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28 Days – (Chapter: One Track Mind)
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The arch of Spencer’s hips as she began to move to the cadence of Ashley’s slow thrusts. The way she ground her pelvis up into Ashley’s palm and whimpered at the slide of fingers deep inside her. Or the look of shock and awe on her face when Ashley curved her fingers up deftly, hitting that spot she knew was just there, and the smile that the brunette couldn’t help let spread across her face at the words that followed. ‘Oh my god. Oh fuck. I didn’t… I didn’t think I had…’, the swallowed gulp that followed as Ashley hit it again. The way she couldn’t help leaning down and whispering in the blonde’s ear. ‘You have. And god you’re sexy.’
Ashley fought the urge to grab her phone and call Spencer. Beg for her to come back over, ease this ache and burning. She had to stop thinking of this now, instead of a memory it was becoming akin to torture. Her cheeks flushed she pulled the pillow over her face trying desperately to think of anything but last night. Anything but Spencer, naked, breathing coming in short, shallow…
The amazing sensation of Spencer’s walls closing down on her fingers as wetness flooded. Her unhindered cries filling the air, Ashley’s name on the last breath.
Ashley felt herself keen inside. Running through her mind she tried frantically to think of anything else she could. Ice. Polar Bears. Igloos. Ice Water. Cold. Wet… oh god wet.
Lying next to Spencer as her breathing slowed. Knowing she’d caused the feelings that were coursing through the sexy body lying next to her. The incredible ache between her own legs intensified by the blonde’s orgasm. The sudden shock when she realized that Spencer had no intention of letting that ache go unchecked. The incredible feeling of Spencer’s hands on her body, mouth hot and heavy on hers. Ashley’s electric skin thrilling as Spencer’s mouth moved across it, hands busy and soft. The feel of Spencer’s fingers as she shyly emulated her lover, sliding them deep and causing Ashley to thrust her hips up to meet the delicate invasion. The choked off words as Spencer slid herself down the bed, shy but determined. ‘God Spence, you don’t have to. God, Fuck, I’m so close, you can…’. The way it was cut off by a sly tongue snaking out to taste her and the jolt that shot through the brunette’s body in response. The short time it took for the innocent, inexperienced girl to drive her so high she thought she’d die when she fell, and the incredible way that she held her as the fall came. The way that she’d flown to pieces, only to be put back together again in the arms of the girl she had fallen completely and utterly in love with.
Ashley gave up. She knew that no matter what she did for the rest of the night, she would think of nothing else.
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OUCH! Bannerman, maybe we should be asking “what are you feeding them?!” Too bad you’re obviously not our favorite pet [but that might change if you post some more :( ]. It’s a good thing you’re God.
goober, you know how to cut deep. you cut right to the bone ;-) I’m wounded here. But I still smell good.
I have to feel satisfied with a job well done. Not with the story but spreading the bannerman virus. Bannerman, I know you don’t smell, it’s just that your screen name has exactly the same cadence and well… it got stuck :). At least I have people all over the world singing your name.
bannerman…bannerman…what are they feeding you? Your definitely right. I cant get that out of my head. It’s hilarious! I love the smelly cat song and goober I cant see how you hate Friends. That is an amazing show. Anyway this story rocks. I love the flashbacks. You definitely pulled it off. Post more soon as it has become a habit of mine to sit at the computer all day and wait for your next update. You keep me glued to my chair clomle.
If you must know what ‘they’ (read: I) have bee feeding me, then I will tell you – the food of my ancestors… pasta. Love it, espesh as it’s a family recipe, passed down through generations… that’s bollocks, but never mind – it was a good meal. And yes, I love making people all over the world sing my name ;-) lol. Anyways, I shall write more when my muse returns – she’s buggered off for a few days, and ironically isn’t called Ashley or Spencer… wish she was called Mandy Musgrave though! Look fwd to reading more soon Clom!
HOLY bunches of Coco PUFFS!!! 50…100 Brownies!!! Their yours! All yours!! Dammit you’re good. I’m trying to make a legible sentence but..*deep breath* You had me laughing so hard: ‘Polar bears, Ice cubes, wet…’ LMAO. But now I blame you for my inability to speak. I think its my turn to go buy a BUCKETT of ICE! And here my family is coming over in less than 30 minutes and I’m totally out of it now thanks to Y-O-U! ;-) Ok so my NEXT bribe involves a Pixie stick and Jell-o! Theres always room for Jell-o! :-) :-P
Wow. These comments are out of control. Oh lord! Thy hymns are spreading across all nations! And, yes, sorry I can’t stand friends. Not my type of humor AT ALL. I’m more of a Strangers with Candy/Reno 911 type of girl.
OUCH! Bannerman, maybe we should be asking “what are you feeding them?!” Too bad you’re obviously not our favorite pet [but that might change if you post some more :( ]. It’s a good thing you’re God.
goober, you know how to cut deep. you cut right to the bone ;-) I’m wounded here. But I still smell good.
I have to feel satisfied with a job well done. Not with the story but spreading the bannerman virus. Bannerman, I know you don’t smell, it’s just that your screen name has exactly the same cadence and well… it got stuck :). At least I have people all over the world singing your name.
bannerman…bannerman…what are they feeding you? Your definitely right. I cant get that out of my head. It’s hilarious! I love the smelly cat song and goober I cant see how you hate Friends. That is an amazing show. Anyway this story rocks. I love the flashbacks. You definitely pulled it off. Post more soon as it has become a habit of mine to sit at the computer all day and wait for your next update. You keep me glued to my chair clomle.
If you must know what ‘they’ (read: I) have bee feeding me, then I will tell you – the food of my ancestors… pasta. Love it, espesh as it’s a family recipe, passed down through generations… that’s bollocks, but never mind – it was a good meal. And yes, I love making people all over the world sing my name ;-) lol. Anyways, I shall write more when my muse returns – she’s buggered off for a few days, and ironically isn’t called Ashley or Spencer… wish she was called Mandy Musgrave though! Look fwd to reading more soon Clom!
HOLY bunches of Coco PUFFS!!! 50…100 Brownies!!! Their yours! All yours!! Dammit you’re good. I’m trying to make a legible sentence but..*deep breath* You had me laughing so hard: ‘Polar bears, Ice cubes, wet…’ LMAO. But now I blame you for my inability to speak. I think its my turn to go buy a BUCKETT of ICE! And here my family is coming over in less than 30 minutes and I’m totally out of it now thanks to Y-O-U! ;-) Ok so my NEXT bribe involves a Pixie stick and Jell-o! Theres always room for Jell-o! :-) :-P
Wow. These comments are out of control. Oh lord! Thy hymns are spreading across all nations! And, yes, sorry I can’t stand friends. Not my type of humor AT ALL. I’m more of a Strangers with Candy/Reno 911 type of girl.
Best post yet. Your choice of flashbacks to denote the present was great. Ashley is in love, and you express this so wonderfully…now I feel in love, giddy, nervous, shy, and even though I have no ‘object of my affection,’I love it. :)
Best post yet. Your choice of flashbacks to denote the present was great. Ashley is in love, and you express this so wonderfully…now I feel in love, giddy, nervous, shy, and even though I have no ‘object of my affection,’I love it. :)
Ace, as usual! I like the flashback instead of blow by blow account of what happened – ’tis a good break to what is otherwise a linear narrative! bravo! I thought the idea was that Spencer was staying over, though? :-P therefore why was she not in Ashley’s bed for a repeat performance in the morning? Also, I don’t really like being associated with a song about a smelly cat; 1) because I’m not a cat, 2) because I smell lovely, and 3) cos I can feed myself with my exceptionally good cooking :-P in fact, I am the designated chef in my house – my housemates would starve without me ;-) would I be cheeky in ordering you to write more AS.SOON.AS!?
Ace, as usual! I like the flashback instead of blow by blow account of what happened – ’tis a good break to what is otherwise a linear narrative! bravo! I thought the idea was that Spencer was staying over, though? :-P therefore why was she not in Ashley’s bed for a repeat performance in the morning? Also, I don’t really like being associated with a song about a smelly cat; 1) because I’m not a cat, 2) because I smell lovely, and 3) cos I can feed myself with my exceptionally good cooking :-P in fact, I am the designated chef in my house – my housemates would starve without me ;-) would I be cheeky in ordering you to write more AS.SOON.AS!?
“Ice. Polar Bears. Igloos. Ice Water. Cold. Wet… oh god wet” that my friend is like the best line ever. Thanks to this site, my flatmate thinks i’m a psycho. cause i bust out laughing at random times. and i cant really explain what i’m laughing at. thanks for the encouraging? words too. and the vomit. that was just a metaphor….no real vomit here….i dread the day when a story like this one pops up in my attempt at a series. *blushes*
“Ice. Polar Bears. Igloos. Ice Water. Cold. Wet… oh god wet” that my friend is like the best line ever. Thanks to this site, my flatmate thinks i’m a psycho. cause i bust out laughing at random times. and i cant really explain what i’m laughing at. thanks for the encouraging? words too. and the vomit. that was just a metaphor….no real vomit here….i dread the day when a story like this one pops up in my attempt at a series. *blushes*
Yesss, I’m finally caught up on this story. Killer job so far. This Spencer is so different from your previous versions, just so… distant (though clearly not when it comes to the physical). I’m joyous for Ash ’cause she finally gets to experience love, but I’m also nervous for her, being in love with someone clearly experiencing issues, but who won’t open up emotionally. So yeah, again writing’s awesome, and I don’t know Andie, but I second the brownie and whatever the hell else you may need to keep the heart happy and fingers typing;>)
Yesss, I’m finally caught up on this story. Killer job so far. This Spencer is so different from your previous versions, just so… distant (though clearly not when it comes to the physical). I’m joyous for Ash ’cause she finally gets to experience love, but I’m also nervous for her, being in love with someone clearly experiencing issues, but who won’t open up emotionally. So yeah, again writing’s awesome, and I don’t know Andie, but I second the brownie and whatever the hell else you may need to keep the heart happy and fingers typing;>)
great post! i loved it! post more soon!
great post! i loved it! post more soon!
As always, brilliant update! Love the choice of flashbacks. I thought it was sweet that Ashley didn’t want to cheapen the memories, too. But I’m nervous for the upcoming drama…And btw, that damn smelly cat song stuck in my head all…freaking…night!
As always, brilliant update! Love the choice of flashbacks. I thought it was sweet that Ashley didn’t want to cheapen the memories, too. But I’m nervous for the upcoming drama…And btw, that damn smelly cat song stuck in my head all…freaking…night!
You’re a horrible person, you know that? Making me read that at work. Try as I might to avoid it, I see a post and read it without thinking or checking the damn rating. Oops. You’re like freaking Pringles. Once you pop, you can’t stop. Or maybe that’s more Ashley’s problem. And what a wonderful problem it is. :) Loved it. Loved the flashbacks and the thoughts that surrounded them. Much more sincere than just going through the action. I adore it. More than Circles, which surprises me, because I thought that was the toppest of all notches…and am I a horrible person for not knowing the smelly cat song? I HATE Friends with the heat of a thousand suns and avoid everything connected to it. Though the thought of bannerman as a smelly cat (and bannerman’s subsequent response) did make me giggle. :D
You’re a horrible person, you know that? Making me read that at work. Try as I might to avoid it, I see a post and read it without thinking or checking the damn rating. Oops. You’re like freaking Pringles. Once you pop, you can’t stop. Or maybe that’s more Ashley’s problem. And what a wonderful problem it is. :) Loved it. Loved the flashbacks and the thoughts that surrounded them. Much more sincere than just going through the action. I adore it. More than Circles, which surprises me, because I thought that was the toppest of all notches…and am I a horrible person for not knowing the smelly cat song? I HATE Friends with the heat of a thousand suns and avoid everything connected to it. Though the thought of bannerman as a smelly cat (and bannerman’s subsequent response) did make me giggle. :D
Wow i like the flashback it was different but in a good way. Very exciting. I love your storys. I also like the way ashley and spencer are with one another.
Wow i like the flashback it was different but in a good way. Very exciting. I love your storys. I also like the way ashley and spencer are with one another.
I love your smut. How you build up to it is amazing…and then you come in with the flashback idea. VERY NICE. Especially because I can relate to all those feelings. Ever try working with people when all you can do is replay the previous nights sexual endeavours over and over again? OM MAN so brutal…let’s just say COLD SHOWER! Anyway great story…can’t wait for drama! Cheers
I love your smut. How you build up to it is amazing…and then you come in with the flashback idea. VERY NICE. Especially because I can relate to all those feelings. Ever try working with people when all you can do is replay the previous nights sexual endeavours over and over again? OM MAN so brutal…let’s just say COLD SHOWER! Anyway great story…can’t wait for drama! Cheers
Exceptionally well written smut? Check! Its funny, I showered before reading this and after I read it I suddenly felt the need to go back and take another cold one, the temperature in the room went up a couple degrees while I read this, that’s for sure. Brilliance! Can’t wait for the drama!
Exceptionally well written smut? Check! Its funny, I showered before reading this and after I read it I suddenly felt the need to go back and take another cold one, the temperature in the room went up a couple degrees while I read this, that’s for sure. Brilliance! Can’t wait for the drama!
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wow….erm…okay. Im ready for drama. I planned on like, idk, NOT reading this, but then i wanted to see if there was any drama in it. But there wasnt. Lol. Anyways, thnx for pre-editing. I think i have this next one on my own, but if you want, i’ll still send you a copy early. it wont be done until tomorrow, so yeah. let me know.
wow….erm…okay. Im ready for drama. I planned on like, idk, NOT reading this, but then i wanted to see if there was any drama in it. But there wasnt. Lol. Anyways, thnx for pre-editing. I think i have this next one on my own, but if you want, i’ll still send you a copy early. it wont be done until tomorrow, so yeah. let me know.
Thought I would give the lyrics to smelly cat so all could have the feel…..Great post as always. Truly looking forward to updates on the new one also.Smelly Cat*Chorus*Smelly cat, smelly catWhat are they feeding you?Smelly cat, smelly catIt’s not your faultThey won’t take you to the vetYou’re obviously not their favorite petYou may not be a bed of rosesAnd you’re no friend to those with noses*Repeat Chorus*
Thought I would give the lyrics to smelly cat so all could have the feel…..Great post as always. Truly looking forward to updates on the new one also.Smelly Cat*Chorus*Smelly cat, smelly catWhat are they feeding you?Smelly cat, smelly catIt’s not your faultThey won’t take you to the vetYou’re obviously not their favorite petYou may not be a bed of rosesAnd you’re no friend to those with noses*Repeat Chorus*
yo! lol i love this story soo much..lol k so i have never commented on it b4..totally not my fault..lmao..my computer is dumb as hell and everytime i go to this site now it says the internet explorer encounterd a problem..so now my cuzin is at work and i snook on her computer(she lives with me) yea…and i just been catchin up on fanfics kinda..but i have been reading all along..just not commenting because i read them on my sidekick(its like a phone/internet/camera/yea it has a keyboard) incase u didnt kno..but it wouldnt let me comment on there either..so here i am tellin u how much i love ur story..oh yea another thing that kept me from commenting is i just got out of a break-up with my first girlfriend…we all kno how that can be. anywayz..i probly wont comment for about another 20 posts.(sorry) lol again not my fault..but just though id let u kno i love the story..oh and ppls who have read my story..just to let u kno i have completely lost interest in my own story..so moslikely its over..lmao..k so anyone got any questions im constantly on aim..damn addicting thing..my s/n is xxsweetchuriesxx…hit me up..alright post more soon..much lovepeace*MoNiKa*
yo! lol i love this story soo much..lol k so i have never commented on it b4..totally not my fault..lmao..my computer is dumb as hell and everytime i go to this site now it says the internet explorer encounterd a problem..so now my cuzin is at work and i snook on her computer(she lives with me) yea…and i just been catchin up on fanfics kinda..but i have been reading all along..just not commenting because i read them on my sidekick(its like a phone/internet/camera/yea it has a keyboard) incase u didnt kno..but it wouldnt let me comment on there either..so here i am tellin u how much i love ur story..oh yea another thing that kept me from commenting is i just got out of a break-up with my first girlfriend…we all kno how that can be. anywayz..i probly wont comment for about another 20 posts.(sorry) lol again not my fault..but just though id let u kno i love the story..oh and ppls who have read my story..just to let u kno i have completely lost interest in my own story..so moslikely its over..lmao..k so anyone got any questions im constantly on aim..damn addicting thing..my s/n is xxsweetchuriesxx…hit me up..alright post more soon..much lovepeace*MoNiKa*
weeoooaaahh… ur gifted, dudette! did u know u have a huge fanbase?? well, i didnt know, i just found ur fics today. wooops. *ducks from random slaps from strangers*
weeoooaaahh… ur gifted, dudette! did u know u have a huge fanbase?? well, i didnt know, i just found ur fics today. wooops. *ducks from random slaps from strangers*