in fact feel that deprived, cause I think it’s very realistic that they have a “normal” life where they’re not constantly lovey dovey, but still have these daily tender and loving “moments”, just like in the last two chapters. Of course, a little bit more once in a while doesn’t really hurt either… Hihihi! ;) Anyway, love this as usual! Thanks and please come back soon!
So glad you obviously did continue!