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    My Captor- Chapter 30

     

    Shane: Carmen! Get back here!

     

    Shane chased after her girlfriend who made a dash for the car. Shane beat her like always. Shane placed one hand on each side of Carmen trapping her. Carmen wrapped her arm around Shane’s neck pulling her closer. She gave her a wild kiss.

     

    Carmen: Please?

     

    Shane couldn’t fight against her puppy eyes and gave up.

     

    Shane: Fine, but you call me when you get there. And come back at 7. We’re having dinner tonight.

     

    Carmen: We always have dinner. Everywhere.

     

    Shane was about to tickle her but Carmen quickly ran into the car.

     

    Shane: Be safe.

     

    Carmen waved bye and blew her a kiss. Shane sighed, sad watching her leave. She went back into the house and sat on her desk leafing through the paperwork. Her phone started to ring. She had a new picture message. It showed Carmen getting out of the car at the Planet. Shane instantly freaked. Grabbing her gun she got on her motorcycle and chased after Carmen’s car. Carmen’s car was long gone. The engine roared loudly as she screeched into a stop in front of the Planet, it looked deserted. The parking lot was pretty empty too. She spotted Carmen’s BMW. Getting off her bike and stuffing the keys in her pocket, she took out her gun and pulled the hammer back getting ready to shoot anything that could pose a threat. It was dark inside the Planet. Shane was trying hard to get her eyes to adjust. All the blinds were closed too. Shane was cautious moving around.

     

    Shane: Carmen?

     

    She saw a flicker of light coming from a candle in the middle of the room. She saw the familiar brown wavy hair. She moved closer.

     

    Shane: Carm.

     

    Dana and Alice were hiding behind the bar.

     

    Alice: You think she’ll shoot us?

     

    Dana nodded.

     

    Alice: Oh well.

     

    Alice pulled on a string that pulled the head off the mannequin. Shane was so spooked she took a shot at the slightest movement in the room, which was at Dana who escaped barely. She forgot to get the rope connecting to the banner.

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    1. awesome chaps!!! holy hell waiting for carm to wake up and the gang should have known what overprotecive shane would do, heck of a surpirse….can’t wait for the sequal

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