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Great Unexpectations Chapter 17
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Tina watched Bette walk away from the car. She loved watching her walk away. Up the sidewalk and into the main entrance of the campus. She kept her car parked and watched intently until Bette was swallowed up by the populous hallways. She sighed with a smile and put the car in drive.
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Later that morning…
Bette was at her desk. She had her reading glasses on while studying the syllabi that had been submitted for the following semester. Pen in hand, she was making polite suggestions on a few of the instructor’s sheets. She was interrupted by a soft knock on the door. Looking up she saw James as he poked his head in the door. "Sorry, Bette. You wanted to see me?"
Bette looked up and took off her glasses with a smile. "James. Come in. Please." She waved him over with a quick secretive motion. He smiled at the playful mood she seemed to be in and entered the room at once, closing the door behind him. James could not help but marvel at the glow that Bette had about her. "What’s up?", he whispered with growing curiosity.
"James. I need a favor. Do you think you could drive me to the impound lot sometime today?"
"Sure. I could do that. You got towed, huh?"
Bette’s stretched lips eventually revealed her dazzling white smile. She could only nod and blush slightly.
"I’ve never seen anybody so happy to get towed before", he said, finding the smile contagious.
She sighed happily. "It’s a long story James. But the short version is- Tina is moving back home."
"Tina!! That’s great! I didn’t even know you two were…". He was finding it hard to finish the sentence without it leading to the subject of Jodi, so he didn’t finish.
Bette nodded knowingly. "It’s been…I don’t know. It’s been a crazy few weeks. But it’s good James. It’s very, very good."
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Later…
Tina, sitting at her desk, was finding it hard to concentrate on her task of the moment. All she could do was think of Bette. Of moving back into Bette’s house. Our house. Soon, and then forever. She grinned as she recalled their morning. Waking up to find Bette’s car gone. Rushing the normal morning routine so that she could take Bette back to the house for fresh clothes. The house. Our house. Get used to it Tina. Even the happy butterflies in her stomach could not comprehend how all of this had happened so quickly. So quickly on the one hand, yet an eternity on the other. The butterflies worked their way up to her chest, inciting tiny flutters that almost had her fearing for her consciousness.
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excellent posting, love every sentance just wondering what the heck is that Faye Buckley up to ???pps
Red I love the way you write…so intriguing, and so descriptive. This was an excellent chapter. You don’t have to have bar room brawls, BBQ’s and coins for it to be exciting! *wink* However, having Bette Porter strutting naked around the pool once it awhile does seem to heighten the excitement level just a tad! LOL! Thank you so much Red! More please!
I wonder what the good lawyer and Miss Buckley are up too.
Definitely not a let down. The light, fun, happy, romantic Bette and Tina are wonderful to read. Not everything can be a big turning point.. but sometimes its even better that way. PPS.
Why is it Tina and Bette can imagine each other dressed in certain ways, or doing certain tasks and it always leads back to sex. Wait a minute I’m talking Bette and Tina, of course it leads to sex. Gotta love them. Still wondering what Faye is up to. It appears she’s trying to make amends but why?
What next? What next? huh? huh?
i’m really loving the way you write, i just got caught up with this whole story properly, and you’ve got me hooked!! its not often i read a story as its written, im so impatient that i usually go for finished stories but yours is just too good to not get hooked straight away!! im intrigued to see what faye buckley is up to. i love the way you capture all the characters perfectly, please post another chapter soon!! i don’t think i can take too long a wait!!
Great post..really enjoy B/T being happy and together..thanks
Storm clouds? I’m worried. Faye Buckley is an ill wind that blows no good. Thanks!
ooooh, grease monkey Tina could be quite hot. I love your happy, sexy, in love Bette and Tina. Still trying to figure out what our sneaky little Faye is up to…hmmmm. Great post rh!
Hrmmm… storm clouds and Faye Buckley. I like the sound of neither. I *do* like the idea of a glistening Tina, all smudged and dirty and…. Um. Yes. I’ll leave that train of thought now… I quite liked (read: loved) this chapter, as I’ve quite liked (read: loved) all of your other chapters. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next post, thanks, red.
OOh the foreshadowing! LOL. I’m not sure why you thought this chapter would be a let down cause it aint little missy! You’ve just moved the story along and judging by the nature of the comments got everyone hooked for the next wave. What IS Faye up to??? Why is Jenny such a pain in the ass? What exactly did Tina have for luch? All of this has us on the edge of our seats, anxiously waiting for more! Please do not doubt your abilities to amuse, entertain, and enthrall, they are ever present! PPS
Good chapter, love B&T!
ditto to what chelseagal and anngie mosby wrote. excellent as usual. i TOLD you she’d get towed.
mmm all the loving and all the intringue, thank u…
I love all your posts, even the ones without brawls and BBQ’s :). Glad to see Bette and Tina so infatuated with one another. I hope they never lose that feeling. Let’s get Tina home :)
Great update, can’t wait to see what the heck Buckley is up to.
Mmmmmm Grease Monkey Tina…*dies*
I am so loving this. Way to go Bette!!!! I just hope Faye takes the big hint and backs the F*** OFF. Thanks PPS
Faye Buckley is a pain in the ====. Does she want Bette or Tina. That right hook of Tina would stop me. I’ll wait.
What kind of scheming game plays Faye Buckley. I hope Bette and Tina be able to see through her game and resist
Like Audi, I love those angst-free moments in which Bette and Tina simply take pleasure in each other’s company. Is it the calm before whatever storm Faye Buckley is brewing? Bette seems just the type who would hum to C-Span!