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My Captor -Ch7
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Shane: Cezar has been out. He’s never home.
Bette: Playing around in the dressing room? Common Shane, you know better than that. As a normal person and a detective.
Shane: It’s not like anything happened.
Bette: Does she know anything?
Shane: Doesn’t seem like it. Her father keeps Carlos, the godson, around. Doesn’t want his little girl to get her hands dirty.
Bette: How sweet, but I don’t care, find me something.
Bette dragged Tina off before Carmen came out wearing her normal clothes.
Shane: Where’s your dress?
Carmen: It’s a suprise.
Shane: I hate suprises.
Carmen gave her a little squeeze.
Carmen: You’ll love it.
Shane: That’s what you said for the salty waffle, the raw sandwich, rotten apple, and the loaded gun that you thought was a bubble blower.
Carmen: Opps.
She smiled innocently.
Carmen: That was an honest mistake!
Shane: One that nearly blew my head off. I’m really starting to question whether I’ll die from you or your father.
Carmen and Shane walked hand in hand back to the car before Shane drove them back to the house. Shane saw Cezar’s personal car outside.
Carmen: Daddy’s home! I better go shower before I see him. I’ll see you in a bit.
Carmen leaned over and kissed Shane on the cheek. Shane parked the car in the garage before going into the house. She sneaked quietly to the study where Cezar always stayed.
Cezar: Tommorrow, after the ball, I’ll have the money delivered personally. You give me my info, I’ll give your payment.
Shane heard footsteps approaching behind her. She took off silently in the other direction.
Shane’s thought: That dance’ll have to wait I guess.
She slipped into the kitchen where the chefs were preparing dinner. Shane had gotten to know all of them and they happily gave her some food. She stayed in there to keep away from Cezar. And she was thinking about what to do. It was already after dinner so Carmen ventured in looking for her. She spotted Shane lying down on a counter top sleeping. She went over and kissed Shane. Shane opened one eye and lifted her head a little when she felt Carmen pulling away.
Carmen: Mmf enough, common let’s get you showered then off to bed.
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Holy SHIT!!!!
ack!!! wicked chap..and how cool to have an infirmary in your house
just started reading this fic…very xciting…kudos to u my friend!
Shane got shot! Noo! I hope she gets better soon. It was sweet how she thought about Carmen when she realized what had happened to her. *sigh* This could help Shane get closer to Cezar, if he thinks she’s loyal to him. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Please let Shane be okay. (Oh, and Carmen is super cute! No wonder Shane can’t resist her, no matter how much of a hardass she makes herself out to be.)
ahh cliffhanger!!i love this story, pms!
Now what? Shane is Ok? I thought Shane was gonna be the one who would shoot Carmen’s father though she loved Carmen. I can’t go away form this fic. It’s just so good.
Shane?!?!?!?! Shot?!?!?!?! More than oNce?!?!?!?!?! oh God! she’s gonna be okay?!?!?!? right?!?! of course she will…. (fingers crossed) hmm?! well, this just made Shane’s situation of gaining trust even easier. She takes a bullet for Ceasar… Caesar rewards her by giving her his trust (cuz she already has Carmen’s) and Caesar boots his god son away who gets jealous and wants to retaliate on Shane. am i close!? just kidding… thinking aloud, that’s all. n e way… ya know i’m lovin’ this fic. can’t wait to read more.