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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter five
“Why not,” Bette finally said seeming totally disinterested by the conversation. “It would certainly be more enriching than continual aimless travels.”
“Maybe…” Tina was suddenly pensive, “But at the risk of disagreeing with you, aimless travels can be enriching.”
Bette finally lifted her head from her work to wipe her forehead. Her face showed no discernible expression.
“That would depend on what you look for in life, of course.” The brunette shrugged her shoulder and resumed her task. “But idleness is like a drug, the effects soon wear off.”
Tina did not like the direction the conversation was taking. She wanted to stay clear of further criticisms of the way she had handled her adult life so far.
“How about you come out of this musty shed and we go amuse ourselves in the snow?” she asked her childish glee returning.
“And how do you propose we amuse ourselves?” Bette asked her concentrated frown leaving her face as soon as her eyes met Tina’s joyful gaze.
“We could… we could build a snowman!” Tina suggested, “So that when I’m gone, you’ll have something to remember me by.”
The blonde had her back to her host when she pronounced those words. A sudden sadness painted itself on her features. She realised that she’d rather not have to remember Bette. She wanted to stay here, she wanted her voice to be the first thing she heard in the morning and she wanted to keep on watching the brunette evolve in her surroundings…
Tina took a deep breath to settle herself before turning around to face the brunette who was approaching quickly with great stride in the fresh crunching snow.
“Ok… but for the snowman to resemble you, it’ll have to be a skinnier version of one.” Bette quipped.
“Skinny?… I know you don’t like me but you could really make an effort and keep those hurtful words to yourself!” Tina protested looking away hurt.
Bette smirked and took a step closer to the smaller woman. With her gloved hand she gently turned Tina’s head back to face her. “Who said I didn’t like you?”
Tina froze and looked at the brunette stunned but before she had time to gather her wits Bette had let go of her to start on their project.
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Sorry to hear about your computer problems. Glad you got to resort to plan D.
It was a absolutely 10 stars update.
I only didn’t see Tina’s first time with Bette like that coming, against a wall, but it shouldn’t be so surprising considering how Bette can be. Her second time was filled with tenderness.
I wonder how you are going to preceed with Tina returning to London and Bette staying behind.
I think Tina should mature and make something from her life, less partying, more working and less a daddy’s girl., before their is a healthy chance for a relationship between them.
oke, enough rambling, thanks for a great update!
….and that folks is how you write an NC17
Great chapter Kins my dear friend…Full of passion and desire for one another..A Tibette coming together..I bet
Tina wont be in any great hurry to return to London
So looking forward to the next chapter and possibly some more getting to know one another even better.
Loved it sweetie….PPS…C xx
That is how you do it!! Now, that my dear friends is love at its best! I’m having computer issues too. PPS
First the Dallas Cowboys win and now this..I am having a lucky day..gosh I love this story…now im waiting for their reaction afterwards
A lots of butterflies inside my stomach now…. Thank you for a great update. Pps
Absolutely beautifully written. I too was as dizzy as Tina as I read. It’s so good to have you back, Kins.
Just amazing! Bette devoured Tina. Your writing is simply sublime. And your NC-17s are passionate but not tawdry.
Wow!!! Tina has finally had her curiosity sated and questions answered in a magnificent way by the one and only Bette Porter. She can now say, “damn, so that’s what it is all about and how I’m supposed to feel after. My curiosity has been peaked regarding Bette since Tina first stumbled upon her and the chalet. What in the world is she doing in such an isolated area or is it really isolated, what does she do for a living and what has she been saying to Tina’s father to give him peace of mind about Tina being hurt and lost in such an isolated area. So many questions about our one and only. Fantastic story as always Kins. So happy to have you back with us. Thanks for posting and have a great week.
Wonderful to have you back posting Kins! You are a talented storyteller and writer with no need to resort to bad language to produce a truly passionate post. Thank you.
Sorry for your computer problems but good that you have enough reserve Plans to post!
Hoping the various Plan Options enable a follow up Chapter asap!
WOW! What chapter. I loved it, absolutely loved it.
although I still love the love of Tibette.
It was passionate, hot, and very gentle and loving. I love the way you write.
I wonder what will happen next. maybe it is a turning point in their relationship? or an eternal reminder?
I hope Tina stays for a while, and she realizes that this is what was missing in her life so far!
It was great and I look forward to the next chapter.
Great test drive! I bet this was more than Tina was hoping for! And now what? Hope your pc feels better. Wonderful to have you back!
The snow around the house should have melted all
! because it was too hot inside.
Love that NC 17 was of great quality.
Let’s see how they will look from now.
10 stars.
I have no doubt that you are simply one of the greatest here. I so love this story. I know that you have a lot of surprises for us regarding Bette’s background and I’m so excited for it.
I love you. Haha! Please post soon!
Scribe
Oh.My.God. It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of these NC-17. Yikes and holy smokes…all in a good way.
I wonder if Bette works for Tina’s father….hmm. I can’t wait to read more.
T
wow! That was HOT Kins!
Keep it coming dear friend! Amazing as always.
Oh damn that was hot and beautiful