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The ride to Dana’s was short and as soon as they got to the house they had to start getting ready for the dinner. Alice was in the shower and Dana was using up all of her strength not to jump in with the blonde and show her just how much she meant to her. Alice’s nose was only sore now not swollen and luckily it hadn’t bruised, not that Dana minded she would have been seen anywhere as long as Alice was on her arm. She was snapped out of her daydream when the bathroom door opened letting out a cloud of steam along with the blonde beauty that had filled her thoughts wrapped only in a towel. Alice stood in front of Dana and could see where her mind was wandering to, she grinned at the brunette.
“You’re having naughty thoughts Dana.”
Dana pulled the blonde to her and wrapped her arms around the wet body.
“What can I say, you’re gorgeous and you’re teasing me.”
“Am not, but I can if you want.”
Alice started to undo Dana’s trousers whilst she pressed her tongue at the pulse point on Dana’s neck. Dana was starting to get really worked up when her mobile started to ring. Groaning she reached into her pocket to answer the offending object, Alice didn’t move from her neck and continued to trace patterns with her tongue over Dana’s skin.
“Eric, what you want?”
“Fairbanks, I know how shit you are when it comes to timing. So I’m giving you a call to make sure you hurry your ass up.”
“Fuck you Eric. I’m getting ready.”
“Course you were. Just be there at seven and don’t forget to tell whoever you’re bringing that this is a formal, classy do. So no cheap whores.”
Dana cringed at what Eric had said. Alice was within ear shot of the phone and had stopped her assault on Dana’s neck. She plucked the mobile out of Dana’s hand and snapped it shut.
“You can tell him that no way is this whore cheap and I can do classy better than most.”
“Don’t say that. You’re not a whore Alice.”
Alice slid down to the floor and dragged Dana with her. She laid the brunette flat on her back and started to roll her trousers and underwear down her legs.
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Thrilled to see a new chapter from you whenever one shows up!! So where do I find someone like Alice? Holy moly. They really do need to be sharing showers. Earth Day is coming up soon. Gotta save that water. Yay to Alice for being so classy and sexy looking! Love the talk between the girls at the end. They need to do a lot of that. I wish Dana would just grab Alice and run far away. Sigh. Anyway… Thanks so much, felix86!! This was excellent! Good luck with your dissertation and post again when you get the chance. BTW: I would pick the “naked Alice” option.
felix86, I have been thinking about your story and here you are. Thank you. What a wonderful chapter. D got caught daydreaming by A. lol. Love how D adored A. I thought damsel is an accurate word to describe A with her current predicament. As good a time they could be having now, I can’t help but worry about your shout out and what would be installed for them. I hope the pimp was an illiterate so that he would not see any of the paparazzi photos. I love this story and like MaGoose said, good luck with your dissertation and looking forward to seeing your next update.
Hooray, hail Dana and Alice! Alice said “I will just tell them the truth.” lmfao…. She’s hilarious. And if I had to choose between fancy dinner and naked Alice. I go for NAKED ALICE, of course! Now, the part Alice says I’m your whore, was so hot (I sound so shallow, but it indeed was hot) and heartfelt. Man, thanks for finishing my awful day so bright! :) I can’t wait to see more! PPS
I have no idea how I missed the last update to this! Sorry. I went back and read them both in one shot though, and all I can say is yay. I love this story.
SWEET! I kinda lost track of this fic after the first two cahpters, but when I saw this, it all came back to me! This was hot and sexy and awesome! Can’t wait for the next post! Hopefully sooner rather then later :-P
Woot. Excellent, excellent, excellent. This is def a one of it’s own story. I really love the interaction between the two. So is the paparazzi going to play a part in this, because if Alice gets hurt….Dana better kick someones as$. Have to echo the above comments and say Thank you so much for an update to this great story.
I wold pick the naked Alice option as well. I love this story. It always makes me happy when I read it. It’s so original. Keep up the great work.
Yay :) Reli glad to see a new chpater from u Felix86! And tht wasnt boring in the slightest i loved it, like i love all ur other chapters its a great story. And i love how ur progressing with them, even if we have to endure the drama tht comes with it lol. Althou i spose it part of the fun. Damn i can imagine how hot both of the girls looked, especially Alice ;) lol. Glad there talking and Dana is being so damn cute and adoring and im glad Alice is letting her. And i think i mite choose the fancy dinner Alice, tht way i can see her in a great dress and then enjoy taking it off later on :P lol.