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    At first sight

    Story written on February 28, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76987
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    Chapter 20

    There was a knock on her door.
    "Come in" she said. The door opened and Dana entered.
    "Hey, just wanted to check on you….see how you are doing after hearing about your life…the real one that is!"
    "I’m OK I guess! It’s so surreal…..you were in my dream and you are real…why is the rest not!"
    "I know…the mind is a funny thing…" Dana did not have time to finish
     when Tina interrupted her.
    "Would you take me there?"
    "Take you where?" Dana asked her eyebrows raised.
    "Where I had the accident…….would you take me there?" Tina was looking straight at her.
    "Oh…..I am not sure this is a good idea! You might not be up to it, physically to start with and then ….maybe we should run this past the psych…" again Dana was interrupted mid-flow.
    "Dana! …..are you or are you not in charge of my recovery?" Tina asked forcefully.
    "I am here to help …yes….but I would not want to endanger you by taking you out in the world too early!" she replied.
    "Please Dana!" Tina pleaded, "I need answers…and I think that if I go to see where all this happened in the first place, it might help me recall something!"
    Dana was still unsure, but she could not imagine what it was like to be in Tina’s situation. A little trip down the coast could not hurt her patient after all. Sunshine, fresh air could only be good for her. She had been cooped up indoors for far too long.
    "Ok….I suppose I could arrange something for later on during the week" Dana said trying not to sound defeated.
    "No!….I want to go today……….I want to go now!" Tina exclaimed.
    Bette was dragging herself through her house, wandering aimlessly like a lost soul. She almost felt like she was mourning. She had arrived at the hospital to find that T was no longer there.
    Her heart had jumped in her throat when she opened the door of her room and found an empty bed. A nurse had just reached her to tell her that unfortunately she had gone. Bette chuckled at her reaction when the nurse told her that. She thought her  "T" had passed…..died….God…she wished she would never have to hear this news about her….ever!
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    3. OMG… WHY WHY WHY WHY are you ending this story… like the others have said.. we need a sequel.. please… this was so good… i don’t want to see it end… please pps

    4. This has been a great story even if sometimes confusing but great nevertheless. Hate to see the story end when it is just getting to the point of a possible romance between them. I also understand when an author feels they have reached the end of the story whether the readers like it or not. So in that vein, I hope we get a sequel or epilogue or something that does not leave us hanging. Thanks for posting.

    6. This story was beautifully crafted and imaginative. I looked forward to each new chapter and as everyone else I am sorry to see it end, but you’ve brought it a great conclusion. You’ve done an amazing job. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    10. Beautiful,totally beautiful!..I can’t thanked you enough for this wonderful story..From beginning to end It’s simply …BEAUTIFUL!.. Another story please?…

    12. Noooooo…the end?? Fantastic story that I hate to see ending. Happy though that you’ve promised an epilogue. Thanks for sharing your talent and I’m hoping to see you back posting another tale.

    20. Thanks for this beautiful and touching story! Kudos to you Kins40 :-) just finished re read from the beginning, kinda sad it’s ending – funny that I still feel the same way though I knew it already. :-p yeah, silly me! But would it be possible to write the sequel or epilogue just to clarify what happen next to our favourite girls? Will Bette still in tune with Tina as all what happened between them were only in Tina’s imagination? Is the reality not as beautiful as in the dream so it’s better to end it here to avoid breaking all the readers heart? ;-)

    23. Excellent fic! Not only the storyline is great but it made me more knowledgeable of the blinds world. The ending is awesome but somehow I wanted more. read you soon.

    26. Thanks so much for this story. I’m glad they finally met each other. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see where their relationship goes.

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