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    At first sight

    Story written on February 28, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 20

    The nurse had apologised profusely for confounding her as what she had actually meant to say was that Tina had woken up and had been moved to a special rehabilitation unit.
    Bette had been overjoyed at the news the nurse had shared with her, however her elation was short lived when she was informed that hospital policy relating the doctor/patient confidentiality prevented the hospital from disclosing her whereabouts. 
    They explained that once they were informed of her recovery, they would ask her if she wished to meet the people who had helped her during her hospitalisation and they would then act on the directions the patient herself would provide. Until such time, Bette would unfortunately not be able to contact her.  
    She felt like her world had crumbled around her. She would never see her again. That was it. The knot that had formed in her stomach tightened even further at that thought. There was  no way that she could phone all rehab clinics in the state and ask for her whereabouts. She would simply never be handed this information in the first place. She might even attract the interest of the law if she threatened to carry out what could only be interpreted as stalker behaviour. 
    She sighed. She was intrigued though by what the doctor had told her, at her insistence, given her involvement during the coma. The doctor had reluctantly divulged that the patient had transferred her experience with the people around her during the coma into a dream which she now believed to be reality. 
    The most striking statement was that she, Bette, had played an intrinsic part in this dream and her alter ego had grown very close to the patient. The doctor would not divulge anymore than that but for this reason and primarily for the patient’s recovery it was best if Bette stayed away. 
    Close! How close? Could it be that the feelings Bette had developed for the pretty sleeping woman had subconsciously connected with her? She chuckled to herself, this was the stuff of novels and Hollywood production, not real life…..real life was far more intransigent. 
    She decided to go for a drive. Driving had always relaxed her. She got in her car and sped down the road. She had no destination in mind. She’d see where traffic would take her and before she knew it she had left the city and was now driving up a winding road along the coast. "Perfect!" she thought "Nature…..all I need to be left alone with my thoughts!" 
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    3. OMG… WHY WHY WHY WHY are you ending this story… like the others have said.. we need a sequel.. please… this was so good… i don’t want to see it end… please pps

    4. This has been a great story even if sometimes confusing but great nevertheless. Hate to see the story end when it is just getting to the point of a possible romance between them. I also understand when an author feels they have reached the end of the story whether the readers like it or not. So in that vein, I hope we get a sequel or epilogue or something that does not leave us hanging. Thanks for posting.

    6. This story was beautifully crafted and imaginative. I looked forward to each new chapter and as everyone else I am sorry to see it end, but you’ve brought it a great conclusion. You’ve done an amazing job. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    10. Beautiful,totally beautiful!..I can’t thanked you enough for this wonderful story..From beginning to end It’s simply …BEAUTIFUL!.. Another story please?…

    12. Noooooo…the end?? Fantastic story that I hate to see ending. Happy though that you’ve promised an epilogue. Thanks for sharing your talent and I’m hoping to see you back posting another tale.

    20. Thanks for this beautiful and touching story! Kudos to you Kins40 :-) just finished re read from the beginning, kinda sad it’s ending – funny that I still feel the same way though I knew it already. :-p yeah, silly me! But would it be possible to write the sequel or epilogue just to clarify what happen next to our favourite girls? Will Bette still in tune with Tina as all what happened between them were only in Tina’s imagination? Is the reality not as beautiful as in the dream so it’s better to end it here to avoid breaking all the readers heart? ;-)

    23. Excellent fic! Not only the storyline is great but it made me more knowledgeable of the blinds world. The ending is awesome but somehow I wanted more. read you soon.

    26. Thanks so much for this story. I’m glad they finally met each other. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see where their relationship goes.

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