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Come Back To Me chapter 2.
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Tina’s tongue began slowly darting in and out of Bette’s mouth as Bette’s tongue reciprocated. She wasn’t sure how far all of this would really lead so she tried to communicate to Tina all of her remorse and love in this moment.
Tina quickly broke off the kiss. "You can touch my face", she whispered, and then resumed the kissing just as quickly. Bette tasted so good and soon Bette’s hands were caressing her face and running through her hair. Oh god, I’ve missed you Bette. Desire rose in both women as each tongue fought for dominance over the other.
Bette fought the urge to let her hands explore Tina’s entire body. She didn’t know how much longer she could hold out, but decided she could hold out forever if only she could keep on kissing those soft wonderful lips.
While Bette struggled with her hand control issues, Tina struggled with the buttons on Bette’s shirt. She finally loosed them all and began slipping it off Bette. Bette leaned up just enough to aid in removing her top, with her eyes still obediently closed. Tina gazed at Bette’s mocha skin. She had always looked fantastic in the moonlight and tonight was no exception. Tina leaned in to kiss Bette’s shoulder and slowly placed her hand on Bette’s heaving breast. She traced the edge of her bra, eliciting quick flinches from Bette’s skin which betrayed her arousal. A moan escaped Bette’s lips to which Tina warned with a gentle "shh".
Tina sat up to remove her own shirt. Although she loved it when Bette undressed her she couldn’t risk her accidentally grazing her belly. Bette, sensing the motion, began to rise with her when Tina gently pushed her back down and said "no". Beneath Tina’s shirt lay her bare breasts-no bra. Tina lay back down next to Bette. She took Bette’s hand and guided it to her own heaving breasts. "This is ok", she allowed. Now it was Tina who moaned with pleasure as Bette skillfully massaged and caressed Tina’s bosom with hands that were thrilled with this new assignment. Bette resumed her kissing with a renewed vigor. Tina’s moans intensified and she could barely contain her squirming legs. Her body was screaming to merge with Bette’s and she was certain Bette was feeling the same. She momentarily considered abandoning her original plan and taking Bette fully in her arms.
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That was… a lot of things. Heartbreaking, hot, hopeful… but above all, it was very well-written. I hope you’ll post again sometime. Thanks
Dang, no way that can be goodbye. I’m not for anyone cheating, but the cirmcumstances were unique, and lets face it those two love each other in a way that most will never know.
BreakupSex is awful thing and its haeartbreaking,hot and soo many emotions going in all different directions at once.please let them each other again. they belonged together
Such a flood of emotions… so sad, yet so perfectly written.
THE END? I SOOO HOPE YOU DONT MEAN THE……END……….I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS…..IT WAS AMAZING…..AWESOMELY WRITTEN, AND SOOO SAD…..BUT ONE OF THE BEST BY FAR……PLEASE CONTINUE….DONT STOP NOW…..
You did warn us from the beginning, so I guess I can’t complain :). I cannot believe this is your first story. Where have you been hiding? Please come back soon. As I said before, please feel free to alter any of the depressing B&T stuff we’ve had to endure for 3 seasons. Your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing your story.
wow that so didnt go the way i expected but it was rly well written thank you for sharing pp again it was nice to read rly good writing
Thanks everybody for the comments. Was very nervous with my first story. I’ve been throwing around other ideas. Especially one about some “allegedly” reknowned artist in upstate new york being killed by a piece of her own artwok. apparently a huge metallic 7 fell on her head from 30 feet high. she died instantly. In fact, I just wrote it. What do you think? :-)
really good, but sad ending…it was really short story, but i hope to see that you come back with a new story…
let them find their way back RH!
That was really good, the only bad thing about it was it was the end.
I like how you ended this. Plus, didn’t Bette wake up the next day in pajamas? I think I once watched that episode and wondered how the hell she managed to change clothes if she ended up passing out cold due to being really drunk.
There’s more psychological depth in this exquisitely written story than in a season’s worth of TLW. Thanks for posting, and I hope we hear from you again (the sooner the better). The Jodi-killed-by-own-artwork storyline would be a definite crowd pleaser.
Even though this story is over and Tina said that they were through I am like Bette, they have hope. Even with all that has taken place in the show they still love one another and there is always hope until one is gone (like death and they are both very much alive). Thank you for the story and please come to us with another of your thoughts.
That was sad and emotional and hope they will get back together, they belonged together. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you again! Sorry to hear about the artist, my prayed for her family and friend!
Hearbreaking chapter, but very very good like Bette i hope Tina will come home soon. Congrats for this story i hope that you continue posting
that was bloody hard to read…so sad…