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My Captor -Ch7
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(Few days later when Shane went with Carmen dress shopping)
Carmen: It’s tommorrow and I still haven’t found anything to wear! Shane!
Shane was just starring off into space.
Shane: Huh?
Carmen: How does this one look?
Shane: It look fine.
She was being serious. Carmen had tried on at least ten dresses. All of them looked great on her. She was going colorblind. All of them were colorful, lacy, shiny, and even vintagey.
Carmen: Come in here and help me.
Shane got up from her comfortable chair. She walked into the dressing room yawning and scratching her head. Carmen closed the door and tackled her. Shane moaned from being squahsed.
Shane: You’re going to break my back. Get off.
Carmen: But this is the only time I get to show you my affection without being worried bullets might go into you.
Shane turne around under Carmen.
Shane: So you tricked me in here?
Carmen gave her a million dollar smile.
Carmen: You know you like it.
Shane: You deserve a punnishment.
Shane started tickling Carmen while she was struggling and squirming, Shane got on top of her after Carmen dropped down to the floor to avoid being tickled. . Shane stopped tickling her and kissed her instead. Carmen playfully bit Shane’s lip making Shane bleed, but she didn’t care. She unzipped the dress to find Carmen wearing some lacy black bra. Shane nipped at Carmen’s neck. Her hands got under the dress ready to pull it off of her. Carmen moaned in pleasure feeling her spine tingle as Shane’s lips touched her neck.
Sales Woman: Is everything okay in there?
Carmen and Shane looked at each other and laughed.
Carmen: Yeah! Just a minute!
Shane got up and helped Carmen up.
Shane: It’s just not meant to be.
She said with a sad doggy face. Carmen cupped Shane’s face and gave her a kiss.
Carmen: It’s okay. We’ll find time.
Carmen opened the door to let Shane out so she could try on another dress. Shane went out and sat down again. What didn’t suprise her was when Bette came and sat down in the chair behind her with Tina oogling over the dresses.
Bette: This is what I pay you for?
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Holy SHIT!!!!
ack!!! wicked chap..and how cool to have an infirmary in your house
just started reading this fic…very xciting…kudos to u my friend!
Shane got shot! Noo! I hope she gets better soon. It was sweet how she thought about Carmen when she realized what had happened to her. *sigh* This could help Shane get closer to Cezar, if he thinks she’s loyal to him. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Please let Shane be okay. (Oh, and Carmen is super cute! No wonder Shane can’t resist her, no matter how much of a hardass she makes herself out to be.)
ahh cliffhanger!!i love this story, pms!
Now what? Shane is Ok? I thought Shane was gonna be the one who would shoot Carmen’s father though she loved Carmen. I can’t go away form this fic. It’s just so good.
Shane?!?!?!?! Shot?!?!?!?! More than oNce?!?!?!?!?! oh God! she’s gonna be okay?!?!?!? right?!?! of course she will…. (fingers crossed) hmm?! well, this just made Shane’s situation of gaining trust even easier. She takes a bullet for Ceasar… Caesar rewards her by giving her his trust (cuz she already has Carmen’s) and Caesar boots his god son away who gets jealous and wants to retaliate on Shane. am i close!? just kidding… thinking aloud, that’s all. n e way… ya know i’m lovin’ this fic. can’t wait to read more.