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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 25)
“The more of them you have, the less you start to like them,” she joked. “And I’m so not looking forward to this one.”
“Really?”
“Really really.”
“Maybe it won’t be as bad as you think it will.”
“Doubt it,” she replied.
“Well, um… I got you a present.”
“Seriously?”
“Yup.”
“You didn’t have to, Spence,” she said. I could hear that her voice had gotten a little lighter, a bit happier.
“I know, but I wanted to. You should be getting it tomorrow… I know your birthday isn’t until Monday, but I figured you might want it a bit earlier than that.”
“Really? What is it?” she asked excitedly.
“It’s a surprise. Aiden’s gonna call you tomorrow and take you to get it. Make sure you listen to whatever he says.”
“Come on, tell me!”
“Nope!” I insisted.
“Please?”
“Nuh uh.”
“To get it… is it alive? Did you get me a puppy?!” she asked.
“Maybe… maybe not.”
“Ugh, you’re impossible!” she said. Just to throw her off, I added a line in there.
“Call me when you get it, okay?”
“Alright. God, Spence, you got me all worked up now.” Maybe my mind was in the wrong place, but that could mean so many different things; I guess she caught on. “I mean… excited. Like… for the gift.”
“Yeah, I know.”
“Even though I really just wish you were coming,” she added. Her voice dropped a bit. “I miss you so much, Spence.”
“I miss you, too.”
“Maybe it’s ridiculous, you know… because, like, we just started talking again. But… I don’t know. I can’t help it,” she said. I could hear her voice breaking and tears began to fill my eyes too. I wanted to tell her so, so badly. I hated hearing her like this.
“Ash… it’s not ridiculous at all,” I told her softly. “I’m… I’m gonna come to L.A. I’ll take a couple days off work and I’ll come. Next week.”
“You don’t have to do that.”
“But I will.” A rather uncomfortable silence filled the conversation. It took all of my strength not to fold and tell her the truth.
“Do you mean that?”
“Yes. You make it sound like I don’t want to see you or something, Ash. And that’s not the case at all.”
“I’m sorry. I’m just… kind of mixed up right now, I guess.”
“You don’t have to apologize,” I assured her.
“I should go. I’ll… call you tomorrow, or something.”
Great. Now both Michelle and Ashley were extremely unhappy. Is this what I get for trying to surprise someone?
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clomle44 says
TEASE!
cheeralstar13 says
Ahh!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! Ok so enough filler chapters and get to the good stuff! Lol. UD SOON!!!
redglitter says
Ok so I’ve NEVER left a comment before but I just had to write and say that I love love love this story! :D
jazzy89 says
you know you COULD leave the update for tomorrow today!!!! like right now!!! that update just killed me and I feel as needy as Ashley. Great job. PMS!!!!!!!(by soon I mean now!!)
hdgallant says
I`m so excited to see the next chapter. I cant wait untill ashley see spencer again. great chapter. PMS
Kyden says
you cant go on break and leave us that little of a chapter that is plain mean
PM76 says
must.post.more.dying…
ngasi_lei says
*SWOOSH* that so made my day m’lady. That was fantastic. I’m telling you that girl is from Krypton. She’s got to be my long lost sister. Mischelle however, not from krypton. Had no patience. But we love her anyway, because she keeps us on her toes. I cant wait for your next update. Have a safe holiday, and call me if there is any trouble. I am the man of steel after all *Loop-the-loops, with a grandeous swish*
tylo says
grrrrrrrrrrrrrr post now longer
NotTwinny says
Oh Jesus! Just post the surprise already. I need to see ashely’s reaction. I NEED TO! I mean it. If I don’t see it with in 24 hours of posting this comment then I will hunt you down and force you to right it. I’m so ancy right now. I’m gonna go try and not pee my pants. Love!
clomle44 says
TEASE!
cheeralstar13 says
Ahh!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! Ok so enough filler chapters and get to the good stuff! Lol. UD SOON!!!
redglitter says
Ok so I’ve NEVER left a comment before but I just had to write and say that I love love love this story! :D
jazzy89 says
you know you COULD leave the update for tomorrow today!!!! like right now!!! that update just killed me and I feel as needy as Ashley. Great job. PMS!!!!!!!(by soon I mean now!!)
hdgallant says
I`m so excited to see the next chapter. I cant wait untill ashley see spencer again. great chapter. PMS
Kyden says
you cant go on break and leave us that little of a chapter that is plain mean
PM76 says
must.post.more.dying…
ngasi_lei says
*SWOOSH* that so made my day m’lady. That was fantastic. I’m telling you that girl is from Krypton. She’s got to be my long lost sister. Mischelle however, not from krypton. Had no patience. But we love her anyway, because she keeps us on her toes. I cant wait for your next update. Have a safe holiday, and call me if there is any trouble. I am the man of steel after all *Loop-the-loops, with a grandeous swish*
tylo says
grrrrrrrrrrrrrr post now longer
NotTwinny says
Oh Jesus! Just post the surprise already. I need to see ashely’s reaction. I NEED TO! I mean it. If I don’t see it with in 24 hours of posting this comment then I will hunt you down and force you to right it. I’m so ancy right now. I’m gonna go try and not pee my pants. Love!
martha5 says
your killing me here with all your suspense and damned anticipation, I’m having severe problems not screaming at the moment. I just want the next one!
martha5 says
your killing me here with all your suspense and damned anticipation, I’m having severe problems not screaming at the moment. I just want the next one!
_barely_breathing_ says
Noo! i soo wanted spencer to go to LA in this chapter lol i cant wait for them to see each other again! Great chapter! Update soon!
_barely_breathing_ says
Noo! i soo wanted spencer to go to LA in this chapter lol i cant wait for them to see each other again! Great chapter! Update soon!
slayerfan101 says
awww poor ash. she sounds like a lost puppy. i love your story so so much. the pace and the storyline is so believable and beautiful. :D
slayerfan101 says
awww poor ash. she sounds like a lost puppy. i love your story so so much. the pace and the storyline is so believable and beautiful. :D