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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 15)
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I smiled at her, contemplating what she had said. It was true… when we were together, it was amazing. Simply put. So why did I always have to remind myself of our break-up? Why was I letting the negative interfere with my memories of the positive?
"Spence?"
"Yeah?"
"What are you thinking?" she asked. I looked up at her and smiled again.
“Who are you and what have you done with Ashley Davies?” I said, only half-joking. She laughed and patted my knee.
“The Ashley Davies you knew grew up a little bit.”
“A little bit?”
“Yeah, just a little. I’m still the same charming girl I always was,” she said, tilting her chin towards the ceiling with a smile.
“Which is basically your own personal way of saying you still have the libido of a 13 year old boy?” I teased.
“Hey! I resent that! And anyway, it’s 14 now.”
“Oh, sorry,” I joked. “But I’m glad you haven’t changed that much… I didn’t really mind you in high school.”
“Yeah, I didn’t mind you either,” she smiled.
“Remember when we first met? I mean, like, really met. That time in the gym?”
“Of course I do. Because I was in love with you, like, two hours later,” she said with a laugh.
“Really?”
“Come on, Spence, I’ve told you that before. Besides, it doesn’t take that long to fall in love with you…” I blushed again, thinking that my face might as well just stay red until she left. That would make it easier, I guess.
“Same with you,” I told her. “Which is why I can’t believe I ever left L.A.”
“Spencer, stop… just let it go, alright? It doesn’t matter… I mean, look at where we are right now.”
“Where are we?” I blurted out. My question obviously threw her a little off guard. But I had the right to ask it, after the way she acted around me all night… almost like we were a couple again. I was confused, and if anyone knew why, it would be her. She thought it over for a few moments.
“Well… you’re in New York and I’m in L.A… there aren’t many other places we can be.”
“I know.” I dropped my head, ashamed at my brief bout of optimism. But she lifted it with a finger she’d placed under my chin.
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and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!