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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 15)
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“But, you know… right now… we’re both here… so… maybe…” I didn’t catch the rest of what she said. I was concentrating too intently on the way that with every word, she was leaning in closer and closer to me. So intently, in fact, that when I felt her hand cup my cheek, I jumped in surprise. That didn’t seem to phase her. Our eyes remained locked until the moment that I felt her lips gently, delicately, almost barely make contact with mine. When the contact was over, I opened my eyes again, hoping to communicate to her that I was okay with it. Whether or not she read that, I’ll never know. But she leaned in again, planting a slightly less delicate kiss on my lips. I wished I could have responded better, but I was too focused on the fact that we were truly kissing to do anything else remotely thoughtful. Few words could properly describe what I was feeling at the moment. Four years. Four long years and we were kissing each other within 2 days.
As if she could actually sense what I was thinking, she pulled away again. Familiar emotions were written all over her face (and mine too, I expected).
“Is this okay?” she asked.
“Yeah,” I unintentionally whispered. She grinned and gently caressed my cheek with her thumb. This time, I moved closer to her and initiated the contact. My heart had beaten out my brain for control and within moments, my hands were tangled up in her brown locks… not that she seemed to mind. She wrapped an arm around my waist, pulling me even more towards her as I felt her tongue lightly beg for entrance; who was I to deny it? As time drew on, the kiss only became more heated. At one point, I felt her hands slide underneath my shirt. While I wanted nothing more than to have her, all of her again, I had to stop it. I broke apart, breathless.
“Ash…”
“Too much, I know,” she spoke with bruised lips.
“It’s not that I don’t want to… it’s just…”
“We can’t,” she said.
“Right.” By this point, you could probably cut the tension in the air with a knife. My heart was pounding, and I hoped I wasn’t about to pass out or something.
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and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
and a happy thanksgiving to you too! :)!
awesome….nuff said!!
*Corkscrews cape a’flying* Woah, what a does. Our emotions can get the best of us sometimes. I suppose its a good thing that i’m Superman and c-can’t g-g-get d-d-distract–ed b-by some-some–thing li-like beau-beautiful wri-writin-g. I smell kryptonite. M’lady, i need to fly away, while I can still stand *swoosh*
Yay they finally kissed =] I have a feeling things might get a little more complicated now. Great chapter! Update soon!
God damn. You are good. It’s hard to believe a normal person can write like that. Have you been biten by a radioactive spider lately? Been exposed to toxic chemicals? I don’t know what to think. Of course if you WERE biten and became super human that would be cool. And it would explain the phenonmanal writing. But I bet you’d be able to write a great story with out the help of some tiny arachnid. Please keep posting. Please. I need you to. It’s a passion, a craving, an urge. Post, post, post! Please/ And I do realize I sound super needy. Even more needy than Spencer. That girl is desperate for Ashley like I’m desperate for an update. Love you. Thx in advance. =)
Uh. Was a simple kiss supposed to make my heart beat three times faster. I must remember never to read your stories hooked up to a heart monitor or I may find myself booked in for a pacemaker operation. I would like to say that I saw barely_breathing’s name on the comment and thought, ‘yup, i’m barely breathing’. You are amazing. This line in particular, caught my eye: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” Nice shout out to the story name, and yes, we noticed :) You’re winding me up in this story and it’s getting tighter. Is it too much to ask for more kisses? I know you’ll deliver :) LOVE YOUR WORK!
okay.definitely the best way to go.lovelovelove
(^o^)/ wow !! my heart just went 3 times faster !! specially te moment Spence & Ash kissed !! luv it !! Post Post, plz Post soon….
*refocuses eyes and picks jaw up off the floor* Alright, so during that entire post I was crouched about 3 inches away from my computer screen. Amazing how your writing keeps doing that. Awesome stuff.
Loving this chapter! And gutted I haven’t read the previous ones and its to late to now :( but i will soon! pms! :)
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
They finally kissed. Now i want them to get there freak on and keep it on. PMs
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
ohh they should so find a way to be together cos they are so meant to be with each other. and i absolutely love this line as well: “When I was with her, I started to feel like a complete person again.” just sensational!! PMS!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!
I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!! I am glad that you updated this story and I can’t wait to see what you will do next!!!! PMS and I do hope that you had a GREAT THANKSGIVING!!!!