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My Captor- Chapter 30
Carmen: Shane.
Shane strained her ears to listen for Carmen. She stepped closer and closer to the mannequin.
Shane: Where are you Carmen?
She got close enough to the mannequin to see it was wearing a dress. It was just a wooden one with a wig. Shane spun around when she hear noises being her.
Everyone: Surprise!
Dim lights came on and Shane saw everyone standing behind Carmen wearing dresses. Carmen was in a gorgeous white gown.
Shane: What?
Alice: This is the part where you put away your gun.
Shane put the safety on and placed her gun back in her holster. Carmen walked closer to her. Her eyes sparkled. A spotlight followed her. She stopped in front of a still amazed Shane.
Shane: What is all this?
Carmen knelt to the ground and pulled out a band. Dana pulled the banner open just as Carmen asked.
Carmen: Shane McCutcheon, will you marry me?
Shane didn’t know whether to smile, laugh, or cry. She had been so worried just a few moments ago, but now the woman of her dreams was proposing to her? She stood there with her moth agape trying to take in the information. Everyone circled around the couple waiting for Shane to regain her senses. Alice pushed Shane’s jaw up to close her mouth.
Alice: Say I do.
Alice whispered.
Shane: Uhh…
Carmen’s eyes looked into her own searching for an answer. Shane was so taken aback by all this. Her mind was everywhere. Everyone was expecting an answer. But she was still shocked.
Shane: I never knew I’d be proposed to like this. Never thought it’d be so scary. But yes. Carmen, yes. I would definitely love to marry you.
Carmen got up and jumped into Shane’s arms kissing her.
Carmen: I love you. I love you. I love you.
Kit: Awe, how sweet.
Tina: You can shove all those paper work aside onto Bette’s desk. I’ll make her finish them for you.
Bette: Hey!
Everyone laughed. The lights were turned on and Dana reattached the head of the mannequin.
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awesome chaps!!! holy hell waiting for carm to wake up and the gang should have known what overprotecive shane would do, heck of a surpirse….can’t wait for the sequal
YESSSSSSS!!!!!Great job!!!
fantastic fic…u had me rite from the beginnin and i’m glad it turned out this way!!!!