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Closure – Chapter 15
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Alice nodded her head and said weakly “OK”. Dana liked this doctor already. They both had the same goal: take care of Alice no matter what.
“Can you get up on the exam table and we will start. I am going to explain everything as we go along. Please feel free to ask any questions.”
Alice weakly nodded her head. Abby continued “I would also like your permission to take some pictures to document what happened.” This seemed to rouse Alice.
“No. I don’t want that. She would be so mad.”
Dana put a comforting hand on Alice’s arm. “Al, honey, let’s just take this one step at a time, OK? Let Abby go ahead and take the photos. You don’t have to use them, but, you will have them if you decide to.”
Alice relented and said that was OK.
The exam was thorough and included x-rays and a rape exam. Dana was at Alice’s side during everything (well, right outside during the x-rays), holding her hand and whispering words of comfort and encouragement.
The bruise she saw on Alice back made her sick. The fact that anyone could harm someone as gentle as Alice was so wrong. The bruises Dana saw on Alice’s breasts and thighs made Dana beyond furious. Jackie was not going to get away with this.
Alice still needed to talk to the police. Abby had provided a report of her findings. They detailed all the injuries from the various beatings, old and new, and also the conclusion that the bruising and other injuries around Alice’s pelvic region were consistent with rape.
Abby led the couple into a quiet office off the lobby. There was another woman waiting there. “Alice? Dana? This is Olivia. She is a police detective and is very familiar with cases such as yours, Alice.”
Olivia shook Alice’s hand. “It’s nice to meet you, Alice. I have read over the doctor’s report and I can see that someone hurt you badly. I understand it was your girlfriend?”
Alice gave the tiniest of nods.
“This exam and a statement from you would be enough to get her arrested.”
Alice looked shocked. “What do you mean? She would be furious if I tried anything like that.”
Olivia could tell that Alice was not ready to take that step.
“We have enough to get an order for protection against her. Can we proceed with that?”
“I don’t think that would stop her.”
“That is all the more reason to prosecute her. But I am not going to push you. I have the OFP paperwork ready. Normally there would be a hearing, but, I have asked that it be waived. Your girlfriend can request one, if she wants, in the next five days. If she does not, then the OFP should go through without a problem. I just need you to sign it.”
Alice looked over at Dana. “Honey? I think it would be a good idea. We all just want you to be safe and get healthy.”
Alice nodded slowly and signed the form.
“Thank you, Alice. I will keep you informed on the status of this and we can talk in a couple days as to how you want to proceed from there, OK?”
“OK.”
Abby then took Alice to get some prescriptions. Olivia asked Dana to hang back for a minute.
“Can you tell me if Alice has a safe place to stay?”
“Yes, she does. It’s a place her girlfriend knows nothing about.”
“Good. You need to be extra vigilant the next few days. Abusers tend to get very angry when given a protection order against them. It is one of the most dangerous times for a victim.”
“Don’t worry. I am not going to let her out of my sight or let anyone hurt her.”
“Good. You have my card if you need to call me about anything.”
Abby came back over with Alice. She had a small paper bag and some prescription forms. Alice looked ready to fall over at that point. Dana thanked both women and carefully put her arm around Alice to lead her back to the car. It was obvious to both Abby and Olivia how much she cared for Alice.
A look passed between the doctor and detective. It was a look that said this one might make it.
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Lol, I seem to hav a knack for plot lines for porn, if porn can have a plot line I don’t know that’s a bit contradictory but hey not my idea totally the L word’s, have you saw all the “It’s On” tasters? Scary. Lol. This chapter was so moving I really feel Alice’s vunerabilty and Dana’s being a rock right now. GO TEAM DANISH! Please keep Alice ok, I’m so angry!!! Oooooooo, keep the posts coming I wanna see some butt kicking!
okay. We have todays weapon. SCREW DRIVER. Dana needs to stick it in her eye balls and hears then cut off her heads. So she can’t see touch or hear Alice anymore. JACKE NEEDS TO DIE. Poor poor al. GO TEAM BETIANANE bette tina shane dana woot. Anyway. Magoose I love your story. You made my day. I have a special new years story in the works. WOOT
Thanks girls for taking care of Alice. This is what we are calling friendship.Dana shows Jackie noboy plays with the love of your life:a tennis raquet on her face
I like how your doing this.
This is a wonderful story, sad as it is. As I read I think maybe someone in Alice’s situation sees that help is available. Good friend will help Alice make it.
I’m with MutedTempest on this one this chapter was really moving. It’s really difficult to read about such a broken Alice, that spirit that we all love about her has been well and truly quashed by Jackie but I have faith in your ability to restore it for us! Thanks for posting!
I think ya fried something in my head, been staring at the screen for last few minutes with millions of thoughts shoting around..beautifully written! The legal steps are now worked on, but with Alice on autopilot she will really need the girls when she hits emotional overload.
Im sooooooo glad the girls talked Al into going to the doctor(yay). Im mad as hell and sad all in one. U are doing one hell of a job telling this story,thanks!!! PPVS PS Im the first to comment woohoooo :)~
love dana more and more. i know jackie is gonna get hers, i know i have to wait… i’ll wait… excellent job of unfolding this story…:)
Our aminals sre treated like kings,how can anyone treat a human any less. Thanks for getting her to see a Dr. Now let get the police into the picture. Hate to see Helena,Dana,Kit,Bette Tina and Shane in jail in orange suits. I would like to see someone kick butt,but do it legally,or she will become someome whipping post in jail. thanks
I just just caught up with your story from finding it just last nite and well … Brilliant!! I knew from the minute you first introduced Jackie she was bad news and i got so angry myself when she hurt Alice so anyone can understand Dana’s need to protect her. I think you have done an amazing job with all the characters there real feeling to this story. Alice and Dana are written just fantastically, Dana is so soft and gentle but at the same time strong please continue with this story its fab :) x x x
I don’t know what it was about this chapter, but it really affected me emotionally, to the point where I almost couldn’t finish reading it through the tears. I made it though, and I have to say that I just adore your version of Dana and I want to give Alice a hug. Well, I always wanna do that, but you know what I mean. I’m a bit leery since you put in that bit about the order of protection making things dangerous for Al, and the fact that you said she’s in good hands “for now.” Please don’t hurt her. I don’t wanna have to hunt you down, ya know? Lol. Seriously, this is such a moving piece of work and I absolutely love it.
You should’ve started writing sooner. ;) This is very well written, I can understand Dana’s want to protect and hold Alice. Very well, I absolutely love this magoose. :)