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    Save Tonight – (Chapter: 5. Truths and Decisions)

    I could feel my face grow hot and I could actually see it getting redder when I looked down.

    “Did I miss something?” he asks again to Kyla this time

    “No babe, Leighton was just weird and Ashley happened to be in the right place” she answered

    I didn’t make eye contact with everyone but I could feel Ashley staring at me quietly trying to figure me out. We all finally sat around the table and they were just talking about random things while I sat silently listening.

    “Does anyone wanna go to the arcade room?” Ashley asked

    “Not really” Aiden and Kyla said at the same time

    “Nah” Hunter said while he was looking at his phone

    “You’re a child” Blake replied

    “Spence?” Ashley asked her eyes finally landing on mine

    “Sure” I forced a smile, I was still a little shaken up from Aiden coming close to figuring this whole charade out.

    It amazes me that everyone knows but him and It amazes me that no one has slipped up and said anything.

    Ashley stood up and I followed her into one of the game rooms, it was empty. Of course it was, it was technically closed and so was the pool but Aiden got the key to the gate.

    “Whatdya wanna play?” I asked in a better mood that I was now alone with her

    “What are you not good at?” She asks with a smirk playing on her lips

    “I’m good at everything”

    She pondered for a minute, “I think with the right distraction you would crumble”

    “Is that a challenge?”

    “You up for it?” the smirk was getting bigger

    I walked over to her and pushed my body firmly up against hers. I brought my lips inches from hers, her eyes slammed shut and she stopped breathing. With my lips barely touching hers I traced them up her cheek and to her ear.

    “Bring it” I whispered and moved away from her

    Her eyes were still shut, when she opened them I was smiling at her with my arms crossed.

    “You’re gonna pay for that” she looked around the room “let’s try your luck at racing”

    I shrugged, “makes no difference to me”

    “we’ll see” she said under her breath but I totally caught her

    Comments

    1. oh my freaking god. seriously? how the hell could you… well okay so it’s not ended but still!?!? I really really hope you are already writing the beginning of the next part because that was just the cliffhanger of cliffhangers! this story is soooooooo freaking good so yea you had better be working! or we’ll send stix after you!

    2. so I’m guessing spence saying that made ash realize she feels the same and that made the whole leaving thing too real for her to cope with… but I could be wrong. good god almighty see you have me double commenting (who knows maybe they’ll be another after I reread this masterpiece). because I really don’t think that ash just wants some action because otherwise she would have continued so yea…. ok really POST MORE SOOOOOOON!

    3. okay i gotta say, that is an equal mix of the best thing ever and the worst.. i mean, they FINALLY got together, they were finally going to BE together, spencer says i love you and ashley WALKS OUT!??!!?!? what the hell!?!? i dont know whether to be happy that you posted or sad that it ended like this.. all i can say is that never the less it was an awesome chapter and i REALLY hope that you start posting part 2 soon and by soon i mean like right now.. and that they get together and .. well ya.. that they get together! pms pleaaassee!!!

    4. Thank you sooooo much for posting! I’m glad I didn’t have to do what the monks do and pull a hunger strike. This was much easier! I loved it! Loved it! I’m also very very happy that this isn’t the end of the story or else we’d be in a fight right now! Start writing the next part so I can continue posting in normal fequencey! I love my power of you and will continue to be selfish ;)

    5. Yes, I have to agree. I’m so into this story it’s insane! So, what happens next? Do you even know….I freakin’ hope so. Now get back to work….pleeease! lol!

    6. aaaahhhhh!!! thats frustration and elation in case youre wondering :) so good!!! oh and “Pause. Time out…”- i really liked that effect- playing with the timeline like that at just the right moment. it reminded me of a tv show, or i think a couple of shows have had the main character do or say that… or movies??? suddenly i have 2 names in my head- parker lewis and ferris bueller… anyway, still aaaaahhhhh!!! :) pmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmsppmspmsppmspmspmspms……pmspmspmspmspmpmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspms… but no pressure :)

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