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Great Unexpectations Chapter 14
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Previously…
Tina quickly grabbed a towel as Bette finished her lap. She walked up the steps slowly, taking in all of the applause being offered. She said nothing as she walked to Tina, who could only stare mutely while holding out the towel. Bette took it and wrapped it around herself as she continued walking into the house on the way to her bedroom. Tina felt the butterflies in her stomach and let them govern her next move. She walked to Shane and handed her the barbeque tools. "You’re in charge of these." Picking up the baby monitor, she handed it to Alice. "You’re in charge of this." Saying nothing more she hastily followed Bette into the house, the sound of more cheering as her only escort.
Chapter 14.
Tina opened the bedroom door to find Bette sitting on the bed, leaning nakedly against the headboard, waiting for her. "What took you so long?", she said, smiling as Tina hurriedly lifted her own shirt over head and loosed her breasts from her bra.
"Oh my god. Do you have any idea what you’ve just done to me?", Tina asked. The look of lust in her eyes was fully endorsed by her quickly hardening nipples.
"Why don’t you tell me?", Bette said, noticing Tina’s arousal.
Removing her shorts and panties, she bit her bottom lip. "Why don’t I show ya, babe?"
"Um, because we have a yard full of friends waiting for us."
"They’ll understand", Tina said, breathing heavily while crawling onto the bed. Bette slid herself down so that her head was resting on the pillow, her wet hair soaking the pillowcase.
Tina, now directly over her, gazed deeply into those big brown eyes. "You are so beautiful, Bette. I love you so much. You know that don’t you?"
Bette nodded silently with parted lips, awaiting Tina’s kiss.
Back outside…
Shane stood over the grill scratching her head. "Hey guys. I have no idea what I’m doing here. Any help?" Angus stood up, flexed his muscles, and headed to the grill. "Here, let me Shane. This is man’s work", he joked.
Kit raised her eyebrows. "Oh no he didn’t!!" she said, feigning insult. She exchanged a glance with Helena and with like minds they rose to their feet and ran to him, pushing him into the pool.
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I really like the way you alternated the indoor/outdoor settings in this installment. The indoors action was, well, blistering is too mild a word. I’ve become a Dallas Roberts fan after seeing his wonderful turn in the recently released movie Joshua. I hope Angus’s storyline improves in S5, but I’m keeping my expectations low just in case it doesn’t (guess I’m doing the same thing when it comes to the show as a whole).
Ummm, thanks for the bird’s eye view. It is one I will never forget. It is now branded into my memory as my mind plays over and over Bette and Tina rocking and rolling to a tune only heard by them.
I guess I know who’s in charge, LOL!I’ll welcome an NC-17 from you anytime. Thank you!
YOub did a great job with that chapter, now I’m wondering what would have been written if it had been planned. We need more NC-17’s from you whether spur of the moment or planned. Youo did a great job. Sometimes I read at work, not very often, because our computers are monitored also. PPS
Red, I think I might have PM’d you but I’m not sure it went through. I think I forgot to put a subject in. Anyway, thanks for another great update. Such a sweet moment at the end when T wants to stay in their blissed out cocoon for another minute. And, I know it was the last chapter, but the standing bet that B&T have is hilarious!! Sounds like something my nutty friends would do. PPS and again, thanks for writing!
Now that was a nice little matinee. PPS.
I really like Angus too–he can’t be blamed for IC’s evil streak. Speaking of evil, I loved season 4 Jenny–anyone that crazy is hilarious. Great chapter, wonderful story, amazing writing. Patiently (not really) awaiting the next installment
I think I’ve got a crush on you Miss Redhorse. Love your writing… sweet, funny, and sexy. Perfect chapter.
Awesome chapter Red! It was too funny when Kit and Helena pushed Angus in the pool! I guess Angus will have to spend the day looking like a drowned rat! LOL! The love scene was extremely well done. Glad you didn’t just leave it as implied, as your writing just does them so much justice; and we just can’t get that anywhere else (especially on the show.) Thank you so much!
That was cute and sexy…pps
You need not have told us that it was an unplanned chapter.. because it clearly didn’t hinder your talent! Great stuff! I was wondering whether Angelica was still sleeping in B&T’s room.. and whether the.. achem.. meet would come through the baby monitor. But it didn’t, haha :) Yay for Angus in the pool. It was such a shame when IC wrote him into cheating on Kit.. I really didn’t see that coming – He loves Kit way too much.
If that was unplanned.. maybe you should just wing the rest of the story. Hot. Especially because you could feel the connection that only they have with each other..and having that unfold again in a sexual way is really fun to read. PPS.
Well, I thought you came up with a great love scene on such short notice. I need a cold shower now! PPS!!
I’m very glad you decided to write this chapter, it was so worth reading. It seems that Bette’s doubts are slowly been soothed away by Tina’s constant expression of love, she’s almost beleiving their future together as a family is possible. Thank you for taking the time to share this chapter.
Hmmm that was sure HOT!!!! PPS
Red… Damn. That most definitely did *not* suck, and there’s certainly no laughter from me. I’m too busy trying to pick my jaw up off the floor… That was *hot*. Um, rest of the chapter… yeah, Angus getting shoved in the pool, fair do’s, he deserved it. “Man’s work” indeed. Al & Shane, I feel sorry for Alice, but I have every faith Tasha’s coming home, and as for Shane & Paige, the breakup was inevitable. Back to B&T… yeah, *hot*. That’s about all I got, I’m useless for lucid comments about them right now. Post more as the mood strikes, great stuff so far. Cheers
OMG THAT WAS HOT!!!!! If that was unplanned. I guess we got lucky. I am so loving this. Thanks PPS
This barbeque just keeps getting hotter and hotter! WHEW! I hope Angus isn’t burning up dinner because these two are going to be a bit hungry after the workout they just gave each other.PS
All I can say is wow that was a great chapter. AngelDana is right about IC she seems intent on breaking up all the great couples on the show. One of the best things about this story other than the love that B&T are sharing is there is no creepy crazy Jenny.
*two thumbs up* Randomness is sometimes a great thing.
That was funny and hot!