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Great Unexpectations Chapter 14
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Angus flailed about in the water, trying to recover from his shock at the quick introduction to the deep end while everybody else laughed. "What was that about ‘man’s work’?", Kit asked through her mirth.
Attempting to borrow absolution, he responded, "I humbly serve at the pleasure of you lovely ladies."
The women clapped in appreciation. "Damn straight", Kit said. "Now get up here and work this grill."
"Yes ma’am", he said smiling, raking his wet hair back with his fingers as he made his way to the steps.
Back inside…
Tina lowered her body to Bette’s and reveled in the feel of the wet, warm skin against her own. She kissed her gently at first, then gradually harder, thrusting her tongue inside Bette’s warm inviting mouth. Bette’s tongue joined the battle as moans made their appearance. Tina put her hands to Bette’s wet hair and held her as she began to slowly rub against her body. The tiny hairs of their centers rubbed against each other, resulting in the rapid production of wetness in that area. Tina shifted her position slightly to increase the contact of their loins, and stepped up the tempo one notch. Bette gasped. "Oh fuck, T. That feels so good", she moaned.
Outside…
Shane, being relieved from her cooking duties, took her seat and opened another beer. She looked over at Alice who was holding the baby monitor diligently, on the alert for even the slightest murmur from young miss Angelica. "So, Al? Heard anything from Tasha?"
Alice dropped her head. "No. Not yet. But I’ve decided that’s good news. No news is good news, right? I mean, if something bad had happened, I would’ve heard about it. I’m on her contact list."
Shane shrugged her shoulders. "I guess so."
"So what about you? What’s up with Paige?"
"At this moment", she paused, "there is nothing up with Paige. She’s gone. Went back home. Something. I dunno. I don’t wanna talk about it, ‘kay Al?"
" ‘Kay", Alice simply replied, turning her head forward and gazing at the pool.
Inside…
Tina buried her head in Bette’s neck and kissed it fiercely while continuing her rocking motions. Bette joined in on the body massage as they forced their centers closer together, encouraging the hardened nubs to meet. Bette began to bring her hand down to assist in that endeavor, but was gently stopped by Tina’s own hand. Tina thrust her hips into Bette’s. Their moist hard clits emerged from their protective folds and happily met. They almost seemed to hold onto each other, not letting the other go. Bette inhaled sharply and was at once driven to a state of arousal she’d not been to in a long while. Even since reuniting with Tina. "Oh my god, T. How did you…". Tina hushed her with a long, deep, wet kiss. It was now costing Bette all of her concentration to keep her motions in sync with Tina’s. Her hips and legs were crying to buck and rock with no intention of keeping any rhythm.
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I really like the way you alternated the indoor/outdoor settings in this installment. The indoors action was, well, blistering is too mild a word. I’ve become a Dallas Roberts fan after seeing his wonderful turn in the recently released movie Joshua. I hope Angus’s storyline improves in S5, but I’m keeping my expectations low just in case it doesn’t (guess I’m doing the same thing when it comes to the show as a whole).
Ummm, thanks for the bird’s eye view. It is one I will never forget. It is now branded into my memory as my mind plays over and over Bette and Tina rocking and rolling to a tune only heard by them.
I guess I know who’s in charge, LOL!I’ll welcome an NC-17 from you anytime. Thank you!
YOub did a great job with that chapter, now I’m wondering what would have been written if it had been planned. We need more NC-17’s from you whether spur of the moment or planned. Youo did a great job. Sometimes I read at work, not very often, because our computers are monitored also. PPS
Red, I think I might have PM’d you but I’m not sure it went through. I think I forgot to put a subject in. Anyway, thanks for another great update. Such a sweet moment at the end when T wants to stay in their blissed out cocoon for another minute. And, I know it was the last chapter, but the standing bet that B&T have is hilarious!! Sounds like something my nutty friends would do. PPS and again, thanks for writing!
Now that was a nice little matinee. PPS.
I really like Angus too–he can’t be blamed for IC’s evil streak. Speaking of evil, I loved season 4 Jenny–anyone that crazy is hilarious. Great chapter, wonderful story, amazing writing. Patiently (not really) awaiting the next installment
I think I’ve got a crush on you Miss Redhorse. Love your writing… sweet, funny, and sexy. Perfect chapter.
Awesome chapter Red! It was too funny when Kit and Helena pushed Angus in the pool! I guess Angus will have to spend the day looking like a drowned rat! LOL! The love scene was extremely well done. Glad you didn’t just leave it as implied, as your writing just does them so much justice; and we just can’t get that anywhere else (especially on the show.) Thank you so much!
That was cute and sexy…pps
You need not have told us that it was an unplanned chapter.. because it clearly didn’t hinder your talent! Great stuff! I was wondering whether Angelica was still sleeping in B&T’s room.. and whether the.. achem.. meet would come through the baby monitor. But it didn’t, haha :) Yay for Angus in the pool. It was such a shame when IC wrote him into cheating on Kit.. I really didn’t see that coming – He loves Kit way too much.
If that was unplanned.. maybe you should just wing the rest of the story. Hot. Especially because you could feel the connection that only they have with each other..and having that unfold again in a sexual way is really fun to read. PPS.
Well, I thought you came up with a great love scene on such short notice. I need a cold shower now! PPS!!
I’m very glad you decided to write this chapter, it was so worth reading. It seems that Bette’s doubts are slowly been soothed away by Tina’s constant expression of love, she’s almost beleiving their future together as a family is possible. Thank you for taking the time to share this chapter.
Hmmm that was sure HOT!!!! PPS
Red… Damn. That most definitely did *not* suck, and there’s certainly no laughter from me. I’m too busy trying to pick my jaw up off the floor… That was *hot*. Um, rest of the chapter… yeah, Angus getting shoved in the pool, fair do’s, he deserved it. “Man’s work” indeed. Al & Shane, I feel sorry for Alice, but I have every faith Tasha’s coming home, and as for Shane & Paige, the breakup was inevitable. Back to B&T… yeah, *hot*. That’s about all I got, I’m useless for lucid comments about them right now. Post more as the mood strikes, great stuff so far. Cheers
OMG THAT WAS HOT!!!!! If that was unplanned. I guess we got lucky. I am so loving this. Thanks PPS
This barbeque just keeps getting hotter and hotter! WHEW! I hope Angus isn’t burning up dinner because these two are going to be a bit hungry after the workout they just gave each other.PS
All I can say is wow that was a great chapter. AngelDana is right about IC she seems intent on breaking up all the great couples on the show. One of the best things about this story other than the love that B&T are sharing is there is no creepy crazy Jenny.
*two thumbs up* Randomness is sometimes a great thing.
That was funny and hot!