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Great Unexpectations Chapter 10
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Bette and Tina’s drive home was equally as silent. Each engrossed in her own thoughts. Bette could not get over her shock at seeing Tina’s fury in action. Her mind drifted back to that other time she had seen Tina in such a state. The night of Provocations. The admission of her affair. That awful night was full of anger and heartbreak. But this night was different. She tried to concentrate on her driving as she sorted out her stirring emotions.
Tina, meanwhile, was drifting in her own memories. She was again reliving the night of the debate. Bette shutting her out. Both with silence, and the hulking oak door. She feared that Bette might be retreating again, and reached for her hand. Bette accepted it happily, and brought the hand to her lips for a soft kiss. Tina let a tear fall down her cheek in relief, as she leaned her head back against the seat. Bette, staring ahead did not see the tear, but she sensed it and gave the blonde an extra squeeze.
When they came through the front door of Bette’s house Angus looked up in a startled state of confusion. He looked at the clock on the wall and compared it to the time on his watch. "You’re home early. Is everything ok?"
"Long story, Angus", Bette said, not offering any more explanation. "How was Angie?"
"You mean since you last saw her about an hour ago?", he grinned. "She’s fine. Not a peep."
"I’m gonna go check on her", Bette said to Tina.
"Kay. I’ll be there in a minute."
As Tina was walking Angus to the door she thanked him again and suggested he stop by The Planet. "Kit might need some help. She’ll have a good story for ya, too", she hinted with an embarrassed smile. He looked at her quizzically hoping for more but Tina said nothing.
"Ok, well this has been a very weird night", he chuckled. "G’night", he said as Tina opened the door for him. After he left, Tina leaned her head forward against the door, closing her eyes trying to settle her mind. What a night.
Bette came from the baby’s room and quietly watched Tina’s stillness. She admired the lithe frame in the close fitting black dress. Admired the curves. Admired the legs. She again recalled the sight of Tina’s showdown with Faye. She walked slowly, sneaking up behind her and wrapped her arms gently around her waist. Tina smiled as she kept her eyes closed, and exhaled. Bette put her mouth to Tina’s ear and let her warm breath escape as she uttered, "God, Tina. You were so fucking hot tonight."
TBC
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Gosh, nothing like a barroom brawl to arouse the libido. Excellent chapter. Have a great time and please write when you can.
WOW! Tina really saw red didn’t she. Great chapter, have a good time at the festival and we will be eagerly awaiting your next post.
Well, Alpha Tina was really greatbut I really would have liked for her to have socked her another one for good measure. Anyway both Buckley’s got what they deserved. Now I just know the next chapter will be an NC-17. RIGHT? Have a great time on your vacation.
U r right, I’ll say it again “U can not Stop there”LOL but seriously I love this story and Tina’s Punch was GREAT shame about the hand though:)
Wow, that was something! Alpha Tina to the rescue and Bette liked it too. Have fun at the festival.
Ok, Tina was waiting for any explanation was she? Still don’t get this whole Faye thing. If she just wanted to apologize why come to The Planet. Don’t trust her, and hope she stays away from B&T.
Every girl should know how to deliver a good punch. Just in case certain people show up.. But what’s up with Faye B? Was that genuine remorse? Can’t wait until your next update, I love the story :) Peace ADx
Bette finds Alpha Tina hot? Niiice. Buckley is a creep. Hope the next chapter is hot and sweet.
No doubt about it: Alpha Tina is a hottie. I hope that sore wrist of hers won’t be an impediment when she gets her reward. And I hope Bette and Tina will be united as they battle whatever evil scheme Buckley’s cooked up. PS: I didn’t think you were going for laughs with the hand-stepping moment in Chapter 9. My (very nervous) laughter was a cathartic response to a truly wrenching situation (which would have made great TV; damn you, IC). I encountered the “Bax” concept on an L Word forum; sorry for sharing, because I know too well how hard it is to get that horrible image out of your head.
Yeah, Alpha Tina is well hot. And Faye Bitchley had it coming. It’s just a pity Tina didn’t get a second wallop in. That being said, I don’t think her appearance has done Bette and Tina any harm… Or has it? What’s Faye up to? Enquiring minds wanna know, so post as soon as you can… waiting 10 days is gonna be an agony. (But have fun!) Cheers, red.
Gotta agree with Bette, Tina was so fucking hot! Can’t figure Faye out though…guess I’ll just have to wait those ten days… Enjoy the festival.
Damn Red! You weren’t kidding when you said that Bette wasn’t gonna have a lot to say about it. Tina had everything to say about it…with her fist! LMAO. Tina definitely shouldn’t be embarassed and I have a feeling Bette will show her why!
Hmmmm…Bette will have to show Tina some “hands on” appreciation for coming to her rescue. LOL! PS.
I LOL’d@the air horn. XD Foxy Brown has spoken! And I am not surprised that Tina hurt herself from that punch. lol
Sweet, I love it when someone gets what’s coming to them and in this lifetime as opposed to the next! Awesome update. PPS
:) Just great! Will you give us another dose:)? PPS!
good for tina to defend bette…i think that faye is bette’s mother LOL
oh yeah!!!! thanks 4 posting b4 u go…waiting for u 2 get back…..
Oh no no sarcasm at all. I am pleased that you write the story as you do. And yet this is again a great update.
I understand Faye wanting to apologize but watching Bette and Tina get in the car and then leave. Not sure why she needed to see that. What I would think that she needs to see is Bette, Tina and Angelica. She needs to see how much Angelica’s mommies love her and how much Angelica loves her mommies.
That was awesome!