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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter five
The warmth from the chalet felt positively stifling compared to the seemingly glacial temperature outside. It took Tina by surprise as she felt her limbs tighten in the freezing breeze.
She stepped forward hesitantly and watched with a childish glee on her face as the snowflakes twirled softly around her. The storm had definitely gone and those calmer remnants only meant one thing; she would be home soon. She had said so to her father earlier on that morning. There was no reason for her to stay, nothing holding her back. Except…
She watched Bette as the brunette followed her out and headed for a little outbuilding adjoining the chalet.
“How are you feeling?” Tina heard her ask, her voice muffled somewhat by the fact that Bette was halfway inside the shed with her back turned.
“Great. Look!”
Bette glanced over her shoulder briefly to see Tina taking a few confident steps.
“Indeed,” she acquiesced, her tone indifferent, “Totally healed.”
The brunette averted her eyes almost immediately to carry on inspecting the wood pile in front of her before choosing a large log which she placed on the chopping block at her feet. She grabbed the axe which hung neatly on two rusting nails by the shed door, and swung it with such dexterity and precision that the log split in two perfect halves with one single move.
“So, what are you intent on doing when you get back to London?” Bette asked further as she proceeded to split the log further into smaller bits.
“Who knows?” Maybe I’ll put my diploma to good use and I’ll start work in earnest.”
Bette did not answer straight away. Tina didn’t really know why but she had hoped for a word or two of encouragement from her host but the gruff woman had remained concentrated on her task. Undeterred Tina walked nearer to her, hoping her close proximity would force Bette to look up from her chore.
The fresh air had cleared her head but the sensation which had taken over her senses during lunch had not subsided. If anything the burning coil in her stomach was increasing and the raw force Bette was emanating as she chopped log after log did nothing to appease her mounting desire to explore something new and troubling with the brunette.
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Sorry to hear about your computer problems. Glad you got to resort to plan D.
It was a absolutely 10 stars update.
I only didn’t see Tina’s first time with Bette like that coming, against a wall, but it shouldn’t be so surprising considering how Bette can be. Her second time was filled with tenderness.
I wonder how you are going to preceed with Tina returning to London and Bette staying behind.
I think Tina should mature and make something from her life, less partying, more working and less a daddy’s girl., before their is a healthy chance for a relationship between them.
oke, enough rambling, thanks for a great update!
….and that folks is how you write an NC17
Great chapter Kins my dear friend…Full of passion and desire for one another..A Tibette coming together..I bet
Tina wont be in any great hurry to return to London
So looking forward to the next chapter and possibly some more getting to know one another even better.
Loved it sweetie….PPS…C xx
That is how you do it!! Now, that my dear friends is love at its best! I’m having computer issues too. PPS
First the Dallas Cowboys win and now this..I am having a lucky day..gosh I love this story…now im waiting for their reaction afterwards
A lots of butterflies inside my stomach now…. Thank you for a great update. Pps
Absolutely beautifully written. I too was as dizzy as Tina as I read. It’s so good to have you back, Kins.
Just amazing! Bette devoured Tina. Your writing is simply sublime. And your NC-17s are passionate but not tawdry.
Wow!!! Tina has finally had her curiosity sated and questions answered in a magnificent way by the one and only Bette Porter. She can now say, “damn, so that’s what it is all about and how I’m supposed to feel after. My curiosity has been peaked regarding Bette since Tina first stumbled upon her and the chalet. What in the world is she doing in such an isolated area or is it really isolated, what does she do for a living and what has she been saying to Tina’s father to give him peace of mind about Tina being hurt and lost in such an isolated area. So many questions about our one and only. Fantastic story as always Kins. So happy to have you back with us. Thanks for posting and have a great week.
Wonderful to have you back posting Kins! You are a talented storyteller and writer with no need to resort to bad language to produce a truly passionate post. Thank you.
Sorry for your computer problems but good that you have enough reserve Plans to post!
Hoping the various Plan Options enable a follow up Chapter asap!
WOW! What chapter. I loved it, absolutely loved it.
although I still love the love of Tibette.
It was passionate, hot, and very gentle and loving. I love the way you write.
I wonder what will happen next. maybe it is a turning point in their relationship? or an eternal reminder?
I hope Tina stays for a while, and she realizes that this is what was missing in her life so far!
It was great and I look forward to the next chapter.
Great test drive! I bet this was more than Tina was hoping for! And now what? Hope your pc feels better. Wonderful to have you back!
The snow around the house should have melted all
! because it was too hot inside.
Love that NC 17 was of great quality.
Let’s see how they will look from now.
10 stars.
I have no doubt that you are simply one of the greatest here. I so love this story. I know that you have a lot of surprises for us regarding Bette’s background and I’m so excited for it.
I love you. Haha! Please post soon!
Scribe
Oh.My.God. It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of these NC-17. Yikes and holy smokes…all in a good way.
I wonder if Bette works for Tina’s father….hmm. I can’t wait to read more.
T
wow! That was HOT Kins!
Keep it coming dear friend! Amazing as always.
Oh damn that was hot and beautiful