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pick up 4
“Yes I am. But I’m your whore Dana. I’ll do anything you ask.”
She kissed her way up Dana’s toned legs and started to suck at her inner thigh. Dana was starting to lose herself to the feeling of having the blonde between her legs as well as the fact that she had just said that she was hers.
“Alice. Oh fuck. Alice, the dinner?”
“Don’t worry I’ll get you there on time. You’ll have a smile on your beautiful face as well.”
With that Alice took a long lick up Dana’s centre causing the brunette to shudder. She flicked her tongue around the sensitive bundle of nerves that brought a moan from Dana every time the tip of her tongue passed over it. Dana ran her hands through Alice’s hair and held on as she started to move with the rhythm that Alice had set. She was coming hard and fast and loving every minute that the blonde was between her legs taking long, loving licks making her melt to the core. Dana felt a sudden calmness engulf her body just before she started to clench up and shake through the power of her orgasm.
“Fuck! Alice! Oh god! Oh god!”
Alice plunged her tongue deep into Dana allowing the brunette to let go and release her orgasm. Alice gently licked up all of Dana’s juices, lent up and kissed the panting brunette.
“You okay?”
“Yeah. You’re amazing.”
Alice crawled off Dana, stood up and held her hand out to the confused brunette.
“Come on you. You’ve got to get showered. You’re not to be late.”
“Don’t remind me. Do you want to shower with me?”
“Yes, but that’s not going to happen, or we’ll never leave. Go on, you get showered and leave me to get dressed.”
Dana reluctantly dragged her shaky legs into the shower and just let the water cascade off her as she slowly came back to her senses. She was completely infatuated with Alice and knew that it could be dangerous, but this was something that she didn’t care about, she had to have Alice in her life and she knew that the blonde felt the same way about her.
She shut off the shower, wrapped a towel around her body and walked to her bedroom to get ready. She was tempted to stop of at the spare bedroom where Alice was just to return the favour, but she knew that Alice was right; they’d never get to the dinner if anything more happened.
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(24 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
Thrilled to see a new chapter from you whenever one shows up!! So where do I find someone like Alice? Holy moly. They really do need to be sharing showers. Earth Day is coming up soon. Gotta save that water. Yay to Alice for being so classy and sexy looking! Love the talk between the girls at the end. They need to do a lot of that. I wish Dana would just grab Alice and run far away. Sigh. Anyway… Thanks so much, felix86!! This was excellent! Good luck with your dissertation and post again when you get the chance. BTW: I would pick the “naked Alice” option.
felix86, I have been thinking about your story and here you are. Thank you. What a wonderful chapter. D got caught daydreaming by A. lol. Love how D adored A. I thought damsel is an accurate word to describe A with her current predicament. As good a time they could be having now, I can’t help but worry about your shout out and what would be installed for them. I hope the pimp was an illiterate so that he would not see any of the paparazzi photos. I love this story and like MaGoose said, good luck with your dissertation and looking forward to seeing your next update.
Hooray, hail Dana and Alice! Alice said “I will just tell them the truth.” lmfao…. She’s hilarious. And if I had to choose between fancy dinner and naked Alice. I go for NAKED ALICE, of course! Now, the part Alice says I’m your whore, was so hot (I sound so shallow, but it indeed was hot) and heartfelt. Man, thanks for finishing my awful day so bright! :) I can’t wait to see more! PPS
I have no idea how I missed the last update to this! Sorry. I went back and read them both in one shot though, and all I can say is yay. I love this story.
SWEET! I kinda lost track of this fic after the first two cahpters, but when I saw this, it all came back to me! This was hot and sexy and awesome! Can’t wait for the next post! Hopefully sooner rather then later :-P
Woot. Excellent, excellent, excellent. This is def a one of it’s own story. I really love the interaction between the two. So is the paparazzi going to play a part in this, because if Alice gets hurt….Dana better kick someones as$. Have to echo the above comments and say Thank you so much for an update to this great story.
I wold pick the naked Alice option as well. I love this story. It always makes me happy when I read it. It’s so original. Keep up the great work.
Yay :) Reli glad to see a new chpater from u Felix86! And tht wasnt boring in the slightest i loved it, like i love all ur other chapters its a great story. And i love how ur progressing with them, even if we have to endure the drama tht comes with it lol. Althou i spose it part of the fun. Damn i can imagine how hot both of the girls looked, especially Alice ;) lol. Glad there talking and Dana is being so damn cute and adoring and im glad Alice is letting her. And i think i mite choose the fancy dinner Alice, tht way i can see her in a great dress and then enjoy taking it off later on :P lol.