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Great Unexpectations Chapter 10
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It was now a full blown battle as the center of The Planet became a collage of flying fists, legs, chairs, and glass. "Oh fuck!", Shane exclaimed as she, Alice, and Papi scrambled from their seats and headed into the melee. The crowd around Faye, Bette, Tina, and this man was so thick they were unable to penetrate.
After minutes of pure pandemonium and without warning a loud, long, nearly painful shriek pierced through the air of the club. Everybody nearby instinctively covered their ears. All eyes looked to the source of the obnoxious interruption. A dark hand was holding up an aerosol can -style air horn. Kit looked around as she brought it down, impressed with the quick attention it garnered. Nobody spoke as she walked over to the man who was still restraining Tina, who was also still struggling. "Mister, if you don’t let go of her, and I mean right now, you’re gonna be sorry", she said as she held the can mere centimeters from his head. Bette ran to Tina, covered the blonde’s ears protectively and shut her own eyes in a tight wince while turning her head as she awaited the blast.
"Richard!!", Faye yelled, looking up at him. "Let her go!!" The order was immediately obeyed and Tina fell to the floor roughly as she was released from his grasp. "Fuck!", Tina yelled in pain.
Bette rushed to collect Tina. "Jesus, T. Are you okay?", she whispered in her ear. Tina looked disdainfully at the floor as if it was the floor’s idea that they should meet under these circumstances. Getting up, Tina fell into Bette’s embrace. "Me? What about you? What was she saying to you, Bette?"
"I’ll tell you when we get home", Bette said, offering her big brown eyes that were threatening tears. They continued to hold each other close and reassure each other that they were, in fact, ok.
Richard likewise quickly went to Faye to help her to her feet. They were at once confronted by Kit. "Lady, I don’t know what possessed you to come in here, but you better get your scrawny ass out of here before I let this crowd have its way with you." Richard and Faye flushed with embarrassment as they looked around at the angry faces that would be only too happy to have some time with them. They made their way gingerly through the crowd toward the exit. Bette and Tina watched them warily and just before stepping outside Faye turned and locked eyes with Bette. "I’m truly sorry", Faye said. "This wasn’t what I had planned for the evening." With that, she turned around and was gone. Bette stared at the now empty exit. Those eyes. This is too fucking much! What in the hell just happened?
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Gosh, nothing like a barroom brawl to arouse the libido. Excellent chapter. Have a great time and please write when you can.
WOW! Tina really saw red didn’t she. Great chapter, have a good time at the festival and we will be eagerly awaiting your next post.
Well, Alpha Tina was really greatbut I really would have liked for her to have socked her another one for good measure. Anyway both Buckley’s got what they deserved. Now I just know the next chapter will be an NC-17. RIGHT? Have a great time on your vacation.
U r right, I’ll say it again “U can not Stop there”LOL but seriously I love this story and Tina’s Punch was GREAT shame about the hand though:)
Wow, that was something! Alpha Tina to the rescue and Bette liked it too. Have fun at the festival.
Ok, Tina was waiting for any explanation was she? Still don’t get this whole Faye thing. If she just wanted to apologize why come to The Planet. Don’t trust her, and hope she stays away from B&T.
Every girl should know how to deliver a good punch. Just in case certain people show up.. But what’s up with Faye B? Was that genuine remorse? Can’t wait until your next update, I love the story :) Peace ADx
Bette finds Alpha Tina hot? Niiice. Buckley is a creep. Hope the next chapter is hot and sweet.
No doubt about it: Alpha Tina is a hottie. I hope that sore wrist of hers won’t be an impediment when she gets her reward. And I hope Bette and Tina will be united as they battle whatever evil scheme Buckley’s cooked up. PS: I didn’t think you were going for laughs with the hand-stepping moment in Chapter 9. My (very nervous) laughter was a cathartic response to a truly wrenching situation (which would have made great TV; damn you, IC). I encountered the “Bax” concept on an L Word forum; sorry for sharing, because I know too well how hard it is to get that horrible image out of your head.
Yeah, Alpha Tina is well hot. And Faye Bitchley had it coming. It’s just a pity Tina didn’t get a second wallop in. That being said, I don’t think her appearance has done Bette and Tina any harm… Or has it? What’s Faye up to? Enquiring minds wanna know, so post as soon as you can… waiting 10 days is gonna be an agony. (But have fun!) Cheers, red.
Gotta agree with Bette, Tina was so fucking hot! Can’t figure Faye out though…guess I’ll just have to wait those ten days… Enjoy the festival.
Damn Red! You weren’t kidding when you said that Bette wasn’t gonna have a lot to say about it. Tina had everything to say about it…with her fist! LMAO. Tina definitely shouldn’t be embarassed and I have a feeling Bette will show her why!
Hmmmm…Bette will have to show Tina some “hands on” appreciation for coming to her rescue. LOL! PS.
I LOL’d@the air horn. XD Foxy Brown has spoken! And I am not surprised that Tina hurt herself from that punch. lol
Sweet, I love it when someone gets what’s coming to them and in this lifetime as opposed to the next! Awesome update. PPS
:) Just great! Will you give us another dose:)? PPS!
good for tina to defend bette…i think that faye is bette’s mother LOL
oh yeah!!!! thanks 4 posting b4 u go…waiting for u 2 get back…..
Oh no no sarcasm at all. I am pleased that you write the story as you do. And yet this is again a great update.
I understand Faye wanting to apologize but watching Bette and Tina get in the car and then leave. Not sure why she needed to see that. What I would think that she needs to see is Bette, Tina and Angelica. She needs to see how much Angelica’s mommies love her and how much Angelica loves her mommies.
That was awesome!