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Closure – Chapter 15
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Alice was incredibly weary. Dana thought briefly about postponing the activities of the day and then though it might actually be a bit easier for Alice if she were a little out of it.
Bette brought over some coffee for Alice and a danish. Alice gratefully sipped the coffee and picked at the pastry. Dana did not like how thin Alice had gotten. That is something else she would work on. One day at a time, though.
Bette and Shane moved away to let Tina and Dana take the lead on this next part.
“I want to take you to a doctor.” Dana could see Alice starting to object. “Please do it for me? If you are fine then there is no problem. I just want to make sure you are OK.”
Alice did not have the strength to disagree and decided it would be easier to give in. “OK. But… We don’t have to go to the emergency room, do we?” She asked softly. The thought of the hustle and noise of an ER made her nauseous.
Tina reached out and held her hand. “No you don’t. There is a private clinic that can see you today. We have already called.”
Alice just nodded. She seemed defeated. The group broke up shortly thereafter. Bette and Tina went to shop for the rental house. They were also going to pick up the keys. Shane went to change Alice’s locks and then get the mini over to the rental.
Dana once again carefully loaded Alice into the Mercedes and drove to the address Tina had given her. She couldn’t help but notice how Alice leaned forward in the seat to keep pressure off her back. Dana once again felt white hot rage at Jackie for doing this. “Focus, Fairbanks, focus” she said to herself to calm back down.
The clinic was on a very quiet street and looked like just any other house. Dana parked around back, as she was told, and helped Alice to the entrance. This particular clinic handled only domestic abuse cases and had experience with lesbian relationships.
Alice walked like she was a zombie into the waiting room. It was decorated very carefully to not look like a clinic, but, to have a more relaxed atmosphere. Dana guided Alice to a seat and went to the counter to check in. They happened to be the only people in the waiting room at the time. Dana finished up the paperwork (Tina had completed most of it over the phone) and sat back by Alice. Alice immediately rested her head on Dana’s shoulder.
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Lol, I seem to hav a knack for plot lines for porn, if porn can have a plot line I don’t know that’s a bit contradictory but hey not my idea totally the L word’s, have you saw all the “It’s On” tasters? Scary. Lol. This chapter was so moving I really feel Alice’s vunerabilty and Dana’s being a rock right now. GO TEAM DANISH! Please keep Alice ok, I’m so angry!!! Oooooooo, keep the posts coming I wanna see some butt kicking!
okay. We have todays weapon. SCREW DRIVER. Dana needs to stick it in her eye balls and hears then cut off her heads. So she can’t see touch or hear Alice anymore. JACKE NEEDS TO DIE. Poor poor al. GO TEAM BETIANANE bette tina shane dana woot. Anyway. Magoose I love your story. You made my day. I have a special new years story in the works. WOOT
Thanks girls for taking care of Alice. This is what we are calling friendship.Dana shows Jackie noboy plays with the love of your life:a tennis raquet on her face
I like how your doing this.
This is a wonderful story, sad as it is. As I read I think maybe someone in Alice’s situation sees that help is available. Good friend will help Alice make it.
I’m with MutedTempest on this one this chapter was really moving. It’s really difficult to read about such a broken Alice, that spirit that we all love about her has been well and truly quashed by Jackie but I have faith in your ability to restore it for us! Thanks for posting!
I think ya fried something in my head, been staring at the screen for last few minutes with millions of thoughts shoting around..beautifully written! The legal steps are now worked on, but with Alice on autopilot she will really need the girls when she hits emotional overload.
Im sooooooo glad the girls talked Al into going to the doctor(yay). Im mad as hell and sad all in one. U are doing one hell of a job telling this story,thanks!!! PPVS PS Im the first to comment woohoooo :)~
love dana more and more. i know jackie is gonna get hers, i know i have to wait… i’ll wait… excellent job of unfolding this story…:)
Our aminals sre treated like kings,how can anyone treat a human any less. Thanks for getting her to see a Dr. Now let get the police into the picture. Hate to see Helena,Dana,Kit,Bette Tina and Shane in jail in orange suits. I would like to see someone kick butt,but do it legally,or she will become someome whipping post in jail. thanks
I just just caught up with your story from finding it just last nite and well … Brilliant!! I knew from the minute you first introduced Jackie she was bad news and i got so angry myself when she hurt Alice so anyone can understand Dana’s need to protect her. I think you have done an amazing job with all the characters there real feeling to this story. Alice and Dana are written just fantastically, Dana is so soft and gentle but at the same time strong please continue with this story its fab :) x x x
I don’t know what it was about this chapter, but it really affected me emotionally, to the point where I almost couldn’t finish reading it through the tears. I made it though, and I have to say that I just adore your version of Dana and I want to give Alice a hug. Well, I always wanna do that, but you know what I mean. I’m a bit leery since you put in that bit about the order of protection making things dangerous for Al, and the fact that you said she’s in good hands “for now.” Please don’t hurt her. I don’t wanna have to hunt you down, ya know? Lol. Seriously, this is such a moving piece of work and I absolutely love it.
You should’ve started writing sooner. ;) This is very well written, I can understand Dana’s want to protect and hold Alice. Very well, I absolutely love this magoose. :)