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Great Unexpectations Chapter 17
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Previously…
She ran to Tina’s door, thankful to see a tiny light still on. She knocked on the door while she tried to calm her racing pulse. After an excruciating minute, Tina opened the door with a smile. No smart-ass ‘it’s about time’ comment. No anger. Just Tina. Happy to see her. Bette’s panic began to fade as she was pulled into the apartment.
"You missed Angie. She’s asleep now."
"I’m sorry T. I-"
"It’s ok, Bette. I’m just happy you came", Tina said. "Besides, I already cancelled my cable and it’s hell dealing with those people. So you’re stuck with me now."
Bette’s relief overwhelmed her as she took Tina into her arms and kissed her passionately. Tina led her to the bedroom. Bette would later be surprised to recall that she hadn’t thought of Henry once that entire night. Only Tina.
Chapter 17.
The next morning Tina was navigating her car through the various drives of the university campus. Pulling up next to the curb, she put the car in park and looked over at a smiling Bette. "I guess this is you", she said. "Guess so", Bette replied slightly regretfully. Bette unfastened her seatbelt and softly leaned in to Tina’s delicate lips. She loved those lips. Loved everything attached to those lips. Loved thinking about where those lips had been last night. She had to make herself stop thinking about it. Quickly becoming victim to a sensual turmoil, she broke off the kiss. She looked to Tina and recognized the same look of turmoil in her beautiful hazel eyes. Cheeks slightly flushed. Longing lips. "I should get to work, T", she said barely above a warm whisper, their faces still within the danger zone. "Mmhmm", Tina responded weakly with a slight nod. Bette smiled and reached behind for the door, opening it slightly. Tina’s fixed gaze was now on Bette’s lips and Bette loved it. Loved having the power to transfix Tina with a look, a kiss, a touch. Loved that Tina had the same affect on her. She slammed the door shut again, snapping Tina out of her stupor. With a grin, Bette leaned over for one last kiss. "Ok, this time I mean it. I have to go. Thanks for the ride, T."
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excellent posting, love every sentance just wondering what the heck is that Faye Buckley up to ???pps
Red I love the way you write…so intriguing, and so descriptive. This was an excellent chapter. You don’t have to have bar room brawls, BBQ’s and coins for it to be exciting! *wink* However, having Bette Porter strutting naked around the pool once it awhile does seem to heighten the excitement level just a tad! LOL! Thank you so much Red! More please!
I wonder what the good lawyer and Miss Buckley are up too.
Definitely not a let down. The light, fun, happy, romantic Bette and Tina are wonderful to read. Not everything can be a big turning point.. but sometimes its even better that way. PPS.
Why is it Tina and Bette can imagine each other dressed in certain ways, or doing certain tasks and it always leads back to sex. Wait a minute I’m talking Bette and Tina, of course it leads to sex. Gotta love them. Still wondering what Faye is up to. It appears she’s trying to make amends but why?
What next? What next? huh? huh?
i’m really loving the way you write, i just got caught up with this whole story properly, and you’ve got me hooked!! its not often i read a story as its written, im so impatient that i usually go for finished stories but yours is just too good to not get hooked straight away!! im intrigued to see what faye buckley is up to. i love the way you capture all the characters perfectly, please post another chapter soon!! i don’t think i can take too long a wait!!
Great post..really enjoy B/T being happy and together..thanks
Storm clouds? I’m worried. Faye Buckley is an ill wind that blows no good. Thanks!
ooooh, grease monkey Tina could be quite hot. I love your happy, sexy, in love Bette and Tina. Still trying to figure out what our sneaky little Faye is up to…hmmmm. Great post rh!
Hrmmm… storm clouds and Faye Buckley. I like the sound of neither. I *do* like the idea of a glistening Tina, all smudged and dirty and…. Um. Yes. I’ll leave that train of thought now… I quite liked (read: loved) this chapter, as I’ve quite liked (read: loved) all of your other chapters. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next post, thanks, red.
OOh the foreshadowing! LOL. I’m not sure why you thought this chapter would be a let down cause it aint little missy! You’ve just moved the story along and judging by the nature of the comments got everyone hooked for the next wave. What IS Faye up to??? Why is Jenny such a pain in the ass? What exactly did Tina have for luch? All of this has us on the edge of our seats, anxiously waiting for more! Please do not doubt your abilities to amuse, entertain, and enthrall, they are ever present! PPS
Good chapter, love B&T!
ditto to what chelseagal and anngie mosby wrote. excellent as usual. i TOLD you she’d get towed.
mmm all the loving and all the intringue, thank u…
I love all your posts, even the ones without brawls and BBQ’s :). Glad to see Bette and Tina so infatuated with one another. I hope they never lose that feeling. Let’s get Tina home :)
Great update, can’t wait to see what the heck Buckley is up to.
Mmmmmm Grease Monkey Tina…*dies*
I am so loving this. Way to go Bette!!!! I just hope Faye takes the big hint and backs the F*** OFF. Thanks PPS
Faye Buckley is a pain in the ====. Does she want Bette or Tina. That right hook of Tina would stop me. I’ll wait.
What kind of scheming game plays Faye Buckley. I hope Bette and Tina be able to see through her game and resist
Like Audi, I love those angst-free moments in which Bette and Tina simply take pleasure in each other’s company. Is it the calm before whatever storm Faye Buckley is brewing? Bette seems just the type who would hum to C-Span!