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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter five
It took the time of a semi-comical fight with uncooperative clothes and a sensual glide of a bronzed body below the covers to start spelling the rest.
They curled to face each other, eyes locked before inching closer once more opening their mouths to each other no longer hesitant but tasting the definite want in each other. Bette rolled Tina onto her back, a tan leg pressed high between paler ones. Their kiss continued, long, slow skate of tongues, before Bette abandoned rosy lips to let her mouth travel along a jawline up to a fleshy earlobe, she hungrily sucked on.
Tina whimpered at the sensation, clawing lightly at Bette’s back, lifting her hips to meet the brunette’s down thrusting ones. Just like that, in the slowly darkening room, their bodies found a gentle rhythm, rolling as one.
There was a long exhale when Bette’s hand finally fell to Tina’s breast, cupping it tenderly. The blonde had her eyes closed savouring the slightly possessive feeling, sensing the dark gaze of the brunette when the pad of her thumb slipped over the nipple. Her skin had already puckered in response to the way they were moving against each other.
Images of the brunette appeared and disappeared in turn, as Tina opened and closed her eyes in slow blinks, the tan face above her changing with each hitch in Tina’s breathing, each tiny moans that tripped forward from the back of her throat.
And sometimes their lips met again, languidly swallowing the next moan.
Bette rolled away but not too far, keeping full body length contact, to let her hand wander further, across the valley of her breasts, down the line of her flawless tummy, over the curve of her hip and finally to let curious fingers find the heat between Tina’s legs.
Positioned perfectly next to and below each other the tension built slowly, bodies thrumming, tightening in expectant anticipation, Tina looked up into and met a warm chocolate gaze who without any words asked for permission.
And once granted by a subtle smile, Bette played with her with diligent patience this time; dipping into her, sliding and circling against her with slick ease, each brush of her fingertips, each thrust of her hand, each twist of her wrist a perfect and timely response to the gasps , moans and pleas Tina offered.
The blonde came for the second time that night, her cries hiding the soft words Bette was murmuring into her shoulder as she held her close.
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Sorry to hear about your computer problems. Glad you got to resort to plan D.
It was a absolutely 10 stars update.
I only didn’t see Tina’s first time with Bette like that coming, against a wall, but it shouldn’t be so surprising considering how Bette can be. Her second time was filled with tenderness.
I wonder how you are going to preceed with Tina returning to London and Bette staying behind.
I think Tina should mature and make something from her life, less partying, more working and less a daddy’s girl., before their is a healthy chance for a relationship between them.
oke, enough rambling, thanks for a great update!
….and that folks is how you write an NC17
Great chapter Kins my dear friend…Full of passion and desire for one another..A Tibette coming together..I bet
Tina wont be in any great hurry to return to London
So looking forward to the next chapter and possibly some more getting to know one another even better.
Loved it sweetie….PPS…C xx
That is how you do it!! Now, that my dear friends is love at its best! I’m having computer issues too. PPS
First the Dallas Cowboys win and now this..I am having a lucky day..gosh I love this story…now im waiting for their reaction afterwards
A lots of butterflies inside my stomach now…. Thank you for a great update. Pps
Absolutely beautifully written. I too was as dizzy as Tina as I read. It’s so good to have you back, Kins.
Just amazing! Bette devoured Tina. Your writing is simply sublime. And your NC-17s are passionate but not tawdry.
Wow!!! Tina has finally had her curiosity sated and questions answered in a magnificent way by the one and only Bette Porter. She can now say, “damn, so that’s what it is all about and how I’m supposed to feel after. My curiosity has been peaked regarding Bette since Tina first stumbled upon her and the chalet. What in the world is she doing in such an isolated area or is it really isolated, what does she do for a living and what has she been saying to Tina’s father to give him peace of mind about Tina being hurt and lost in such an isolated area. So many questions about our one and only. Fantastic story as always Kins. So happy to have you back with us. Thanks for posting and have a great week.
Wonderful to have you back posting Kins! You are a talented storyteller and writer with no need to resort to bad language to produce a truly passionate post. Thank you.
Sorry for your computer problems but good that you have enough reserve Plans to post!
Hoping the various Plan Options enable a follow up Chapter asap!
WOW! What chapter. I loved it, absolutely loved it.
although I still love the love of Tibette.
It was passionate, hot, and very gentle and loving. I love the way you write.
I wonder what will happen next. maybe it is a turning point in their relationship? or an eternal reminder?
I hope Tina stays for a while, and she realizes that this is what was missing in her life so far!
It was great and I look forward to the next chapter.
Great test drive! I bet this was more than Tina was hoping for! And now what? Hope your pc feels better. Wonderful to have you back!
The snow around the house should have melted all
! because it was too hot inside.
Love that NC 17 was of great quality.
Let’s see how they will look from now.
10 stars.
I have no doubt that you are simply one of the greatest here. I so love this story. I know that you have a lot of surprises for us regarding Bette’s background and I’m so excited for it.
I love you. Haha! Please post soon!
Scribe
Oh.My.God. It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of these NC-17. Yikes and holy smokes…all in a good way.
I wonder if Bette works for Tina’s father….hmm. I can’t wait to read more.
T
wow! That was HOT Kins!
Keep it coming dear friend! Amazing as always.
Oh damn that was hot and beautiful