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    At first sight

    Story written on February 28, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76987
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    Chapter 20

    "Oh no," Tina thought, "she has left this behind!" 
    She grabbed the necklace, and called out to the woman, nearly running after her.
    "Excuse me!" Tina called out as she looked at the item in the palm of her hand. "Excuse m…" she rooted in the spot. Her heart stopped. There in her hand was her very own necklace.
    The woman turned around at hearing the call. As she did so, the sun hit her right in the eyes. She squinted. She could not distinguish the person who was addressing her. She brought her hand to her forehead in peak cap and sheltered her eyes from the glare of the sun. Her eyes focused on her interlocutor. The blond head was down looking at her opened hand, in it rested the little necklace.
    Then the brunette saw the blond head slowly lift and two Hazel eyes met two chocolate brown eyes for the first time. Realisation hit them both at the same time. Breaths caught in their throats.
    "It’s you!" they murmured in unison.
    Time stood still. The two women held each other’s gaze intensely. A hint of a smile slowly appearing on their lips. They stood there for what seemed an eternity never wanting this moment to stop. Their heartbeats were picking up momentum.
    Fate had finally brought them together. 
    With this one single look, almost delving into each other’s souls, they shared their deepest longings. Longing to leap at the sound of one voice, longing to be filled with joy by one smile, longing to feel the thrill of holding a hand, longing to feel the flow of love, respect and adoration when one kiss is placed in the palm of a hand, longing to be warmed by strong arms, longing to feel the passion as a hand caresses a face and beautiful eyes stare into beautiful eyes before a tender kiss, longing to be calmed and comforted in a soft embrace, longing to express desire as a hand is placed on a lower back, longing in the sensual passion of a gentle touch when two souls finally promise each other eternity in the intimacy of the night.
    They had imagined this moment a hundred times before, even dreamt of it. This was it, their elusive meeting of perfection. 
    Standing across from each other, where not so long ago and in less than favourable circumstances it had all begun, they were both instantly coming to the realisation that even in their imagination it had undeniably been love at first sight.
    The End.
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    3. OMG… WHY WHY WHY WHY are you ending this story… like the others have said.. we need a sequel.. please… this was so good… i don’t want to see it end… please pps

    4. This has been a great story even if sometimes confusing but great nevertheless. Hate to see the story end when it is just getting to the point of a possible romance between them. I also understand when an author feels they have reached the end of the story whether the readers like it or not. So in that vein, I hope we get a sequel or epilogue or something that does not leave us hanging. Thanks for posting.

    6. This story was beautifully crafted and imaginative. I looked forward to each new chapter and as everyone else I am sorry to see it end, but you’ve brought it a great conclusion. You’ve done an amazing job. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    10. Beautiful,totally beautiful!..I can’t thanked you enough for this wonderful story..From beginning to end It’s simply …BEAUTIFUL!.. Another story please?…

    12. Noooooo…the end?? Fantastic story that I hate to see ending. Happy though that you’ve promised an epilogue. Thanks for sharing your talent and I’m hoping to see you back posting another tale.

    20. Thanks for this beautiful and touching story! Kudos to you Kins40 :-) just finished re read from the beginning, kinda sad it’s ending – funny that I still feel the same way though I knew it already. :-p yeah, silly me! But would it be possible to write the sequel or epilogue just to clarify what happen next to our favourite girls? Will Bette still in tune with Tina as all what happened between them were only in Tina’s imagination? Is the reality not as beautiful as in the dream so it’s better to end it here to avoid breaking all the readers heart? ;-)

    23. Excellent fic! Not only the storyline is great but it made me more knowledgeable of the blinds world. The ending is awesome but somehow I wanted more. read you soon.

    26. Thanks so much for this story. I’m glad they finally met each other. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see where their relationship goes.

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