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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Five and Epilogue (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“The Mile High Club?” Bette smirked.
“You wanna?”
“Do you even have to ask?” Bette stood up and extended a hand to the blonde, helping the girl to her feet.
“Quickie?”
“Hell no.” The brunette shook her head. “We still have five hours to go before we land. You think you can do it standing up for that long?”
“Is that a challenge Porter?” Tina arched an eyebrow.
“Maybe. Think you’re up to par Kennard?”
Tina laughed sarcastically. “Babe, all that running that I did only proves that I have strong legs. You on the other hand,” She poked Bette on the chest and pushed her inside the lavatory. “I bet your knees are gonna buckle within half an hour.”
“Oh really?” Bette slyly grinned, pulling Tina by the shirt. “I could last far longer than that.”
“One hour?”
“Three.”
“Ooh, someone’s ambitious..” Tina teased as she helped her girlfriend out of her blouse.
Bette leaned in for a kiss before pulling the blonde’s shirt over her head. “You should aim high.”
“Then why don’t you aim for five?”
“Five hours?” Bette whistled, running her hands up and down Tina’s toned stomach. “You have to carry me out after, I’m gonna be paralyzed from the waist down.”
Tina gave Bette a loving kiss. “Fine, two and a half then. I want you fully functional.”
“For what?”
“For more sex when we arrive in New Haven.”
Bette chuckled. “I swear, I’m beginning to think you only want me for my body.”
“Yeah, and your bank account too.”
“What?!”
“Kidding!” Tina laughed as Bette pretended to pout. “I want you because of this,” She tapped the side of Bette’s head. “And this,” She placed her hand over Bette’s chest, feeling the rhythmic beating of her lover’s heart. “And this,” They both laughed as she playfully swatted Bette’s crotch. “And because of the tiny, kinda insignificant fact that I’m madly, head over heels, I-will-run-after-your-plane crazy in love with you.” Her face glowed as she looked at Bette.
“Nice save.”
“Thank you.” Tina moaned as the brunette bent down and bit a hardened nipple over the lacy material of her bra. “This Mile High Club thing, will we get membership cards for this?” She breathed hard as Bette kissed her way down her body and knelt on the floor.
“No, but we get some privileges.” She said as she unbuttoned Tina’s jeans and pulled it down to her knees.
The blonde licked her lips in anticipation as her girlfriend massaged her crotch and hooped her fingers underneath the waistband of her panties. Wasting no time, eh? She smiled at Bette. “What sort of privilig-aaaaaaahhhh..”
Bette looked up and smirked. “That.” She gave her lover’s wet lips another long swipe. “And this.. and this.. and this.. and..”
“Fuck!”
“Patience my dear.” The brunette stopped and teased.
Tina grabbed Bette’s head and pushed it back between her legs.
“Or not.”
THE END
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Thank u for this amazing and fabulous story that I n all the readers have enjoyed so much:) Also thank u for generous chapters n hope t c a sequel soon. :))
That was an Amazing story. Thank you so much for all the work and heart you put into it. THank you I do hope we get another story for you at some point.
Al,You have to be my favorite writer! You are so talented and gifted with words! Every chapter that I have read has made me laugh(hysterically at times)and cry (sobbing at some points) and actually feeling the heartbreak between those two! Tina running after a plane? OMG … Yes I am sorry to see you leave us for a bit but I hope You are planning the sequel!! Thank You for this wonderful Journey and I for one will be waiting for your name to pop up on my “favorite authors” list. Take Care! :)
Just catching up on your story – wow! ANd just want to say if you write another story: ‘So I’m asking you, please, take me with you.” – ;-D
oh alchemy – i have llooooovvvvvveeeeed this story so much! How you wrote this couple was brilliant…especially Bette! the humour and F4, well it’s just been one of my favourite stories ever! I’m so pleased how this last chapter played out, all along it’s been Bette who’s made the sacrifices and done anything to please Tina but this was all Tina making things right and getting them back together, permanently! Please don’t stay away from these boards for long and let me join in with everyone else and pray for the sequel! Thanks for the brilliant story Alc!!
Loved this story and I’m hoping that maybe you’ll write a sequel? Thanks so much!
WOW. Im giving you a well rounded applause as of this writing :) Alchemy thank you for this story. Its been 55 Chapters of roller coaster ride. You are an amazing writer and though its saddening that JTG is ending, there is a flicker of hope because its not really the end. Will be awaiting for whats next.
This story was the best..I’m sad to see it end. I loved watching Bette grow with Tina’s help and love along the way. A sequel would be great.Forgetting these two and their group will be hard.
I’ve loved this story from the beginning to the end. You are a fantastic writer and I can’t wait for the sequel. Like jp22 I was just grinning like crazy by the end.
From start to finish, this story was fantastic. I am so sad to see the end. Please post a sequel very soon.
luved this story, luved every chapter, luved every character, great, great writing!!!!!!!!!!!!
What a fantastic story. I started reading when you had posted about 15 chapters, was immediately hooked and couldn’t wait for each succeeding chapter. Thanks so much for sharing this story. I look forward to the sequel and anything else that you choose to write.
Brilliant, Alchemy! As much as I was dreading your story coming to an end, the end was absolutely perfect. This has been one of my favorite reads. I’ve savored every paragraph and very much appreciate you sharing your talent. Can’t wait for a sequel or perhaps you’ll throw us a bone with a one-off or two….
Love the ending of JTG.
I know i am very late to reading this story.Someone pointed me towards it.I have to say its the best fan fiction i have read.It’s been brilliantly funny having me laugh out loud and so sad at Ch54 it had me in tears but thankfully they are going to be together.I’m told there is a sequel so i am gonna go look for it.Thankyou once again it was brilliant
Thank you for this fantastic story! What a great ride it’s been! NYU has a good film school and NY has an active film industry – plus it’s only a short train ride from New Haven. :-) Tina can have both her loves, full time – I know she’ll figure it out. Thank you again!
Thanks, for this brilliant story you have given us, the fantastic if not a bit dramatic ending and an extra extra thanks for making everything work out good in the end between Bette and Tina :-D fingers crossed you decide to do a sequel
I’m sitting here with a big, silly grin on my face… This was a such a great story, touching, dramatic, funny, and really just fantastic all around. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed every word of it. I’ll certainly be reading if you do a sequel. Thanks so much, Alchemy. :)
Thank you for a such a awesome story. Can’t wait for the sequel. Hope it will be soon. Thanks again for sharing
I’ll miss these two, have enjoyed the ride. Thank you
I just love this story and your writing! I can’t wait for the sequel! Thanks!
Hey Alchemy, I am one of your silent readers. It was an awesome story as you are a wonderful writer.. looking forward to your next story.
That was awesome and amazing ending. So happy for them and glad at the end Tina is going with Bette, and damn the mile high club is hot and love it. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope you will sequel this story soon or new story please lol. Thanks for wonderful story !!!!!!
i love this sotry!!!! it was just great!!!.you just have to make a sequel, it would be fun and great too.thanks
I can’t tell u how much I enjoyed reading this story, I give up watching TV and movies for days to just read it in every available spare time I had,and I don’t regretted, u r a great writer, and seems I’m hooked to ur stories, so I’ll be following ur writing forever ;) thanks to OZGAL for leading me to ur way :) good luck and keep up the good work. Thank u a lot for sharing ur master piece with us ;D
This has been one of my all time favourite story iv read on this board I can`nt count how many times iv went back and read this thank you al pps.
Great story!! I laughed and cried and laughed some more. Thank you!