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Great Unexpectations Chapter 10
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Previously…
Bette draped her arm around Tina, holding her close and whispered into her ear, "I love you, Tina."
A tear broke loose from Tina’s eye as she nodded and said, "you too." But she knew the damage had already been done. It was a whole new game now. Bette doesn’t need you to get through the bad times. She doesn’t need your comfort. And you’d better not count on her comfort either.
Their once-strong connection had become tenuous in the last few months and this latest episode had pretty much obliterated what little was left. They soon became wrapped up in their own lives, understanding that things were bad, but not knowing how to make repairs. It wasn’t long before Bette succumbed to her weakness and began her affair with the carpenter.
Tina was snapped back to the present by the harsh sound of her glass shattering on the floor. She regained her focus on Bette and Faye. Her eyes turned cold and her brow furled as she muttered, "Fucking. Hell."
Chapter 10.
The shattering glass also earned the attention of everybody at the table. Alice was the first to speak. "Jesus, Tina. Can’t hold your liquor?", she teased. But Tina did not laugh. She did not even respond. She had already begun advancing on the object of her disaffection. "Oh shit", Shane said as she allowed her eyes to skip ahead of Tina to ascertain her destination. "Who is that?", asked Helena as she studied the woman talking to Bette.
"That", began Shane, "is Faye Buckley."
"No", said Helena in disbelief. "The woman from that debate? What in hell is she doing here?"
"Well," Alice grinned, enjoying the scene a bit too much. "I think she’s about to get her ass kicked."
"Shouldn’t we do something?", Papi asked.
"Not just yet. Bette’s there. She can handle it", hoped Shane.
As Tina neared the two women she could hear the furious tenor in Bette’s voice, ""No!! Enough!!". Hearing this Tina’s jaw and fists clenched at the same time. She quickly scanned Bette’s face to find that the anger in her voice was on equal footing with the anger showing in her features. She did not stop walking as she raised her fist.
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Gosh, nothing like a barroom brawl to arouse the libido. Excellent chapter. Have a great time and please write when you can.
WOW! Tina really saw red didn’t she. Great chapter, have a good time at the festival and we will be eagerly awaiting your next post.
Well, Alpha Tina was really greatbut I really would have liked for her to have socked her another one for good measure. Anyway both Buckley’s got what they deserved. Now I just know the next chapter will be an NC-17. RIGHT? Have a great time on your vacation.
U r right, I’ll say it again “U can not Stop there”LOL but seriously I love this story and Tina’s Punch was GREAT shame about the hand though:)
Wow, that was something! Alpha Tina to the rescue and Bette liked it too. Have fun at the festival.
Ok, Tina was waiting for any explanation was she? Still don’t get this whole Faye thing. If she just wanted to apologize why come to The Planet. Don’t trust her, and hope she stays away from B&T.
Every girl should know how to deliver a good punch. Just in case certain people show up.. But what’s up with Faye B? Was that genuine remorse? Can’t wait until your next update, I love the story :) Peace ADx
Bette finds Alpha Tina hot? Niiice. Buckley is a creep. Hope the next chapter is hot and sweet.
No doubt about it: Alpha Tina is a hottie. I hope that sore wrist of hers won’t be an impediment when she gets her reward. And I hope Bette and Tina will be united as they battle whatever evil scheme Buckley’s cooked up. PS: I didn’t think you were going for laughs with the hand-stepping moment in Chapter 9. My (very nervous) laughter was a cathartic response to a truly wrenching situation (which would have made great TV; damn you, IC). I encountered the “Bax” concept on an L Word forum; sorry for sharing, because I know too well how hard it is to get that horrible image out of your head.
Yeah, Alpha Tina is well hot. And Faye Bitchley had it coming. It’s just a pity Tina didn’t get a second wallop in. That being said, I don’t think her appearance has done Bette and Tina any harm… Or has it? What’s Faye up to? Enquiring minds wanna know, so post as soon as you can… waiting 10 days is gonna be an agony. (But have fun!) Cheers, red.
Gotta agree with Bette, Tina was so fucking hot! Can’t figure Faye out though…guess I’ll just have to wait those ten days… Enjoy the festival.
Damn Red! You weren’t kidding when you said that Bette wasn’t gonna have a lot to say about it. Tina had everything to say about it…with her fist! LMAO. Tina definitely shouldn’t be embarassed and I have a feeling Bette will show her why!
Hmmmm…Bette will have to show Tina some “hands on” appreciation for coming to her rescue. LOL! PS.
I LOL’d@the air horn. XD Foxy Brown has spoken! And I am not surprised that Tina hurt herself from that punch. lol
Sweet, I love it when someone gets what’s coming to them and in this lifetime as opposed to the next! Awesome update. PPS
:) Just great! Will you give us another dose:)? PPS!
good for tina to defend bette…i think that faye is bette’s mother LOL
oh yeah!!!! thanks 4 posting b4 u go…waiting for u 2 get back…..
Oh no no sarcasm at all. I am pleased that you write the story as you do. And yet this is again a great update.
I understand Faye wanting to apologize but watching Bette and Tina get in the car and then leave. Not sure why she needed to see that. What I would think that she needs to see is Bette, Tina and Angelica. She needs to see how much Angelica’s mommies love her and how much Angelica loves her mommies.
That was awesome!