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Seemingly Lost Chptr. 18
“What’s that Daddy, love?”
“Well yeah, that and happiness. And everything that goes hand in hand with those two. When did you become so cynical?“
“It’s standard issue when you move to L.A. Daddy.“ Tina said smiling and rolling her eyes as she swigged from her beer. Knowing that she could get away with more snide side comments with her father a lot easier than her mother.
“Well let me ask you somethin’ smart ass, were you really that happy with that… Justine? I mean truly happy?”
Tina hesitated a bit then answered “I think so.”
“Well honey if the answer isn’t a definite yes, then the answer is no.” she huffed a little bit and rested her head on her father’s chest as he put his arm around her shoulders. “Now that woman’s been here for four whole days and you haven’t even so much as said boo to her.”
“We’ve talked Daddy…”
“Like adults?” to this Tina was silent. “I didn’t think so. Now I’m used to whole family dinners where the two of you talk non-stop and y’all somehow make your mother blush and me laugh.” Tina smiled thinking about some of the things they would do to get a new shade of red on her mother. “Now Sweetheart I didn’t raise you guys too run away from a fight.”
“Daddy this isn’t some bully on the playground, this is much more intense than anything you’ve prepared me for. This is something… something I know I’m not ready for.” she finished and dropped her head back down to his chest and let the smooth rise and fall of his chest comfort her for a while.
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Bette sat on the back patio porch just letting the summer wind occupy her thoughts. She looked to sky and saw the early presence of the evening approaching, painting the sky with a brush heavy in soft reds and orange yellows. Tina’s mother noticed she was sitting alone.
“Beer?” she asked as she made her way outside.
Bette smiled and held up a glass of sweet tea, “I’ve had enough alcohol for a while.” she finished as she put her foot down and made room for Tina’s mother to join her. She sat down beside Bette and stared at Bette, she almost looked serene.
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(2 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
How can Tina let Bette go? Bette didn’t cheat on her. Bette was just loving her and trying to keep her from getting hurt. I feel for Tina,but hurt for Bette. Tina right now is the loser.
wow please post soon
OMg finally caught up! u gonna fix this right???? so sad sniff… but bette is right… tina needs to clear her head! :)PPS
This is so heartbreaking. It is not fair to Bette and I hope that Tina realizes that the reason she is so upset with Bette is because she actually is head over heels in love with her.
So much emotion. I can’t wait for you to fix these two. PS
Damn this is sad, don’t leave Bette!
Glad to see you back but this was a melencholy chapter. How r u gonna fix this?
Heartbreaking…
OK Netta…you brought tears to my eyes with that one. I know you will make it all better. You post whenever you can..it is always a treat to see that you have posted. Thanks for this great story.
god great writing, heartbreaking, but great writing!!!!
Oh, what a beautifully written chappie, but so sad. Please make it right. PPS.
so sad. please don’t leave us hanging too long …. i need to see how you are going to fix this (hint!). great story. pps
I just read the chapter again..it was just so wonderfully written, full of emotion…oh yea..and I was also hoping for more. ; )
WTH is wrong with Tina? how could she just let Bette go after that? very emotional…those two need to learn how to communicate and rely on their true feelings…i feel depressed now :(
This Tia is really making me want to slap her.Is she really going to let Bette go across the country.She needs to get her head out of her ass and confront the real betrayer here:Justine.Nicely written.
omfg! i’ve just spent the last 2 and a bit hrs reading this story and i’m gutted im up to date and there’s no more!! but tina’s made bette pay enough now, she needs to make the move to make things right, pps its absolutely brilliant!!
Wow-my heart hurts for them. Great job. PPS!