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    At first sight

    Story written on February 28, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76987
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    Chapter 20

    CHAPTER 20
    Tina had retreated to her room still holding the file the policeman had handed her. This was her third day at the centre and she had just left a meeting with the supporting staff. The investigations into her identity and her real life were complete and  what she held in her hand was her life as it really was. A few sheets of neatly typed facts which laid out, who she was, where she lived and what she did for a living. There was even a picture of her. None of it felt right to her though.  She had no recollection of having ever lived this life.
    She looked at  her picture, hoping she would not see a resemblance, that this really was not her and that what the doctor had said, had been a dream, was the reality. She had to face the facts. She had to be patient as they had said, the pieces of her real life would eventually reform in her head.
    The picture was probably of some sort of work ID, although it did not have the mugshot feel work IDs conveyed. The picture stopped right below her shoulders. She could see the top part of what seemed to be a business suit. Her hair was loose and neatly tucked behind her ears. It seemed shorter than it was now. Her make up was light. She had a beautiful, natural smile on her lips.
    She noticed a little necklace around her neck, silver it seemed. The pendant was her initial, a little cursive letter "T". Very understated, she obviously did not like over the top jewellery. 
    She unconsciously reached at the base of her neck to feel for the little letter. It was not there. She was not wearing it. She wondered where this necklace was. When she had been discharged from hospital, it had not been handed back to her.  
    Maybe she had lost it in the accident. She felt somewhat uneasy about the possibility that this necklace might be lost. Ridiculous she thought, "Two minutes ago, you did not know you owned it and now you are worried it might be lost!"
    She threw the file on her bed and reclined on her pillow.
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    3. OMG… WHY WHY WHY WHY are you ending this story… like the others have said.. we need a sequel.. please… this was so good… i don’t want to see it end… please pps

    4. This has been a great story even if sometimes confusing but great nevertheless. Hate to see the story end when it is just getting to the point of a possible romance between them. I also understand when an author feels they have reached the end of the story whether the readers like it or not. So in that vein, I hope we get a sequel or epilogue or something that does not leave us hanging. Thanks for posting.

    6. This story was beautifully crafted and imaginative. I looked forward to each new chapter and as everyone else I am sorry to see it end, but you’ve brought it a great conclusion. You’ve done an amazing job. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    10. Beautiful,totally beautiful!..I can’t thanked you enough for this wonderful story..From beginning to end It’s simply …BEAUTIFUL!.. Another story please?…

    12. Noooooo…the end?? Fantastic story that I hate to see ending. Happy though that you’ve promised an epilogue. Thanks for sharing your talent and I’m hoping to see you back posting another tale.

    20. Thanks for this beautiful and touching story! Kudos to you Kins40 :-) just finished re read from the beginning, kinda sad it’s ending – funny that I still feel the same way though I knew it already. :-p yeah, silly me! But would it be possible to write the sequel or epilogue just to clarify what happen next to our favourite girls? Will Bette still in tune with Tina as all what happened between them were only in Tina’s imagination? Is the reality not as beautiful as in the dream so it’s better to end it here to avoid breaking all the readers heart? ;-)

    23. Excellent fic! Not only the storyline is great but it made me more knowledgeable of the blinds world. The ending is awesome but somehow I wanted more. read you soon.

    26. Thanks so much for this story. I’m glad they finally met each other. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see where their relationship goes.

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