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Great Unexpectations Chapter 10
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Tina Kennard did not have a reputation as a bar-room brawler. And for good reason. She almost tripped in her haste to execute the blow. But what she lacked in style and grace she more than made up for in pure unadulterated rage. Her fist sailed clumsily through the air but hit its mark squarely. She didn’t know that she was supposed to keep her wrist stiff, so it bent sharply inward on impact. Regardless of the painful delivery, the punch had its desired effect. Faye stumbled backwards, trying to keep her balance, but inevitably went down with a thud.
Bette, shocked at the scene before her, could only watch in disbelief. Her mouth dropped open as her eyes stretched the boundaries of their lids. A silence went over the nearby crowd as it became aware of what was happening, and in particular who was involved. While the music was still blaring, somebody in the crowd began clapping. A few more scattered claps, hoots, and hollers surfaced as well as the phrases, ‘serves the bitch right’ and, "had it coming". Back at the table, the gang sat motionless. Even though Alice had only moments ago predicted it, they still couldn’t believe their eyes. "Damn. Bitch went down", Papi said in awe. Unable to stop herself, Alice shouted out "Woohoo, Tina!! Get her!!"
"Alice. Shut the fuck up", scolded Shane in a daze, not taking her eyes off the quickly unfolding havoc. Alice immediately obeyed, not even understanding what had prompted her outburst, but instantly blaming it on her susceptibility to mob mentality.
Tina meanwhile, stood over Faye with her fists still clenched at her sides, daring her to get back up. "Don’t you ever talk to her again!! Do you hear me, you Cold Hearted Bitch?!!" Faye looked up at Tina, still holding her quickly bruising cheek, with a look of genuine respect and pride. She even smiled a bit, through the increasing pain. Good girl, Tina.
Tina took in the expression that Faye was offering and, reading it as condescension, angrily raised her fist again in preparation of a second assault. She was caught off guard by a man who rushed her from behind and wrapped his arms around her, pinning her arms to her side. "Get the fuck off me!!", Tina screamed as she struggled against him. It was this vision that snapped Bette out of her shock. Full of fury herself now, she yelled, "Let go of her!!!" As she attempted to come to Tina’s aid she was cut off by an angry mob of half-drunk lesbians who began to kick and punch at the man from all sides, somehow managing the not too small task of avoiding Tina with their fists and feet. The man, however, still he did not let go of Tina. Later, he would prefer to think of it as an act of bravado, protecting Faye from the angry blonde. But in quiet moments he would reluctantly admit to himself that he was actually holding her a as shield for his own semi-safety. The blows were finding him anywhere Tina was not.
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Gosh, nothing like a barroom brawl to arouse the libido. Excellent chapter. Have a great time and please write when you can.
WOW! Tina really saw red didn’t she. Great chapter, have a good time at the festival and we will be eagerly awaiting your next post.
Well, Alpha Tina was really greatbut I really would have liked for her to have socked her another one for good measure. Anyway both Buckley’s got what they deserved. Now I just know the next chapter will be an NC-17. RIGHT? Have a great time on your vacation.
U r right, I’ll say it again “U can not Stop there”LOL but seriously I love this story and Tina’s Punch was GREAT shame about the hand though:)
Wow, that was something! Alpha Tina to the rescue and Bette liked it too. Have fun at the festival.
Ok, Tina was waiting for any explanation was she? Still don’t get this whole Faye thing. If she just wanted to apologize why come to The Planet. Don’t trust her, and hope she stays away from B&T.
Every girl should know how to deliver a good punch. Just in case certain people show up.. But what’s up with Faye B? Was that genuine remorse? Can’t wait until your next update, I love the story :) Peace ADx
Bette finds Alpha Tina hot? Niiice. Buckley is a creep. Hope the next chapter is hot and sweet.
No doubt about it: Alpha Tina is a hottie. I hope that sore wrist of hers won’t be an impediment when she gets her reward. And I hope Bette and Tina will be united as they battle whatever evil scheme Buckley’s cooked up. PS: I didn’t think you were going for laughs with the hand-stepping moment in Chapter 9. My (very nervous) laughter was a cathartic response to a truly wrenching situation (which would have made great TV; damn you, IC). I encountered the “Bax” concept on an L Word forum; sorry for sharing, because I know too well how hard it is to get that horrible image out of your head.
Yeah, Alpha Tina is well hot. And Faye Bitchley had it coming. It’s just a pity Tina didn’t get a second wallop in. That being said, I don’t think her appearance has done Bette and Tina any harm… Or has it? What’s Faye up to? Enquiring minds wanna know, so post as soon as you can… waiting 10 days is gonna be an agony. (But have fun!) Cheers, red.
Gotta agree with Bette, Tina was so fucking hot! Can’t figure Faye out though…guess I’ll just have to wait those ten days… Enjoy the festival.
Damn Red! You weren’t kidding when you said that Bette wasn’t gonna have a lot to say about it. Tina had everything to say about it…with her fist! LMAO. Tina definitely shouldn’t be embarassed and I have a feeling Bette will show her why!
Hmmmm…Bette will have to show Tina some “hands on” appreciation for coming to her rescue. LOL! PS.
I LOL’d@the air horn. XD Foxy Brown has spoken! And I am not surprised that Tina hurt herself from that punch. lol
Sweet, I love it when someone gets what’s coming to them and in this lifetime as opposed to the next! Awesome update. PPS
:) Just great! Will you give us another dose:)? PPS!
good for tina to defend bette…i think that faye is bette’s mother LOL
oh yeah!!!! thanks 4 posting b4 u go…waiting for u 2 get back…..
Oh no no sarcasm at all. I am pleased that you write the story as you do. And yet this is again a great update.
I understand Faye wanting to apologize but watching Bette and Tina get in the car and then leave. Not sure why she needed to see that. What I would think that she needs to see is Bette, Tina and Angelica. She needs to see how much Angelica’s mommies love her and how much Angelica loves her mommies.
That was awesome!