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Come Back To Me chapter 2.
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Bette struggled to nod, but couldn’t quite make herself. She didn’t understand. What "other things"? Tina was making no sense. Besides, Bette was loathe to agree to anything that would allow Tina to ‘move on’.
"Bette, you need to understand this or I’ll have to go."
Bette reluctantly nodded and let a single tear slip from the corner of her eye. It quickly found its way to the pillow just below.
"Ok, one last thing." Tina said as she leaned ever so lightly closer to Bette’s face. She whispered into Bette’s ear, "You have to close your eyes. You don’t get to see me Bette."
Daggers. Right through Bette’s heart. She couldn’t be in more pain if there were actual daggers protruding from her chest. What the fuck is going on!!! She wanted to scream. For a fraction of a second she considered just ravishing Tina. To hell with all of your fucking rules T!!! The tears she had been containing up until this point suddenly let loose. Bette raised her hand to her face to cover her mouth as she sobbed loudly. After a moment she forced herself to stop, hoping she hadn’t inadvertently broken rule #1.
"Bette?" Tina asked with raised eyebrows. "What’s it gonna be?" Bette slowly nodded as she realized that this was her punishment. All of the pain that she had caused Tina was coming back on her a hundred fold. And it was still better than she deserved. This isn’t Tina’s fault. I did this. Me.
"Okay" smiled Tina. Then she slowly lifted her fingers to Bette’s eyes and coaxed her eyelids down. Bette gazed intently at Tina, taking advantage of the all too brief sight of her before the complete darkness came.
Tina let the tears drop from her eyes as soon as she knew Bette couldn’t see them. Fuck. What the hell am I doing?
She couldn’t believe she actually made it through the litany without breaking down. She knew this was hard on Bette but the pregnancy had to remain a secret until she was ready. Still, she wished she didn’t have to be so harsh with Bette. If the shoe were on the other foot would Tina agree to these rules? While she pondered that she leaned in to place a kiss softly on Bette’s closed eyelids. First one then the other. Tina slowly moved her kisses from Bette’s damp eyelids to her cheeks and finally to Bette’s waiting lips. Waves of excitement surged throughout Bette’s body. She couldn’t believe that any of this was even happening. It wasn’t too long ago that Bette was on her knees pleading to Tina in the lawyer’s office. Begging for another chance. She had felt that Tina was about to give in when that Joyce Bitchnia (as Bette referred to her) interrupted. Put it out of your mind, Bette. Just focus on Tina.
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That was… a lot of things. Heartbreaking, hot, hopeful… but above all, it was very well-written. I hope you’ll post again sometime. Thanks
Dang, no way that can be goodbye. I’m not for anyone cheating, but the cirmcumstances were unique, and lets face it those two love each other in a way that most will never know.
BreakupSex is awful thing and its haeartbreaking,hot and soo many emotions going in all different directions at once.please let them each other again. they belonged together
Such a flood of emotions… so sad, yet so perfectly written.
THE END? I SOOO HOPE YOU DONT MEAN THE……END……….I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS…..IT WAS AMAZING…..AWESOMELY WRITTEN, AND SOOO SAD…..BUT ONE OF THE BEST BY FAR……PLEASE CONTINUE….DONT STOP NOW…..
You did warn us from the beginning, so I guess I can’t complain :). I cannot believe this is your first story. Where have you been hiding? Please come back soon. As I said before, please feel free to alter any of the depressing B&T stuff we’ve had to endure for 3 seasons. Your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing your story.
wow that so didnt go the way i expected but it was rly well written thank you for sharing pp again it was nice to read rly good writing
Thanks everybody for the comments. Was very nervous with my first story. I’ve been throwing around other ideas. Especially one about some “allegedly” reknowned artist in upstate new york being killed by a piece of her own artwok. apparently a huge metallic 7 fell on her head from 30 feet high. she died instantly. In fact, I just wrote it. What do you think? :-)
really good, but sad ending…it was really short story, but i hope to see that you come back with a new story…
let them find their way back RH!
That was really good, the only bad thing about it was it was the end.
I like how you ended this. Plus, didn’t Bette wake up the next day in pajamas? I think I once watched that episode and wondered how the hell she managed to change clothes if she ended up passing out cold due to being really drunk.
There’s more psychological depth in this exquisitely written story than in a season’s worth of TLW. Thanks for posting, and I hope we hear from you again (the sooner the better). The Jodi-killed-by-own-artwork storyline would be a definite crowd pleaser.
Even though this story is over and Tina said that they were through I am like Bette, they have hope. Even with all that has taken place in the show they still love one another and there is always hope until one is gone (like death and they are both very much alive). Thank you for the story and please come to us with another of your thoughts.
That was sad and emotional and hope they will get back together, they belonged together. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you again! Sorry to hear about the artist, my prayed for her family and friend!
Hearbreaking chapter, but very very good like Bette i hope Tina will come home soon. Congrats for this story i hope that you continue posting
that was bloody hard to read…so sad…