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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Five and Epilogue (a HYD-inspired fic)
CHAPTER FIFTY FIVE: If You Leave, Don’t Look Back
Previously..
Tina stirred.
Somewhere outside, she could hear the sound of an engine purring. Of a car door closing. But she paid them no mind. Those were just normal sounds from the street.
She succumbed back to a state of near sleep, allowing herself to regain lost strength. Her body ached all over, her muscles spasming due to the intense workout of the past night. Instinctively, she put an arm out to the other side of the bed. She frowned when she hit pillows instead of a warm body. Where’s-
“Porter?” She sat up, rubbing her eyes free from sleep. Oh no, had she overslept again? “Por-” She stopped.
Her lips curved into a smile when she saw a single sunflower on the empty pillow beside her. Bette, she thought fondly. Right beside the flower lay a black rectangular box and a folded piece of paper. Gingerly, she took the flower in her hands and brought it to her nose, inhaling its scent. She closed her eyes, remembering that lazy afternoon in the apartment when Bette told her all about flowers and the meanings behind them. In true Porter fashion, she gave her a pop quiz afterwards – and every right answer earned her a very pleasurable reward. Sunflowers, if she recalled correctly, were given to signify adoration. Opening her eyes, she discovered that she was right.
To the woman whose body I would never tire of worshiping. Were the words written at the back of the letter in Bette’s neat script.
She was about to reach for it when something caught her eye.
Eternity.
It was written in a simple script on the edge of the black box. The writing seemed familiar. She couldn’t remember when or where, but she had the strangest feeling that she saw it before.
Driven by curiosity, she took hold of it first. Opening the box slowly, she gasped at the surprise that lay inside. It was a necklace. A silver heart-shaped pendant in a small delicate chain. The heart sparkled as she took it out of the box and examined it – rays from the sun that had entered the room through the parted curtain bounced off the many tiny diamonds that adorned the pendant.
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Suejan says
Thank u for this amazing and fabulous story that I n all the readers have enjoyed so much:) Also thank u for generous chapters n hope t c a sequel soon. :))
akalittlered says
That was an Amazing story. Thank you so much for all the work and heart you put into it. THank you I do hope we get another story for you at some point.
ntnrml61 says
Al,You have to be my favorite writer! You are so talented and gifted with words! Every chapter that I have read has made me laugh(hysterically at times)and cry (sobbing at some points) and actually feeling the heartbreak between those two! Tina running after a plane? OMG … Yes I am sorry to see you leave us for a bit but I hope You are planning the sequel!! Thank You for this wonderful Journey and I for one will be waiting for your name to pop up on my “favorite authors” list. Take Care! :)
Nanc says
Just catching up on your story – wow! ANd just want to say if you write another story: ‘So I’m asking you, please, take me with you.” – ;-D
mush1912 says
oh alchemy – i have llooooovvvvvveeeeed this story so much! How you wrote this couple was brilliant…especially Bette! the humour and F4, well it’s just been one of my favourite stories ever! I’m so pleased how this last chapter played out, all along it’s been Bette who’s made the sacrifices and done anything to please Tina but this was all Tina making things right and getting them back together, permanently! Please don’t stay away from these boards for long and let me join in with everyone else and pray for the sequel! Thanks for the brilliant story Alc!!
valenkat7 says
Loved this story and I’m hoping that maybe you’ll write a sequel? Thanks so much!
m_s_gypsy says
WOW. Im giving you a well rounded applause as of this writing :) Alchemy thank you for this story. Its been 55 Chapters of roller coaster ride. You are an amazing writer and though its saddening that JTG is ending, there is a flicker of hope because its not really the end. Will be awaiting for whats next.
StormyOne says
This story was the best..I’m sad to see it end. I loved watching Bette grow with Tina’s help and love along the way. A sequel would be great.Forgetting these two and their group will be hard.
mlyn3251 says
I’ve loved this story from the beginning to the end. You are a fantastic writer and I can’t wait for the sequel. Like jp22 I was just grinning like crazy by the end.
cdngrl says
From start to finish, this story was fantastic. I am so sad to see the end. Please post a sequel very soon.
annieb69 says
luved this story, luved every chapter, luved every character, great, great writing!!!!!!!!!!!!
wrpchi says
What a fantastic story. I started reading when you had posted about 15 chapters, was immediately hooked and couldn’t wait for each succeeding chapter. Thanks so much for sharing this story. I look forward to the sequel and anything else that you choose to write.
lucybelly says
Brilliant, Alchemy! As much as I was dreading your story coming to an end, the end was absolutely perfect. This has been one of my favorite reads. I’ve savored every paragraph and very much appreciate you sharing your talent. Can’t wait for a sequel or perhaps you’ll throw us a bone with a one-off or two….
Sharod says
Love the ending of JTG.
dazzlecarol says
I know i am very late to reading this story.Someone pointed me towards it.I have to say its the best fan fiction i have read.It’s been brilliantly funny having me laugh out loud and so sad at Ch54 it had me in tears but thankfully they are going to be together.I’m told there is a sequel so i am gonna go look for it.Thankyou once again it was brilliant
banana says
Thank you for this fantastic story! What a great ride it’s been! NYU has a good film school and NY has an active film industry – plus it’s only a short train ride from New Haven. :-) Tina can have both her loves, full time – I know she’ll figure it out. Thank you again!
Englishmuffin says
Thanks, for this brilliant story you have given us, the fantastic if not a bit dramatic ending and an extra extra thanks for making everything work out good in the end between Bette and Tina :-D fingers crossed you decide to do a sequel
jp22 says
I’m sitting here with a big, silly grin on my face… This was a such a great story, touching, dramatic, funny, and really just fantastic all around. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed every word of it. I’ll certainly be reading if you do a sequel. Thanks so much, Alchemy. :)
Janbear says
Thank you for a such a awesome story. Can’t wait for the sequel. Hope it will be soon. Thanks again for sharing
Jackiee1 says
I’ll miss these two, have enjoyed the ride. Thank you
KirbyP says
I just love this story and your writing! I can’t wait for the sequel! Thanks!
SweetLuhv says
Hey Alchemy, I am one of your silent readers. It was an awesome story as you are a wonderful writer.. looking forward to your next story.
ut says
That was awesome and amazing ending. So happy for them and glad at the end Tina is going with Bette, and damn the mile high club is hot and love it. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope you will sequel this story soon or new story please lol. Thanks for wonderful story !!!!!!
menfisar says
i love this sotry!!!! it was just great!!!.you just have to make a sequel, it would be fun and great too.thanks
dulez says
I can’t tell u how much I enjoyed reading this story, I give up watching TV and movies for days to just read it in every available spare time I had,and I don’t regretted, u r a great writer, and seems I’m hooked to ur stories, so I’ll be following ur writing forever ;) thanks to OZGAL for leading me to ur way :) good luck and keep up the good work. Thank u a lot for sharing ur master piece with us ;D
topcat says
This has been one of my all time favourite story iv read on this board I can`nt count how many times iv went back and read this thank you al pps.
mamadoc91 says
Great story!! I laughed and cried and laughed some more. Thank you!