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Great Unexpectations Chapter 14
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Tina, feeling Bette’s excitement build with her own, continued rocking, all the while adjusting her legs and hips to ensure the meeting of their centers was not interrupted. Tina positioned her head lower on Bette’s body now, giving her the opportunity to run her tongue over a dark breast. It was an opportunity she did not waste. She nipped and licked in a circle, large at first, but getting smaller as she neared the dark hard nipple. She teased the nipple softly between her teeth inciting shouts of excruciating pleasure from Bette. "Oh Fuck!! T!!!"
The combination of sensations coming from her breast and her throbbing center was too much to take. Bette’s body began to shake as she was overcome with an explosive orgasm. Bette’s spasming clit sent Tina into her own erotic eruption and she held on to her lover tightly. "Oh god, Bette!", she whispered. "I can feel you. Oh, god. I love you so much!"
Bette was unable to answer, as her throat was altogether occupied by a sassy combination of deep husky moans and high pitched squeals.
Tina buried her lips deeply into Bette’s bosom as they rode out the last of the blistering waves of passion.
As their motions slowly stilled, Tina kept her position on top of Bette. Resting her exhausted body, she leaned her head against Bette’s chest, enjoying the fingers of her lover as they gently ran through her hair. Their bodies gently heaved as they struggled to regain their breath and slow their pulses.
"Oh fuck", Bette panted. "That was amazing, Tina. We are definitely doing that again."
Tina, glistening from her efforts, smiled proudly. "You mean right now? ‘Cause if so, I’m gonna need a few minutes."
Bette chuckled. "No, not now. It would kill me right now. But definitely later."
They continued basking in the afterglow, feeling surprisingly little guilt over leaving their friends to fend for themselves.
"This is a fun party, Bette", Tina quipped. "We should do this more often."
"Mmm. That would be nice. Without all of the cooking and people though, right?"
"Exactly", Tina said looking up at her with sparkling eyes and dimples to match.
Bette leaned down and kissed her fully. "I think I’ve got a crush on you, Miss Kennard", she flirted.
"Mmm. Hope so."
Bette’s arms, securely wrapped around Tina to hold her close began to loosen regretfully. "Well, I guess we should get back out there."
"Yeah. Guess so. One more minute though, please?"
Bette nodded happily and wrapped her arms around her once more. "Ok, T. One more minute."
TBC
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I really like the way you alternated the indoor/outdoor settings in this installment. The indoors action was, well, blistering is too mild a word. I’ve become a Dallas Roberts fan after seeing his wonderful turn in the recently released movie Joshua. I hope Angus’s storyline improves in S5, but I’m keeping my expectations low just in case it doesn’t (guess I’m doing the same thing when it comes to the show as a whole).
Ummm, thanks for the bird’s eye view. It is one I will never forget. It is now branded into my memory as my mind plays over and over Bette and Tina rocking and rolling to a tune only heard by them.
I guess I know who’s in charge, LOL!I’ll welcome an NC-17 from you anytime. Thank you!
YOub did a great job with that chapter, now I’m wondering what would have been written if it had been planned. We need more NC-17’s from you whether spur of the moment or planned. Youo did a great job. Sometimes I read at work, not very often, because our computers are monitored also. PPS
Red, I think I might have PM’d you but I’m not sure it went through. I think I forgot to put a subject in. Anyway, thanks for another great update. Such a sweet moment at the end when T wants to stay in their blissed out cocoon for another minute. And, I know it was the last chapter, but the standing bet that B&T have is hilarious!! Sounds like something my nutty friends would do. PPS and again, thanks for writing!
Now that was a nice little matinee. PPS.
I really like Angus too–he can’t be blamed for IC’s evil streak. Speaking of evil, I loved season 4 Jenny–anyone that crazy is hilarious. Great chapter, wonderful story, amazing writing. Patiently (not really) awaiting the next installment
I think I’ve got a crush on you Miss Redhorse. Love your writing… sweet, funny, and sexy. Perfect chapter.
Awesome chapter Red! It was too funny when Kit and Helena pushed Angus in the pool! I guess Angus will have to spend the day looking like a drowned rat! LOL! The love scene was extremely well done. Glad you didn’t just leave it as implied, as your writing just does them so much justice; and we just can’t get that anywhere else (especially on the show.) Thank you so much!
That was cute and sexy…pps
You need not have told us that it was an unplanned chapter.. because it clearly didn’t hinder your talent! Great stuff! I was wondering whether Angelica was still sleeping in B&T’s room.. and whether the.. achem.. meet would come through the baby monitor. But it didn’t, haha :) Yay for Angus in the pool. It was such a shame when IC wrote him into cheating on Kit.. I really didn’t see that coming – He loves Kit way too much.
If that was unplanned.. maybe you should just wing the rest of the story. Hot. Especially because you could feel the connection that only they have with each other..and having that unfold again in a sexual way is really fun to read. PPS.
Well, I thought you came up with a great love scene on such short notice. I need a cold shower now! PPS!!
I’m very glad you decided to write this chapter, it was so worth reading. It seems that Bette’s doubts are slowly been soothed away by Tina’s constant expression of love, she’s almost beleiving their future together as a family is possible. Thank you for taking the time to share this chapter.
Hmmm that was sure HOT!!!! PPS
Red… Damn. That most definitely did *not* suck, and there’s certainly no laughter from me. I’m too busy trying to pick my jaw up off the floor… That was *hot*. Um, rest of the chapter… yeah, Angus getting shoved in the pool, fair do’s, he deserved it. “Man’s work” indeed. Al & Shane, I feel sorry for Alice, but I have every faith Tasha’s coming home, and as for Shane & Paige, the breakup was inevitable. Back to B&T… yeah, *hot*. That’s about all I got, I’m useless for lucid comments about them right now. Post more as the mood strikes, great stuff so far. Cheers
OMG THAT WAS HOT!!!!! If that was unplanned. I guess we got lucky. I am so loving this. Thanks PPS
This barbeque just keeps getting hotter and hotter! WHEW! I hope Angus isn’t burning up dinner because these two are going to be a bit hungry after the workout they just gave each other.PS
All I can say is wow that was a great chapter. AngelDana is right about IC she seems intent on breaking up all the great couples on the show. One of the best things about this story other than the love that B&T are sharing is there is no creepy crazy Jenny.
*two thumbs up* Randomness is sometimes a great thing.
That was funny and hot!