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Seemingly Lost Chptr. 18
Tina sat in the kitchen with her mother snapping peas not really paying any attention to what she was doing. She still felt the slight tingle in her lower back from kissing Bette. But the more she thought about the kiss the more she became angry that Bette didn’t try and stop her from leaving.
“You know if you keep your mind wandering like that, someone is…”
“… bound to pick it up.” Tina said smiling and finishing her mother’s sentence. Something she always used to say when they lost focus of what they were doing around the house.
“When you gonna stop being stubborn and actually talk to that child. You know you want to.”
“I don’t know Momma. I just can’t be in the same space as her and not get angry at her and feel like… I don’t know.”
Just then her father came in, in his grease stained coveralls with his hands still a little dirty from working on Miah’s truck. “Teeny baby come help yo Daddy with this water pump, Sweetheart.” Tina looked over to her mother almost asking for permission, she simply took Tina’s bowl out of her lap and patted her on the back as she walked out. While in the refrigerator he grabbed two beers, he handed one to Tina as they walked out the front door. She smiled not really remembering the last time they shared a beer and worked on a car together.
“It’s been to long since I’ve spent time with my baby girl. How you doing Sweetheart?”
“I’m breathing Daddy, ain’t that enough.” she said sadly squinting her eyes from the falling sun and taking a long drink from her bottle.
“No, it’s not. Come on Sugar Bee talk to your old man. I know when you want to.”
“Actually Daddy I’m tired of talking. Since I got into Texas that’s all it seems like I’m doing.”
“Yeah but not to the right person. Come on have a seat.” he said patting the patch of grass right next to him under the same oak tree she loved to rest against. “I know all about what’s happened, Sweetheart. Now I know you’re upset, but you have to get over that and see what’s waiting for you on the other side of your pain.”
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(2 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
How can Tina let Bette go? Bette didn’t cheat on her. Bette was just loving her and trying to keep her from getting hurt. I feel for Tina,but hurt for Bette. Tina right now is the loser.
wow please post soon
OMg finally caught up! u gonna fix this right???? so sad sniff… but bette is right… tina needs to clear her head! :)PPS
This is so heartbreaking. It is not fair to Bette and I hope that Tina realizes that the reason she is so upset with Bette is because she actually is head over heels in love with her.
So much emotion. I can’t wait for you to fix these two. PS
Damn this is sad, don’t leave Bette!
Glad to see you back but this was a melencholy chapter. How r u gonna fix this?
Heartbreaking…
OK Netta…you brought tears to my eyes with that one. I know you will make it all better. You post whenever you can..it is always a treat to see that you have posted. Thanks for this great story.
god great writing, heartbreaking, but great writing!!!!
Oh, what a beautifully written chappie, but so sad. Please make it right. PPS.
so sad. please don’t leave us hanging too long …. i need to see how you are going to fix this (hint!). great story. pps
I just read the chapter again..it was just so wonderfully written, full of emotion…oh yea..and I was also hoping for more. ; )
WTH is wrong with Tina? how could she just let Bette go after that? very emotional…those two need to learn how to communicate and rely on their true feelings…i feel depressed now :(
This Tia is really making me want to slap her.Is she really going to let Bette go across the country.She needs to get her head out of her ass and confront the real betrayer here:Justine.Nicely written.
omfg! i’ve just spent the last 2 and a bit hrs reading this story and i’m gutted im up to date and there’s no more!! but tina’s made bette pay enough now, she needs to make the move to make things right, pps its absolutely brilliant!!
Wow-my heart hurts for them. Great job. PPS!