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    My Captor -Ch7

    Shane: You sound like my mother.

    Carmen pushed Shane towards her room.

    Shane: You know I do have my own room right?

    Carmen: I feel safer with you next to me.

    Shane: That’s a really lame excuse.

    Carmen: Shut up and go. You know you like it too.

    Shane obliged to her mistress’s wishes. She showered, got into her pajamas and slipped into bed. She felt Carmen move closer to her. She kissed her on the forehead goodnight and turned off the lights.

    The next night Shane was sent out of Carmen’s room to wait for her while she got ready. All the guests were arriving in the ballroom. Shane flipped a coin waiting for Carmen. She had picked out for her a black tux with gray vertical lines. Her black tie had a silver clip on it. She also found a new Rolex waiting for her after she got out of the shower. The door opened and Carmen emerged with a silver dress. It hugged her body in all the right places showing off her heavenly curves. Carmen glided towards her.

    Carmen: Stop gawking.

    She fixed the hankerchief on Shane’s pocket. Shane gulped.

    Carmen: Glad you like it.

    Camren smoothed out Shane’s tux and gave her a kiss. She wrapped her arm around Shane’s and they made their way down to the ballroom. There were lots of guests that night. Shane stood by Carmen’s side the whole night. She watched her dance with the other guests and Carlos. It was finally the last dance. Both Carmen and her had been waiting to dance together. Carmen was making her way over to Shane when Carlos cut in. Carmen looked unhappy, but she complied. She couldn’t make a scene tonight. She looked into Shane’s eyes and saw the sad expression come over Shane’s face. She knew she would make up for it. Shane turned and went towards the balcony to breath some fresh air. Carmen wanted so badly to run towards her and tell her how much she actually wanted to dance with her, but knew this wasn’t the time to act rashly. A pair of hands grabbed Shane.

    Shane: Where are we going?

    Man: Cezar wants to see us. He needs to go out tonight to cut some deal.

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    Comments

    1. Shane got shot! Noo! I hope she gets better soon. It was sweet how she thought about Carmen when she realized what had happened to her. *sigh* This could help Shane get closer to Cezar, if he thinks she’s loyal to him. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Please let Shane be okay. (Oh, and Carmen is super cute! No wonder Shane can’t resist her, no matter how much of a hardass she makes herself out to be.)

    2. Now what? Shane is Ok? I thought Shane was gonna be the one who would shoot Carmen’s father though she loved Carmen. I can’t go away form this fic. It’s just so good.

    3. Shane?!?!?!?! Shot?!?!?!?! More than oNce?!?!?!?!?! oh God! she’s gonna be okay?!?!?!? right?!?! of course she will…. (fingers crossed) hmm?! well, this just made Shane’s situation of gaining trust even easier. She takes a bullet for Ceasar… Caesar rewards her by giving her his trust (cuz she already has Carmen’s) and Caesar boots his god son away who gets jealous and wants to retaliate on Shane. am i close!? just kidding… thinking aloud, that’s all. n e way… ya know i’m lovin’ this fic. can’t wait to read more.

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